Atom|Atom, Atom Bomb|Atom Bomb, Electron|Electron, Proton|Proton, Neutron|neutro

[nawikipedia]

I'm know these a lot of cards, and you think I should post them in other topics, but all of them are generated with the atom ability, so I'm supposed to put them here.
If I'm wrong say it! (or write, I'm probably won't hear you LOL) it's the first time I'm posting cards group like this, so I'm not sure what I'm supposed to do.
 

NAME: Atom ELEMENT: Aether COST: 5 TYPE: creature ATK|HP: 3|3 TEXT: :dismantling :loses -3|-3 and generate 1 proton, 1 electron and 1 neutron. might cast atom blast	NAME: Atom ELEMENT: aether COST: 5 TYPE: creature ATK|HP: 5|5 TEXT: :dismantling :loses -4|-4 and generate 1 proton, 1 electron and 1 neutron. might cast atom blasttd]

ART: http://sites.google.com/site/rinacohen1/%D7%9E%D7%91%D7%A0%D7%94%D7%94%D7%90%D7%98%D7%95%D7%9D IDEA: nawikipedia NOTES: atom blast = atom bomb. the upgraded atom generates upgraded creatures, the normal one generate normal creatures SERIES: N/A

 

NAME: Atom Bomb ELEMENT: fire COST: 8 TYPE: spell ATK|HP: N/A TEXT: inflicts 20 damages to the opponent and 2 damage to all the creatures in play. effected creature might get mutate	NAME: atom bomb ELEMENT: fire COST: 6 TYPE: spell ATK|HP: N/A TEXT: inflicts 20 damages to the opponent and 2 damage to all the creatures in play. effected creature might get mutate

ART: http://www.scientificamerican.com/article.cfm?id=advances-in-monitoring-nuclear IDEA: nawikipedia NOTES: just like the "ignite" skill (unstable gas), but the creatures have chances to get mutate. SERIES: N/A

 

NAME: Electron ELEMENT: aether COST: 3 TYPE: creature ATK|HP: 1|1 TEXT: each turn  are generated      :generate spark. If there are no protons on the field, electron dies.	NAME: Electron ELEMENT: aether COST: 3 TYPE: creature ATK|HP: 2|2 TEXT: each turn  are generated      :generate ball lightning. If there are no protons on the field, electron dies.

ART: me IDEA: nawikipedia NOTES: un-upgraded electron stays alive also if there is an upgraded proton in play. But upgraded electron dies if there is no upgraded proton (if there is un-upgraded only it'll die) SERIES: N/A

 

NAME: Proton ELEMENT: aether COST: 3 TYPE: creature ATK|HP: 1|1 TEXT: absorb  every turn. 0: sacrifice proton to generate	NAME: Proton ELEMENT: aether COST: 3 TYPE: creature ATK|HP: 2|2 TEXT: absorb  every turn. 0: sacrifice proton to generate

ART: me IDEA: nawikipedia NOTES: nothing important. SERIES: N/A

 

NAME: Neutron ELEMENT: aether COST: 3 TYPE: creature ATK|HP: 1|1 TEXT: :combination :if there are and electron and proton on the field, they and the neutron combine to atom.	NAME: neutron ELEMENT: aether COST: 3 TYPE: creature ATK|HP: 2|2 TEXT: :combination :if there are and electron and proton on the field, they and the neutron combine to atom.

ART: me IDEA: nawikipedia NOTES: unupgraded neutron turn into unupgraded atom if there is unupgraded electron and unupgraded proton. The same thing about upgraded neutron. Protons/electrons from the opponent side wont combine, I'm ran out of place in the text square  so I didn’t wrote it SERIES: N/A

[ZephyrPhantom]

I like the idea, but there is one problem : Atom Bomb.  That's a lot of damage for a player to take, and it could actually cause people to win the game too easily.

My suggestions
1. Lower atom's cost to 3  |4 
2. Either remove or weaken Atom Bomb.

[nawikipedia]

I like the idea, but there is one problem : Atom Bomb.  That's a lot of damage for a player to take, and it could actually cause people to win the game too easily.

My suggestions
1. Lower atom's cost to 3  |4 
2. Either remove or weaken Atom Bomb.

ok.
first- i changed the creature`s damage.
second- now its the same stats like the ignite (unstable gas) with chances to mutate. but ignite cost only  .
and about the atom- i think you right. im working on it

[joebob777]

o like the series, but even though i think changing atom bomb (unstable gas) into a spell and adding mutation is enough to sufficiently differintiate it from the real one, others might not think so

[Wolfunit]

Op to me you might want to balance the card cost + ability itself as to Atom Bomb.

[Kuroaitou]

CURATOR COMMENT
-Capitalize the words, 'Creature' and 'Spell' in the TYPE section of your tables (All cards)
-Capitalize the words, 'Fire' and 'Aether', in the ELEMENT section of your tables (All cards)
-Leave the ATK|HP section of the table blank if the card is not a creature (For your Atom Bomb cards - do not use the phrase 'N/A')
-For all the ART areas that you put the word, 'Me', in there, replace it with your actual name (just for clarity purposes)
-Try to capitalize the words in your card ideas, or at least at the beginning of your cards:
Examples:

Atom Bomb - both cards (Old):
"inflicts 20 damages to the
opponent and 2 damage to
all the creatures in play. effected
creature might get mutate"

A simple fix here and there...

Atom Bomb - both cards (New):
"Inflicts 20 damage to the
opponent and 2 damage to
all creatures in play. Affected
creature might get mutated."



Atom - both cards (Old):
" :dismantling :loses
-3|-3 and generate 1 proton,
1 electron and 1 neutron. might
cast atom blast"

You switched the highlighted words, 'electron' and 'proton' within the table. Also, 'losing' a stat value of '-3|-3' is a double negative, meaning that you're just gaining +3|+3. I'm guessing you meant to say they lose 3 attack power & 3 HP, correct? If so...

Atom - both cards (New): " :Dismantling
Atom loses +3|+3. Generate 1
electron, 1 proton, and 1 neutron.
May also cast Atom Bomb."

This way, Atom Blast is shortened to the correct term as well.


That said, these are A LOT of card ideas in a post, but I suppose since these all are generated from Atom, then it's okay to have them all in one topic. ^^;;; These TEXT fixes can all be done before you resubmit this to the Crucible - if you need help fixing the tables (since you have over 9 of them in a post), I can assist you in trying to reword and adjust your card wording as necessary nawikipedia.

[GG]

argh chemistry =_=

so... atom bomb deals the same effect as Unstable gas. So....

OH GOD. AIR ELEMENTALS HAVE ATOM BOMBS STORED IN FLASKS. KILL THEM!

[ZephyrPhantom]

argh chemistry =_=

so... atom bomb deals the same effect as Unstable gas. So....

OH GOD. AIR ELEMENTALS HAVE ATOM BOMBS STORED IN FLASKS. KILL THEM!

AND GRAVITY ELEMENTALS HAVE MASSIVE DRAGONS THAT THREATEN TO EAT US IF WE DON'T BUFF THEM. AAAAH!

That said, Kuraitou knows his stuff.

[Rutarete]

it's interesting. i like it

[icecoldbro]

proton has a typo from evry to every

[AnonymousRevival]

Neutron doesn't need to have an N in it, because with nothing in it already shows that it has a neutral charge. Also, atoms don't tend to be but more of because they can be omnipresent and the electrons can move in random sequences at the same time.