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Shard | Shard of Modesty https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11103.msg136666#msg136666
« on: August 12, 2010, 12:43:15 pm »
NAME:
Shard
ELEMENT:
Other
COST:
1
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:
ABILITY:
It looks like a crystal shard. It seems to be useless but it might be upgradeable.
NAME:
Shard of Modesty
ELEMENT:
Other
COST:
5
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:
ABILITY:
Target creature's attack is set to the attack value of the creature in play with the lowest attack
ART:
Zanz
IDEA:
Guy_Fawkes
NOTES:
Good synergy with Antimatter, the attack of every creature in play counts for the check, even the attack of the creature the spell is cast on.

COMPETITION: Card Design Competition: Shard Madness! (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,11099.0/topicseen.html)
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Re: Shard | Shard of Modesty https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11103.msg137398#msg137398
« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2010, 10:04:45 am »
feedback, anyone? :)

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Re: Shard | Shard of Modesty https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11103.msg139674#msg139674
« Reply #2 on: August 16, 2010, 07:13:52 am »
feedback, anyone? :)
CURATOR COMMENT:
To get this card approved for the competition:
-Fix the punctuation discrepancies between the card text and the ability table description (remove the comma in regards to the non-upped card, and remove the last period for the upgraded card)


I kind of like this card, especially when you have creatures that are getting completely out of hand (Ablaze, Growth, etc.), and you don't have damaging cards to kill them in time. You did a pretty impressive job on illustrating 'Modesty' for the idea of having a creature 'weaken' (i.e. - show restraint of confidence) in accordance to a creature that may not be very harmful at all. :)

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Re: Shard | Shard of Modesty https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11103.msg139877#msg139877
« Reply #3 on: August 16, 2010, 03:23:37 pm »
thanks for the feedback Kuroaitou :)
I've fixed the errors you pointed out!

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Re: Shard | Shard of Modesty https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11103.msg139892#msg139892
« Reply #4 on: August 16, 2010, 03:50:48 pm »

mod·es·ty   /ˈmɒdəsti/  Show Spelled[mod-uh-stee]  Show IPA
–noun, plural -ties. 
1. the quality of being modest; freedom from vanity, boastfulness, etc.
2. regard for decency of behavior, speech, dress, etc.
3. simplicity; moderation.

vir·tu·ous   /ˈvɜrtʃuəs/  Show Spelled[vur-choo-uhs]  Show IPA
–adjective
1. conforming to moral and ethical principles; morally excellent; upright: Lead a virtuous life.
2. chaste: a virtuous young person.



For Modesty to be your Virtue it must be your guidelines, not something you inflict on someone else. If you hold affliction on someone else you are making judgement, not holding virtue.

Why do you think your shard holds to the virtue of Modesty?

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Re: Shard | Shard of Modesty https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11103.msg139952#msg139952
« Reply #5 on: August 16, 2010, 05:15:06 pm »
by showing to a brutal creature a Shard of Modesty the creature itself is enlighetend by its virtue thus showing a glimpse of modesty on the battlefield.

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Re: Shard | Shard of Modesty https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11103.msg141643#msg141643
« Reply #6 on: August 19, 2010, 12:08:10 am »
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This Card is Crucible Approved for the Shard Madness! Competition.
Edits of this card after this post may Void Approval.

 

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