When we're at necroing already: Constant AABB is a bit boring. Try to mix it up a bit, claim certain liberties.
This. You have lots of potential.
I promise I will try my best!
I thank both for your advice
To surpass my limits I will rise,
And success will follow every test.
To rhyme in a different form,
For me it, I admit, isn't easy,
To keep the pattern is cheesy,
So variation shall be my norm.
And now I rhymed embracing and pairs,
But can I be satisfied, is this really enough?
How far can I climb up on poetries' stairs?
I'll make it to the top, because I am tough.
Jokes aside, thanks a lot to both of you for the compliments
It's been a while since I wrote poems because of my studies (and some lack of inspiration
) but that doesn't mean I'll never write one again
So yeah, if something passes my mind I'll post it here
