Jamais Vu | Presque Vu

[Amheug-ui Maseuteo]

Everything is slightly OP with Fractal/Nightmare. I don't see this as that OP. Maybe swapping the attack and health would help somewhat as that would discourage people from fractalling this card specifically.

 

[Thalas]

First of all: i totally love your art, Thalas.
Since i saw your Melusine, i loved the polished and dreamy look you give to your drawings!

Back to the card: it's OP with fractal even if it affects both players, since can always draw.
Immaterial is the most obvious suggestion, but i think it could work because the creatures are little and with low HP.
I would also suggest a different wording. Instead of

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Amnesia (Sacrifice card)
Prevents both players from drawing a card from their decks next turn.i  would use

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Amnesia:
Sacrifice Jamais Vu to make both players skip a draw.the reasons for this wording are:

• more similar to Virus|Retrovirus, the other creatures with a "sacrifice: do something" ability
• shorter, so you can eventually add Immaterial or other balancing effects

Another solution could be:

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Amnesia:
Rewind Jamais Vu to make both players skip a draw.This way you skips 2 draws, and you really need to use draw effects to use it effectively.
I don't know if it's too extreme, though. Maybe immaterial is the best solution.

Your advices are great. However immortality seems out of theme and Amnesia rewind skll would decrease its versatility in decks

[pvpmister]

Mitosis?
Fractal?

Thats not really drawing a card. So i guess they would work.
Its a card you'd have to see in action before i decided.

[Aves]

Why not have the wording be used to its full effect? Prevents both players from drawing a card on their next turn.
Thus, hourglass and precognition shouldn't work on each player's next turn, which is immediately after the sacrifice for the opponent, and the turn after the sacrifice for the player.

[TheManuz]

Why not have the wording be used to its full effect? Prevents both players from drawing a card on their next turn.
Thus, hourglass and precognition shouldn't work on each player's next turn, which is immediately after the sacrifice for the opponent, and the turn after the sacrifice for the player.

Then you should say: Prevents both players from drawing cards on their next turn.
Saying "a card" seems to refer only to a single draw, but not subsequent drawing effects.

Not bad, not bad, i see potential in this ability. Now i'm starting to like this creature.

[Thalas]

Cost reduced to 2 | 1  and hp set to 0

[jacker]

As they are now, they will die before you can sacrifice, since you can't activate an ability the turn the card is put into play

[Thalas]

As they are now, they will die before you can sacrifice, since you can't activate an ability the turn the card is put into play

That's intended, now you must buff it before you use it.

[jacker]

As they are now, they will die before you can sacrifice, since you can't activate an ability the turn the card is put into play

That's intended, now you must buff it before you use it.

That makes the card horrible IMO

[Amheug-ui Maseuteo]

I agree, you've broken the card with that change.

 

[ARTHANASIOS]

This is one of the best ideas I've ever seen! +1 goes to the creator from me. Precognition has a powerful ally now! As for abusing it with Fractal or Mitosis, we can just make this creature immortal and either reduce its atk or increase its cost. Personally, I would prefer it as a 1|2 immortal creature with 3 quanta cost unupped and 1|2 immortal creature with 2 quanta upped (the health buff would be nice in order to avoid instant death from Fire Shield|Fire Buckler).