Orb of Malice | Orb of Desolation

[yumeku]

NAME: Orb of Malice ELEMENT: Darkness COST: 3 TYPE: Permanent ATK|HP: TEXT: Inflicts damage when a spell is used. Damage is based on spell cost.	NAME: Orb of Desolation ELEMENT: Darkness COST: 3 TYPE: Permanent ATK|HP: TEXT: Inflicts damage when a creature ability is used. Damage is based on ability cost.

ART: Yumeku IDEA: Yumeku NOTES: Functionality : Spell control - Ability control   - Orb affects both owner and opponent so use it wisely.     Damage is dealt to the player if he uses any spell/ability on his turn.     Damage stacks depending on the number of Malice/Desolation orbs. * I need a shorter card name (I tried misery and corruption but those words were already used in other cards) SERIES: Yumeku Series (  Orb of Malice | Orb of Desolation (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,32139.0.html),  Sneaky Sneaky | Sneaky Sneak  (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,32256.new.html#new), Weaken | Enfeeble  (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,32604.12.html))

previous editions :
(maybe op)
Orb of Malice - Damage enemy each time enemy uses a spell. Damage is based on spell cost
Orb of Desolation - Damage enemy each time enemy creature uses an ability. Damage is based on ability cost

Orb of Malice - inflict 3 damage to enemy and 1 to owner each time a spell is used.
Orb of Desolation - inflict 3 damage to enemy and 1 to owner each time a creature ability is used.

[Pineapple]

Formatting:
Element should say "Darkness"
Cost should say "2 "
Thread title should have spaces on both sides of the "|", so that it says "Oblivion | Corruption"
You should change the card image for the unupgraded to say "everytime opponent uses a spell" and add "damage is cumulative" in the Text for the unupgraded version so that the table matches the card images exactly.

Mechanics:
May be overpowered, mostly because the opponent has no way to counter damage (without just not playing spells, of course), maybe make it a permanent with an ability that toggles between spell and abilities? This way, it'll be destroy-able (if the opponent is willing to take damage to destroy it).
The introduction of this card would shift the meta-game a lot, since players would be encouraged to have both useful abilities and useful spells in order to counter this one card. Maybe that's too large an impact for a single card?

[yumeku]

Formatting:
Element should say "Darkness"
Cost should say "2 "
Thread title should have spaces on both sides of the "|", so that it says "Oblivion | Corruption"
You should change the card image for the unupgraded to say "everytime opponent uses a spell" and add "damage is cumulative" in the Text for the unupgraded version so that the table matches the card images exactly.

Mechanics:
May be overpowered, mostly because the opponent has no way to counter damage (without just not playing spells, of course), maybe make it a permanent with an ability that toggles between spell and abilities? This way, it'll be destroy-able (if the opponent is willing to take damage to destroy it).
The introduction of this card would shift the meta-game a lot, since players would be encouraged to have both useful abilities and useful spells in order to counter this one card. Maybe that's too large an impact for a single card?

Wil it be ok if i make it a permanent ?..

my proposed permanent is
oblivion = 4 damage to both players hp every time they use a spell
corruption = 4 damage to both players hp every time a creature uses an ablity
damage stacks depending on the number of permanents

[Pineapple]

IDK, personally, I'd decrease the cost and damage so that six copies in a deck aren't as powerful.

[Scaredgirl]

Hmm.. yea not bad. Have you considered making it so that the damage done depends on the cost of the skill (or spell) used? Something like that might be a bit more interesting than just the default 4 damage. I don't know..

[yumeku]

Hmm.. yea not bad. Have you considered making it so that the damage done depends on the cost of the skill (or spell) used? Something like that might be a bit more interesting than just the default 4 damage. I don't know..

made changes, umm how about this..

[thousandsunny]

maybe you can change the upgrade to -2 and -1 instead of -3 | -1 ,that would be balanced i think because of the devourer thing ya know(burrow and unburrow),  seriously?  It hurts you while it hurts your opponent? that's wicked dude,  then the opponent can heal while damaging you, this could also be used as an advantage by your enemy. This one could give way to new decks and strategies.

change the upgrade to -2 -1 i feel like its op if its -3
if possible make the circle smaller in your art I'm sure it would look beter

  Always Darkness

[Naesala]

I'd make it relative to the card. Perhaps damage to opponent is X where X=quanta cost for the card

[thousandsunny]

I'd make it relative to the card. Perhaps damage to opponent is X where X=quanta cost for the card

hes right that way you can take the -1 part

[yumeku]

made changes, This is the new spell - ability control card.

[thousandsunny]

I think its ready for lv 1?

[Nepycros]

Miracle...?