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The Heart Beats [A Poem] https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=42851.msg534424#msg534424
« on: August 18, 2012, 04:50:42 am »
Poem
The Heart Beats
The Clock Ticks
The Wave Crashes
The Ash Burns

The Wind Blows
The Lightning Flashes
The Stone Rolls
The Heart Beats

The Heart Beats
The Night Falls
The Dead Rest
The Newborn Cries

The Imagined Whirls
The Mind Plans
The Bright Shine
The Heart Beats


can u guess the reference.
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Re: The Heart Beats [A Poem] https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=42851.msg534455#msg534455
« Reply #1 on: August 18, 2012, 07:06:23 am »
I love how each line (Excluding 'The Heart Beats') is to do with an element, unless I'm mistaken
I'm guessing that the elements are:

The Clock Ticks:  :time
The Wave Crashes:  :water
The Ash Burns:  :fire

The Wind Blows:  :air
The Lightning Flashes:  :aether
The Stone Rolls:  :earth

The Night Falls:  :darkness
The Dead Rest:  :death
The Newborn Cries:  :life

The Imagined Whirls:    :entropy
The Mind Plans:    :gravity
The Bright Shine:  :light
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Edited: Swapped gravity and entropy
« Last Edit: August 19, 2012, 09:07:42 am by cjackdc »
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Re: The Heart Beats [A Poem] https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=42851.msg534534#msg534534
« Reply #2 on: August 18, 2012, 01:32:34 pm »
yes  :gravity and  :entropy are mixed up.
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Re: The Heart Beats [A Poem] https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=42851.msg534535#msg534535
« Reply #3 on: August 18, 2012, 01:34:42 pm »
And "The Heart Beats" means that all existence/life is made up of those elements? (Maybe...?)
Anyway, nice poem!
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Re: The Heart Beats [A Poem] https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=42851.msg534556#msg534556
« Reply #4 on: August 18, 2012, 03:16:29 pm »
And "The Heart Beats" means that all existence/life is made up of those elements? (Maybe...?)
Or it could be Blood.

 

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