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Altiuiri | Altiuiri https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=36789.msg461862#msg461862
« on: February 18, 2012, 09:06:05 pm »
NAME:
Altiuiri
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
4 :air
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
4 | 4
TEXT:
:air :air :air : Tempest
All creatures have a chance of being returned to the deck.   Removes invisibility.
NAME:
Altiuiri
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
4 :air
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
5 | 5
TEXT:
:air :air :air : Tempest
All creatures have a chance of being returned to the deck.   Removes invisibility.
ART:
Drake_XIV
IDEA:
Drake_XIV
NOTES:
Image will be replaced once traced and coloured.

For those wondering Altiuiri is draconic for "Winged."

The chance to return a card to the deck is defined by the equation:
If x = [Creature's health] ...
.         x > 0 ; ( ( 1 / 2x ) * 100 ) %
P = {
.         x = 0 ; 100%

Altiuiri has a 1/8 chance of being returned to the deck as well.

Creatures will be returned according to their placement on the field.  So the creature in slot one will be returned before slot two.
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Re: Altiuiri | Altiuiri https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=36789.msg461867#msg461867
« Reply #1 on: February 18, 2012, 09:20:55 pm »
Where did the theme come from for this one? (the inspiration) How does the ability tie in with the card - image & theme
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Re: Altiuiri | Altiuiri https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=36789.msg461869#msg461869
« Reply #2 on: February 18, 2012, 09:28:41 pm »
Well, I've been meaning on working a series of sorts working with lesser reptiles (See:  Levii, Pyrtle).  Kind of like lesser dragons in a way.  Now, Wyvern and related notes are already used, so I had to dig a bit deeper.

Now, as a four winged being, it seems to need some control over air flow.  Tempest comes from it's mass control of currents, sending creatures back to their owners.  Also, creatures with larger health, which usually denotes larger size and weight, are least likely to be affected by the wind.  In exchange, creatures with smaller health, such as Ray of Light or Damselfly, have a 50% chance of being returned.

On that note, creatures with no health, such as Ball Lightning, will be automatically returned to the deck.

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Re: Altiuiri | Altiuiri https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=36789.msg461872#msg461872
« Reply #3 on: February 18, 2012, 09:36:53 pm »
The cost seems a little bit low. You pay the same 4 :air as Wyrm but you have a 1 higher atk/def.
Also, the ability seems high. Every creature with 1 defense, even powerful ones like Phoenix or Fate Egg, have a 50% chance to get shuffled.

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Re: Altiuiri | Altiuiri https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=36789.msg461874#msg461874
« Reply #4 on: February 18, 2012, 09:44:02 pm »
The cost seems a little bit low. You pay the same 4 :air as Wyrm but you have a 1 higher atk/def.
Also, the ability seems high. Every creature with 1 defense, even powerful ones like Phoenix or Fate Egg, have a 50% chance to get shuffled.
I was pretty sure Wyrm costs 3.  Regardless, with :air  Dive, it becomes a heavier hitter.

Tempest also affects your side.  And as you said, there's a CHANCE.  The return is not definite.  It may not look like it, but 50% is actually pretty small.

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Re: Altiuiri | Altiuiri https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=36789.msg461880#msg461880
« Reply #5 on: February 18, 2012, 10:10:02 pm »
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Re: Altiuiri | Altiuiri https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=36789.msg461885#msg461885
« Reply #6 on: February 18, 2012, 10:22:04 pm »
I was pretty sure Wyrm costs 3. 
Wyrm costs 4
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Re: Altiuiri | Altiuiri https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=36789.msg461887#msg461887
« Reply #7 on: February 18, 2012, 10:26:52 pm »
Ah, so it is.  Anyways, it has an ability to considerably raise its attack, so I feel it's balanced.

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Re: Altiuiri | Altiuiri https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=36789.msg466182#msg466182
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