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Succubus | Succubus https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=49680.msg1077268#msg1077268
« on: June 04, 2013, 06:41:24 pm »
NAME:
Succubus
ELEMENT:
Fire
COST:
5 :fire
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
4 | 5
TEXT:
:darkness Charm: Target creature may not attack for 3 turns. Damage taken breaks the charm.
NAME:
Succubus
ELEMENT:
Fire
COST:
5 :fire
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
6 | 5
TEXT:
:darkness Charm: Target creature may not attack for 3 turns. Damage taken breaks the charm.

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NOTES:
The succubus has been tried a few times from what I could see - but none attempted to capture it as a creature of fire.
The charm skill is also unique to previous attempts.
I hope bringing both aspects together will make for a unique card that people will like.
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Re: Succubus | Succubus https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=49680.msg1077269#msg1077269
« Reply #1 on: June 04, 2013, 06:58:49 pm »
Nice card. IMO you should buff the upped version.. maybe lower cost or increase from 3 to 5 turns?

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Re: Succubus | Succubus https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=49680.msg1077328#msg1077328
« Reply #2 on: June 04, 2013, 09:52:53 pm »
It would be balanced if Charm could only apply to only 1 creature at a time. So if you charm another creature, the previously charmed one should be released.
Because in it's current form, it's OP to the Warden family.
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Re: Succubus | Succubus https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=49680.msg1077330#msg1077330
« Reply #3 on: June 04, 2013, 09:59:11 pm »
'may not attack' = is not allowed to attack?

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Re: Succubus | Succubus https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=49680.msg1077348#msg1077348
« Reply #4 on: June 04, 2013, 10:25:11 pm »
It would be balanced if Charm could only apply to only 1 creature at a time. So if you charm another creature, the previously charmed one should be released.
Because in it's current form, it's OP to the Warden family.

So Freeze is OP?
Warden deals damage to those it blocks - this doesn't
'may not attack' = is not allowed to attack?
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Re: Succubus | Succubus https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=49680.msg1077350#msg1077350
« Reply #5 on: June 04, 2013, 10:27:56 pm »
Pretty cool! Does the Charm stack turnwise?
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Re: Succubus | Succubus https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=49680.msg1077352#msg1077352
« Reply #6 on: June 04, 2013, 10:31:46 pm »
Ah, good. Could have also been a % chance to miss.

Uhm - I agree about it being rather strong though. Arctic Squid has a very similar effect. 2  :underworld in element each turn is more expensive than 1  :underworld off element each turn. Succubus' delay is weaker for two reasons (Can still use skills, cancels when damaged), but the main difference is that Arctic Squid is just an otherwise dead card if not combined with SoP, while this is still a totally decent hitter.
Would prefer if charm only lasted 2 turns.

Like the card though.

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Re: Succubus | Succubus https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=49680.msg1077365#msg1077365
« Reply #7 on: June 04, 2013, 11:50:19 pm »
The cost of the card IMO should be changed higher, or to match/balance the effect to other elements. Hot card, Like Flaming hot!!! XD

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Re: Succubus | Succubus https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=49680.msg1077368#msg1077368
« Reply #8 on: June 04, 2013, 11:58:58 pm »
Great idea, but the effect is ridiculously similar to Arctic Squid, as mentioned above.

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Re: Succubus | Succubus https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=49680.msg1077373#msg1077373
« Reply #9 on: June 05, 2013, 12:19:49 am »
What if it blocked attack - gave you control of the ability - and was limited to 1 target at a time?
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Re: Succubus | Succubus https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=49680.msg1077386#msg1077386
« Reply #10 on: June 05, 2013, 12:56:56 am »
It would sound like you're trying to overcomplicate an idea.

What if it did something like:

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Re: Succubus | Succubus https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=49680.msg1077405#msg1077405
« Reply #11 on: June 05, 2013, 01:28:06 am »
But how does that fit thematically? Why the heck frozen?

 

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