Hmmm...
I would:
-delete twin unieverse and take phase shield
-take electrum hourglass
-delete dealdy poison, take otyugh+aflatoxin
-and smth that can help U with opponent`s monsters (plague or fire storm)
-take chrysaora (without upgrading- it wouldn`t be affected by thorn carapace of other shields like that)
I already have one shield and it's enough, so TU > Dim (I can copy the most useful creature)
Electrum Hourglass is not that important thing in 30 card deck, and I don't want include something what AI can use against me (steal it).
Deadly poison is there for a reason: I can make little damage while my creatures are blocked by shield (TU + Elite Charger, if I can - or steal AI's shield)
In most cases DMG > CC, because this is semi fast deck anyway, sometimes it get fooled, but most of time games are like walk in a park. And there is few creatures for reasonable CC
TTW is about 7, (don't have any record)