Fate Bird | Destiny Bird

[russianspy1234]

NAME: Fate Bird ELEMENT: Time COST: 6 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 4|3 TEXT:   : Lay a Fate Egg	NAME: Destiny Bird ELEMENT: Time COST: 5 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 4|4 TEXT:   : Lay an Elite Fate Egg

ART: http://www.public-domain-image.com/fauna-animals-public-domain-images-pictures/birds-public-domain-images-pictures/a-single-bird-sitting-on-top-of-plant.jpg.html IDEA: russianspy1234 NOTES: SERIES:

my first time submitting a card, trying to follow protocol, but sorry if i messed up on something

[Ajit]

Congrats on your first card submission it looks like you did just about everything right.  One thing to change is provide an exact link to the page that the image of your card is on, not just the website.  Although what you have might pass, I'm not sure.

Check this card out;
http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,16135.0.html

Its essentially a Permanent version of your card.  Perhaps you can use it to help balance your card.

[pie]

Suggestion: Hatched creatures gain +x/+x to their stats if there is a Fate/Destiny Bird in play , x can be a random number ( 1 to 5 ? )

[russianspy1234]

Congrats on your first card submission it looks like you did just about everything right.  One thing to change is provide an exact link to the page that the image of your card is on, not just the website.  Although what you have might pass, I'm not sure.

Check this card out;
http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,16135.0.html

Its essentially a Permanent version of your card.  Perhaps you can use it to help balance your card.

seems close to the same balance of your card, the being a creature and dealing damage for a higher cost.

Suggestion: Hatched creatures gain +x/+x to their stats if there is a Fate/Destiny Bird in play , x can be a random number ( 1 to 5 ? )

is that possbile to implement? i mean, is there an "isHatched" tag or some sort that can be added?

[Rutarete]

Suggestion: Hatched creatures gain +x/+x to their stats if there is a Fate/Destiny Bird in play , x can be a random number ( 1 to 5 ? )

is that possbile to implement? i mean, is there an "isHatched" tag or some sort that can be added?

I believe it's similar to Scarab.

[Kuroaitou]

CURATOR COMMENT
-Please try to provide a more specific page link to where you located your art; if another member wants to use it in the future, it would be much easier for other card makers to click on the link and find the direct source.

On that note; there's been an old 'chicken' idea that did the same thing as your creature, but it's long been archived I believe. ^^;

That said, WELCOME TO THE CARD IDEAS & ART (or CIA ) BOARD! If you have any further questions regarding your card submission, feel free to personally message me. Otherwise, try to fix the above issues and resubmit it again for re-evaluation into the Crucible.

[russianspy1234]

Suggestion: Hatched creatures gain +x/+x to their stats if there is a Fate/Destiny Bird in play , x can be a random number ( 1 to 5 ? )

is that possbile to implement? i mean, is there an "isHatched" tag or some sort that can be added?

I believe it's similar to Scarab.

yeah but scarab can count the creatures on the field, is there anything to distinguish a hatched creature from a regular one?  might be cool to give the defense bonus to the eggs themselves, to represent her protecting them.

[Scaredgirl]

I like the idea, although it has been suggested many times before. In fact, the first time this idea appeared was in the first official card idea competition we had almost two years ago: http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,2128.msg22164#msg22164

Like I said in that topic, I think that the ability should definitely cost because it revolves around randomness.

[russianspy1234]

I like the idea, although it has been suggested many times before. In fact, the first time this idea appeared was in the first official card idea competition we had almost two years ago: http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,2128.msg22164#msg22164

Like I said in that topic, I think that the ability should definitely cost because it revolves around randomness.

hmmm youre sort of right, time is probably a bad idea.  i dont think entropy is the way to go either though, entropy shouldnt have a monopoly on randomness.  fate egg itself is monotime after all.

[russianspy1234]

After almost a year in crucible, my first card creation has been promoted 

[Chapuz]

After almost a year in crucible, my first card creation has been promoted 

It deserves it!

[esran]

this seems a natural addition to any pharoeh+empathatic bond deck.