Fallen Soul | Fallen Soul

[FallenSoul]

NAME: Fallen Soul ELEMENT: Darkness COST: 5 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 2/3 ABILITY: Ally Death -1|+3. Ally Light +3|-1.   Suffering: Damage Target creature equal to the number of opposing creatures.	NAME: Fallen Soul ELEMENT: Darkness COST: 6 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 3/4 ABILITY: Ally Death -1|+3. Ally Light +3|-1.   Suffering: Damage Target creature equal to the number of opposing creatures.

ART: Edited from http://www.elusionist.com/galleries/BlackGhost2/cards/BlackGhost_jokera.jpg IDEA: FallenSoul NOTES: Suffering: more are the creatures on the enemy field more you can kill them, less are, less damage you can do if there are 1 creatures on the enemy side of the field it does 1 damage if there are 5 creatures on the enemy side of the field it does 5 damage of course creature must be targettable The keyword Ally meaning "While there is a creature of that element on the same side of the battlefield the bonus is given" so: Fallen Soul gain -1/+3 if there are at least 1 death element creature in play Fallen Soul gain +3/-1 if there are at least 1 light element creature in play Fallen Soul gain +1/+1 if there are at least 1 light element & 1 death element creatures in play so.. if there are at least 1 death element creature (that can be a Skeleton, a Mummy, a Volture, or any other death element creature) Fallen Soul gain the bonus (however if you have 2 or more death creatures in play the bonus will be the same, so Fallen Soul won't get -1/+3 x N) same goes for light.. if there are at least 1 light element creature (such as Pegasus, Photon, or any other light element creature) Fallen Soul gain the bonus (however if you have 2 or more light creatures in play the total bonus won't change, so Fallen Soul won't get +3/-1 x N) and, if there are both light creature/creatures and death creature/creatures in play, as for the previous bonuses, Fallen Soul would get +1/+1, regardless of the number of creatures (so with 2 light element + 2 death element in play, you won't get +1/+1 x 2 but +1/+1) +1/+1 because --> (-1/+3 + +3/-1) : 2 --> (+2/+2) : 2 either way (with +2/+2) i think it would be OP (especially if fractalized..) Array it's an attempt to have creatures that gain bonuses from the presence of other creatures SERIES: -

[Kael Hate]

I like this. Well balanced and a nice effect.

I was looking for some more Black Playing cards to add to my collection of Copags I'll have to check that site out more.


Fill the Element box in in words and add the icon to the cost and it should be good for the Crucible once the comp is over.

[FallenSoul]

Fill the Element box in in words and add the icon to the cost and it should be good for the Crucible once the comp is over.

Sorry, i didn't understand very well..

[$$$man]

Under cost you have 5 and 6 respectively. Each of those should be 5 and 6 .

[FallenSoul]

ok, got it
i was focusing on the card >.<
done

[bigreen69]

i like the "suffering" ability a lot.

[dragonhuman]

the ability does seem kinda overpowered, dealing anywhere between 1 and 23 damage per turn for only 2 darkness

interesting idea for array btw

[Kael Hate]

CURATOR COMMENT

This is Crucible ready




Questions / Comments / Suggestions
Note that and mean Death and Light quanta respectively and not the Element Death and the Element Light.
The Ability Array should be Re-written to explain what is in a better way otherwise people aren't going to know what it does.
Also it doesn't seem to work as a keyword.

[FallenSoul]

mhm.. i modified a bit..
do you think it's ok this way?

[Kael Hate]

mhm.. i modified a bit..
do you think it's ok this way?

Now you need to fix up the table properly.

The problem still exists that Array doesn't detail what it does on the card and the keyword isn't related to the benefit.
If I put on a new Card "Array Water" what will that mean?

[FallenSoul]

mhm.. i modified a bit..
do you think it's ok this way?

Now you need to fix up the table properly.

The problem still exists that Array doesn't detail what it does on the card and the keyword isn't related to the benefit.
If I put on a new Card "Array Water" what will that mean?

Done.
..i know, but i think it's too long to explain and i guess i can't do it properly with less words
if you have any suggestion for a smaller effect explain you are welcome

[Kael Hate]

mhm.. i modified a bit..
do you think it's ok this way?

Now you need to fix up the table properly.

The problem still exists that Array doesn't detail what it does on the card and the keyword isn't related to the benefit.
If I put on a new Card "Array Water" what will that mean?

Done.
..i know, but i think it's too long to explain and i guess i can't do it properly with less words
if you have any suggestion for a smaller effect explain you are welcome

I'd do it like this.

"
Ally Death -1|+3.
Ally Light +3|-1.
  Suffering: Damage Target creature equal to the number of opposing creatures.
"

The keyword Ally meaning "While there is a creature of that element on the same side of the battlefield the bonus is given"

This way I could create "Ally Fire +4|+4" or "Ally Time -2|-2" or whatever and it doesn't matter that the penalties/benefits overlap.