Hell Planet | Hell Planet

[craawzy]

NAME: Hell Planet ELEMENT: Gravity COST: 7  TYPE: Permanent TEXT: Deals 5 damage to you at the end of every round. Sacrifice a creature: Opponent gains control of Hell Planet	NAME: Hell Planet ELEMENT: Gravity COST: 5  TYPE: Permanent TEXT: Deals 5 damage to you at the end of every round. Sacrifice a creature: Opponent gains control of Hell Planet

ART: http://www.sxc.hu/photo/1313356 IDEA: craawzy

[Kamietsu]

Wow, your tables got a little messed up there.

But I actually like this card idea, I had a similar idea in the works. I think it's pretty balanced as not doing too much damage, since pulverizer and explosion are really the only ways to get rid of it.

[AnonymousRevival]

Don't give short form of Hellplanet, it makes people confused as if it were HP, as in health.

[craawzy]

Don't give short form of Hellplanet, it makes people confused as if it were HP, as in health.

I know but it didnt fit So i just had to short it down to "HP"

[Hyroen]

"Deals 2 damage to you every turn. Sacrifice a creature: Hellplanet is now the enemy's."

Aside, this code:

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[img width=289 height=443]http://data.fuskbugg.se/dipdip/Hell%20Planet.jpg[/img][/center][/td][td][center]
[img width=289 height=443]http://data.fuskbugg.se/dipdip/Hell%20Planet%20up.jpg[/img]
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[right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299]NAME: [/color][/size][/b][/right]
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Hell Planet
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[right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] ELEMENT: [/color][/size][/b][/right]
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Gravity
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7  :gravity
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Permament
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Burning Hole: Deals 2 Damage To You At The End Of Every Round.
Sacrifice A Creature: Opponent Gains Control Of Hellplanet
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[right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] NAME: [/color][/size][/b][/right]
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Hell Planet (upgraded)
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[right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] ELEMENT: [/color][/size][/b][/right]
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Gravity
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[right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] COST: [/color][/size][/b][/right]
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5  :gravity
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[right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] TYPE: [/color][/size][/b][/right]
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Permanent
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[right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] TEXT: [/color][/size][/b][/right]
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Burning Hole: Deals 2 Damage To You At The End Of Every Round.
Sacrifice A Creature: Opponent Gains Control Of Hellplanet
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http://www.sxc.hu/photo/1313356
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craawzy
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Will give you this:

NAME: Hell Planet ELEMENT: Gravity COST: 7  TYPE: Permament TEXT: Burning Hole: Deals 2 Damage To You At The End Of Every Round. Sacrifice A Creature: Opponent Gains Control Of Hellplanet	NAME: Hell Planet (upgraded) ELEMENT: Gravity COST: 5  TYPE: Permanent TEXT: Burning Hole: Deals 2 Damage To You At The End Of Every Round. Sacrifice A Creature: Opponent Gains Control Of Hellplanet

ART: http://www.sxc.hu/photo/1313356 IDEA: craawzy

[Drobbit]

crazy! I love it! even I would make it do more damage indeed. It's a planet! Maybe 5?

[craawzy]

Thanks everyone, i most go out with dog, then i fix the cards text etc =)

Hyroen ty didnt know what wrong i did though

[craawzy]

Wich one do you prefer?

(http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,15356.0.html/) (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,15356.0.html)

(http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,15356.0.html/) (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,15356.0.html/)

Or maybe the original?

[QuantumT]

I think the damage should be upped to something like 5. As it is, it will basically just be ignored.

I like the idea though.

[Drobbit]

There's no need to name the ability here. I prefere the first pair.

[Kuroaitou]

CURATOR COMMENT
-Remove the (upgraded) part from your thread title and table. The name must match the card image.
-Go easy on the capitalization. ^^; Your text needs to match the card image word for word, letter for letter (remove the capitalized letters in the text when compared to the image)


I find it funny that you could figuratively give the opposing elemental player an entire planet by killing a creature, but the mechanic itself is a cool concept. Thematically though, it's not clicking for me.  ???

[AnonymousRevival]

Please change HP, otherwise, shorten the card text.