Elemental Clockwork | Elemental Chronometer

[joebob777]

The text on the card needs to match the text in the table

I like the card overall, though it might be too much quanta generation at the same time.

Also, there's an in game cycle used in the bazaar you might use, but the current cycle works too

at max speed, it will be equivalent to 6 quantum pillars, for about 2 per pillar, you could play that much at the first turn

[ddevans96]

On a sidenote, I made art for the Entangling Roots (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,15093.0.html), and I saw later that you were willing to do it too. Do you have any news from card author ?

I couldn't get what I had in my head to look right on the screen. I was still working on it, but he can use your art if he wants

[Kuroaitou]

CURATOR COMMENT
-Please type in the word, 'Gravity', in the ELEMENT section of the table for both cards. means Gravity quanta, not the element Gravity, and the two are not interchangeable
-Leave the ATK|HP section of the table blank if the card is not a creature (do not put the term 'N/A' in there, as the letters can refer to variable stats like Scarab's Swarm ability)
-Remove the smiley face and 'Me' from the ART section of the table, and please put in your forum name (Replace 'Me ' with 'Boret')


I'll be honest - I'm not gonna try to analyze this card since everyone else already has, but the art and thought-process you've put behind this makes me think that it'll get far in the polls. Is this your first card idea - because it's quite fantastic.

(In the future though, you may have to think of more creative ways to shorten the text so that it fits onto a card in 4 lines or less, but I'll let it slide this time) 

[Boret]

ddevans96: I see. I hope that you can finish it too, so the author will decide about it, and the other art can be used by another card, then?

Kuroaitou: Changes are done. Thanks for comments, I know description is a bit long, but I couldn't think of a shorter one.
And yes, this is my first card idea, so let's see how far it can get...

[Boret]

Yeah, it finally made it into the Crucible (totally forgot to check  )
Thanks for people who helped me on this topic (and for people who voted for this card )

[TheCrazyMango]

Question, why is that a gravity card? it seems more like a time card imo.

[OldTrees]

Question, why is that a gravity card? it seems more like a time card imo.

Gravity is the opposite Element from Entropy
Entropy is the Element of luck (good and/or bad) and chaos
Therefore Gravity is the Element of Order
The quanta produced is highly ordered.

[TheCrazyMango]

Question, why is that a gravity card? it seems more like a time card imo.

Gravity is the opposite Element from Entropy
Entropy is the Element of luck (good and/or bad) and chaos
Therefore Gravity is the Element of Order
The quanta produced is highly ordered.

this card is elemental Clockwork Elemental Chrono]meter. its skill is called speed up All of these things sound more like Time than gravity

[OldTrees]

Question, why is that a gravity card? it seems more like a time card imo.

Gravity is the opposite Element from Entropy
Entropy is the Element of luck (good and/or bad) and chaos
Therefore Gravity is the Element of Order
The quanta produced is highly ordered.

this card is elemental Clockwork Elemental Chrono]meter. its skill is called speed up All of these things sound more like Time than gravity

I agree that the name and activated skill are very Time ish
I think that the automatic effect is very Gravity ish
As such I think it fits best as either a Gravity card with a Time skill (which means it will cost 4|3 +8 total)
or as a mono Time card (which means it will cost 12|11 total)

All in all I felt the total cost 8 +4|3 is slightly more thematically accurate than 12|11 .
Which is why I suggested it be a duo card. However it will still be great as a Mono card.

[TheCrazyMango]

Question, why is that a gravity card? it seems more like a time card imo.

Gravity is the opposite Element from Entropy
Entropy is the Element of luck (good and/or bad) and chaos
Therefore Gravity is the Element of Order
The quanta produced is highly ordered.

this card is elemental Clockwork Elemental Chrono]meter. its skill is called speed up All of these things sound more like Time than gravity

I agree that the name and activated skill are very Time ish
I think that the automatic effect is very Gravity ish
As such I think it fits best as either a Gravity card with a Time skill (which means it will cost 4|3 +8 total)
or as a mono Time card (which means it will cost 12|11 total)

All in all I felt the total cost 8 +4|3 is slightly more thematically accurate than 12|11 .
Which is why I suggested it be a duo card. However it will still be great as a Mono card.

oh ok. so since nova creates 1 quanta of each element(thats stable and even) it would fit gravity more than entropy.

[OldTrees]

Question, why is that a gravity card? it seems more like a time card imo.

Gravity is the opposite Element from Entropy
Entropy is the Element of luck (good and/or bad) and chaos
Therefore Gravity is the Element of Order
The quanta produced is highly ordered.

this card is elemental Clockwork Elemental Chrono]meter. its skill is called speed up All of these things sound more like Time than gravity

I agree that the name and activated skill are very Time ish
I think that the automatic effect is very Gravity ish
As such I think it fits best as either a Gravity card with a Time skill (which means it will cost 4|3 +8 total)
or as a mono Time card (which means it will cost 12|11 total)

All in all I felt the total cost 8 +4|3 is slightly more thematically accurate than 12|11 .
Which is why I suggested it be a duo card. However it will still be great as a Mono card.

oh ok. so since nova creates 1 quanta of each element(thats stable and even) it would fit gravity more than entropy.

That is a good point Entropy v Gravity probably is not Order vs Chaos. I could still be order(different meaning to order) vs entropy. In this case stable and even is a sign of entropy but structured like a sequence would order.

[johannhowitzer]

The card text needs to be fixed - it says  , but the order on the clock face and in the notes is  .