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Re: Möbius Strip | Möbius Strip https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29442.msg375900#msg375900
« Reply #12 on: August 05, 2011, 03:19:47 pm »
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-You need to add an  :time icon after the card's COST in the table (It should read '2 :time' for example, not just '2', to match your card image).
-Please fix the name in the card image OR the table so that they both match (try to copy-paste the accented 'o' letter into the card image)

Compared to Adrenaline, this spell is pretty lackluster indeed. I think it's best that you try to come up with something a bit more creative that may involve loopholes or more unusual mechanics in regards to spells. ^^; But if you're steadfast on this idea, please correct the changes above and submit it again.
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Re: Möbius Strip | Möbius Strip https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29442.msg375904#msg375904
« Reply #13 on: August 05, 2011, 03:26:16 pm »
Quote from: Hyroen on August 04, 2011, 12:27:05 am
With the name of Möbius Strip I was expecting so much more. This name has so much potential. I'm sorry but "The target creature attack(s) 2 times per turn." is lackluster.  I'd recommend going back to the drawing board.
I agree. With great name comes big responsability. ;)
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Re: Möbius Strip | Möbius Strip https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29442.msg375966#msg375966
« Reply #14 on: August 05, 2011, 07:11:41 pm »
"Target creature, in addition to normal attacks, also attacks its owner each turn."
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