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Death Monolith | Death Monolith https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23256.msg295549#msg295549
« on: March 21, 2011, 07:59:15 pm »
NAME:
Death Monolith
ELEMENT:
Death
COST:
1 :death
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
Each turn :death is generated. When Death Monolith comes in to play, infect the target creature.
NAME:
Death Monolith
ELEMENT:
Death
COST:
0
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
Each turn :death is generated. When Death Monolith comes in to play, infect the target creature.
ART:
Emerald Tiger
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NOTES:
SERIES:
Monolith and Obelisk Series (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,23373.0.html)
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Re: Death Obelisk | Death Obelisk https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23256.msg295556#msg295556
« Reply #1 on: March 21, 2011, 08:04:28 pm »
Good first try.
Obelisk should be capitalized (everywhere)
Also I thought the come into play effects would be Monoliths and the activated abilities would be Obelisks.
Black Obelisk | Black Obelisk (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,23253.0.html)
Also the title should use a | instead of a /
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Re: Death monolith | Death monolith https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23256.msg295737#msg295737
« Reply #2 on: March 22, 2011, 01:13:13 am »
here is what i came up with.
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Re: Death monolith | Death monolith https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23256.msg295901#msg295901
« Reply #3 on: March 22, 2011, 11:54:26 am »
Thx i can't edit the top yet but I will do later ! (or you can do it if you have the time)
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Re: Death monolith | Death monolith https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23256.msg296083#msg296083
« Reply #4 on: March 22, 2011, 07:18:03 pm »
I like the idea.  New pillar ideas seem to be flowing recently..
First make the forum name Death Obelisk | Death Obelisk.
Secondly, add EmeraldTiger's attractive art to your card.
Third, it's OP'd.  It costs the same as a pillar, but has a better effect.
You need to change this.
Maybe 2 :death 2 random.
That's just my 2 cents.
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Re: Death monolith | Death monolith https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23256.msg296085#msg296085
« Reply #5 on: March 22, 2011, 07:23:16 pm »
That's not OP an uppgraded pillar (a tower) give you one mana when he CITP; not that one
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Re: Death monolith | Death monolith https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23256.msg296094#msg296094
« Reply #6 on: March 22, 2011, 07:40:08 pm »
Third, it's OP'd.  It costs the same as a pillar, but has a better effect.
You need to change this.
Maybe 2 :death 2 random.
That's just my 2 cents.
Great first try c:
Pillar costs 0|-1
Monoliths cost 1|0
Obelisks cost 2|1

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You will need to update the card text on the card and in the table to say monolith instead of obelisk.
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Re: Death monolith | Death monolith https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23256.msg296134#msg296134
« Reply #7 on: March 22, 2011, 08:35:35 pm »
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Re: Death monolith | Death monolith https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23256.msg296206#msg296206
« Reply #8 on: March 22, 2011, 10:24:11 pm »
not done See pm
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Re: Death monolith | Death monolith https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23256.msg296501#msg296501
« Reply #9 on: March 23, 2011, 06:46:22 am »
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Re: Death monolith | Death monolith https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23256.msg296576#msg296576
« Reply #10 on: March 23, 2011, 12:58:07 pm »
change the unupped card image so that it says "1 :death" instead of just ":death"

change the table for the upped card so that the cost says "0" instead of just a blank.

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Re: Death monolith | Death monolith https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23256.msg296607#msg296607
« Reply #11 on: March 23, 2011, 02:42:01 pm »
tiger said its okay without the 1 ..
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