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Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg140878#msg140878
« on: August 17, 2010, 10:14:55 pm »
Free Writing Competition:
Poetry in the Spirit of Elements
Competition has Ended
Objective:
- Write a Article of Poetry based on the games opening text.
- Have the result in such a nature that a feeling of conflict, such that the game gives, is felt.
- If a cutscreen was given in Elements the Game, the piece could be used as a presented literary for the game player.
- Contestents are encouraged not to humanise the Elemental even though, you as the player are human, but rather "Elementalise" the feeling for the Human reader.

Quote from: www.elementsthegame.com
"The player is an elemental, a spirit composed of an element; elements are the fundamental building blocks of nature. Each elemental has an arsenal of skills that can be used in a duel against another elemental."
Rules:
- Post the final article in this topic in plain english text.
- You may edit the result up until the final moment. Edits after the timeout will void the entry.
- If using a non-rythmic poetic form, reference that form. Ie Haiku
- Along with the text copy of the poetry, you may add or link to a visual demonstration, illustration, music, song, audio reading of, alternate language variant, or other presentation media to accentuate the feel of your work. Forum rules apply to this linking so be aware of inadvertant ads or content in your link.
- You may refer to any in-game card or effect but not as a game element itself
- Competiton period is 14 days
- The winner will recieve a cool forum icon
- The final text work is offered to Zanzarino Design for use in Elements the Game or its related products in a non-limiting open ended royalty free licence. 
- Post questions here in this topic
- Minimum 50 words including title






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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg143819#msg143819
« Reply #1 on: August 22, 2010, 06:17:43 am »
Kaels Example Entry


Lightwielder
By Kael Hate

I am a being, of the Light.
Energy of the sun, is at my call.
To the enemy, I take the fight.
Ready, to make them fall.

Bright Morningstar, as my sword.
With Air, I make it fly.
With immaterialism, as its ward.
It serves, never will it die.

With Fire, as my partner.
And Deflagration, sundering tower.
Slaying, elemental brother.
I’ll claim, the holy power.




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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg143827#msg143827
« Reply #2 on: August 22, 2010, 06:42:29 am »
Poetry?! :o

Gah. If I try to write poetry, my OCD forces me to try to make EVERYTHING RHYME, but I'm just no good at rhyming. :-\

So I guess I'll sit this one out...
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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg143830#msg143830
« Reply #3 on: August 22, 2010, 06:46:50 am »
At first I thought I would be super cool and do the whole audio commentary thing, but then I realized it.  I cannot write poetry.  I'll watch this competition, but competing in it I will not.
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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg143836#msg143836
« Reply #4 on: August 22, 2010, 07:04:58 am »
Small question: by 'game mechanic', you can say, reference the idea of Eternity as a weapon belonging to Time, but you can't specify the mechanic of the card itself (ability to rewind creatures), correct?


Otherwise, reserved for my poem. (Oh god, it's going to be terrible, but I'll give it a shot)

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg143838#msg143838
« Reply #5 on: August 22, 2010, 07:18:01 am »
If we do Haikus, we can do more then 1 right? It's really hard to fit 50 words into 17 syllables...

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg143840#msg143840
« Reply #6 on: August 22, 2010, 07:22:35 am »
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The final text work is offered to Zanzarino Design for use in Elements the Game or its related products in a non-limiting open ended royalty free licence. 
I'm glad someone finally put that in one of these.  Wouldn't want zanz getting a cease & desist letter.   :-X

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg143879#msg143879
« Reply #7 on: August 22, 2010, 09:07:41 am »
If we do Haikus, we can do more then 1 right? It's really hard to fit 50 words into 17 syllables...
If you do Haiku then you will have to do multiple Stanza to get the 50 word limit.
Because Haiku is particularly of contrast, you may do descending form, ie each Haiku is a different contrast of moment occuring in sequential order rather than multiple stanza for the same contrast. The Japanese might hate you for it, but it is somewhat accepted in english speaking circles so I'm going to say it is ok here.


Small question: by 'game mechanic', you can say, reference the idea of Eternity as a weapon belonging to Time, but you can't specify the mechanic of the card itself (ability to rewind creatures), correct?
You can refer to time being rewound, just don't say something like "...the elemental played his rewind card and the ray of light was returned to his deck." or "... and the opposing elemental attempted to draw a card with his hourglass and had none so was cast to the game over screen."

Make the poem a moment in reality, not in a game.

