[Round 2] - Crusader Task

[rob77dp]

Write up started -- I think it needs a lot of help though... The parts are all there but some fundamental assistance with wording/phrasing and perhaps a _little_ touch of storyboard to it should help.

I plan to add a "how to play the deck" section - even though I do think it fairly simple/obvious how to play it.

[Aves]

Shiny, Tasty, and Frozen - OH MY!

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Something VALUABLE	***DESCRIPTION**Strategy ***Strategy***
Something TO EAT	***DESCRIPTION**Strategy ***Strategy***
Turning to STONE	A shield constructed of diamonds is of utmost value and the attacking horde of goblins want to steal it and dine on some tasy squid and octopus. In this case, the squid, octopus, and diamonds are able to defend themselves by turning in Stone [Skin], protecting their loot, and reducing the attacking hordes to dried up husks of their former goblin selves!Strategy
Loot PROTECTion	***DESCRIPTION**Strategy ***Strategy***
Horde DESICCATION	***DESCRIPTION**Strategy ***Strategy***
POSEIDON.	The defense against the oncoming Goblin Horde is led by the God of the Sea himself.Strategy ***Strategy***

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[rob77dp]

Thanks Aves! I have taken a bit of time to apply it to the OP.

BUMP! Review of the OP?

[Aves]

Whoo! Getting closer.

It still needs some more in-depth text-- it looks a bit bare with all that space. Imo, in every card strategy text mention at least one of the following: PC, CC, Denial, the other cards in the deck, the effects we are trying to prevent/deal with, our win condition.

So for diamond shield, for example:

+3 Damage Reduction! A key card, Diamond Shield reduces enemy damage from creatures and weapons to a more manageable level. Play this as soon as possible, unless you expect permanent control and cannot replace it. In particular, be on the lookout for pesky goblin steals. If PC is likely, then wait for a Protect Artifact.

That's still not enough text, but something more in that direction.

[rob77dp]

Whoo! Getting closer.

It still needs some more in-depth text-- it looks a bit bare with all that space. Imo, in every card strategy text mention at least one of the following: PC, CC, Denial, the other cards in the deck, the effects we are trying to prevent/deal with, our win condition.

So for diamond shield, for example:

+3 Damage Reduction! A key card, Diamond Shield reduces enemy damage from creatures and weapons to a more manageable level. Play this as soon as possible, unless you expect permanent control and cannot replace it. In particular, be on the lookout for pesky goblin steals. If PC is likely, then wait for a Protect Artifact.

That's still not enough text, but something more in that direction.

What about simplifying/reducing the quantity of separate table sections? I'm bad with tables but will be giving it my best shot here in the next little bit...

[rob77dp]

OK, got together an idea for the layout change... thoughts?

1. Is it better to break Strategy out into its own summary AFTER any/all tables and such ILO (in lieu of) each card having a strategy section?

[JonathanCrazyJ]

i think that would look better. have cards in a row and card description underneath so tales way less space and is neater, then strategy outside the table underneath

[Aves]

Maybe move the text descriptions to the right of the cards instead of below, and then have the strategy below that.

[JonathanCrazyJ]

Centered things and made minor edits to content

[rob77dp]

Centered things and made minor edits to content

I _may_ have been mid-edits that since were saved and un-did your changes?!? >.> sorry... did not see this prior

[JonathanCrazyJ]

Crap lol, nvm, i'll leave you to it and do a final quality check in 3 hours 20 mins

[Aves]

Maybe that instead of the full size images? The squids are making the format look a bit awkward.