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg143950#msg143950
« Reply #8 on: August 22, 2010, 11:28:45 am »
For whom the bell tolls

There is a saying, in the swamps
And I can't say the saying's wrong
Now it's told, down in the those haunts
The dead aren't staying, they aren't dead long

And so, when a body's buried
A bell is tied to the dead man's toe
And if a traveler is wary
When undead rise, he will know

There was once a naïve king
Walking through an unkempt grave
And when the bells began to ring
He knew not the warning, so he stayed

And up from the tombstones came a hand
Followed by a dreadful moan
And up from the earth rose an undead man
Who found the king: scared, alone

And so the undead beast then said
To the king, "It's time you were told"
"This is the day that all men dread"
"It is for you, the death bell tolls"

The old king screamed, "it cannot be"
"Today is not my day to die"
"I am a king, and as you'll see"
"While you are death, I am the sky"

The great king flapped his mighty wings
Beat them with defiant pride
The wind knocked down the tombstone rings
and knocked down all who weren't inside

But the skeleton just held it's ground
And gave the king a stare that made him cold
"Do you hear that gonging sound?"
"It is for you, the death bell tolls"

The king heard a noise, is his mind
A banging sound, so loud and clear
It clanged and gonged and blasted and chimed
so it was all the king could hear

"It cannot be" he said at last
"For I am too strong for death"
"I'll stay alive until it's passed"
"And fend it off with dragon's breath"

So this king of sky, dragon of air
Let of a roar that made the ground roll
But the skeleton stood and did not care
"It is for you the death bell tolls"

And the mighty king flew far away
"Death won't catch me, I am too fast"
But soon he felt his wings decay
Into the graveyard he soon crashed

He saw the source of all the rings
That bell of death inside his head
It was fate his flight would bring
him to a tomb stone; and it said

"Here lies a now dead beast"
"But soon it will rise again"
"To charge and roar and kill and feast"
"And make mortals meet their end"

It had an image, carved below
The king was shocked at what it shown
And soon his fears began to grow
This grave was for a dragon, bone

The king turned and began to plead
"Wind dragons are not meant to die"
"Please undead, do let me leave"
"I want to live, I want to fly"

The words the undead spoke were sad
"I was once alive like you"
"But we both used the time we had"
"You know what you have to do."

The undead raised a boney point
There was a coffin for the king
"It is high time that you joined"
"The place of which the angels sing"

The air dragon began to weep
"But I do not have a good soul"
The undead sighed, "It's time you sleep"
"It is for you the death bell tolls."

So the king of might lay down
And dropped his head, and closed his eyes
And walked toward the ringing sound
The great air dragon then had died

And from a grave a new roar leapt
A skeleton woke inside his home
And from the earth, a beast then left
A king of death, a dragon bone

Even the mighty king of wind
Could not escape the dreadful ring
Upon the day your health rescinds
The sound of death, a bell will bring

The bell's sweet rhythm never sounds
Quite the same to every ear
But each and every death bell pounds
With rhythm, clanging loud and clear

Dead reader, have you realized yet?
Why my story has been told?
I'll tell you now why we have met.
It is for you this death bell tolls.

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg144114#msg144114
« Reply #9 on: August 22, 2010, 04:19:38 pm »
Down in the realm of the Deathly Dark Dusk,
The Darkness Has Hold of Hell.
Teaming with Death For the Dawn of Dacnomania
Making an army to Leave Light Lifeless.
To make Earth Entirely Empty,
To extinguish Fire, from a Full Flare to a Flammule
To evaporate Water, From Wet to Waterless,
To Leave Life in Lethe,
To Employ Entropy into Epitonic,
To Get Gravity to Giganticide,
To Terminate Time,
To Annihilate Air Abruptly,
To Assasinate Aether Animatedly,
Down in the realm of the Deathly Dark Dusk.


Finished!

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg144123#msg144123
« Reply #10 on: August 22, 2010, 04:28:10 pm »
HAIKU.
I call it
PRETTY MUCH COPYING

An elemental,
You are, a colourful ghost.
Fight people and stuff


I'm not going to lie, I think this could be the best thing I've ever written

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg144206#msg144206
« Reply #11 on: August 22, 2010, 06:38:12 pm »
HAIKU.
I call it
PRETTY MUCH COPYING

An elemental,
You are, a colourful ghost.
Fight people and stuff


I'm not going to lie, I think this could be the best thing I've ever written
XD. You already have my vote.

 

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