Shard | Shard of Flexibility

[Hyroen]

NAME: Shard ELEMENT: Other COST: 1 TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: ABILITY: It looks like a crystal shard. It seems to be useless, but it might be upgradeable.	NAME: Shard of Flexibility ELEMENT: Other COST: 4 TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: ABILITY: Cost of next card played is zero. 2 random quanta are lost each turn until quanta lost is 2 times the original cost of the card. 1 HP is lost for every 1 quanta unavailable.

ART: Creator of Shard artwork (xD) IDEA: Hyroen NOTES: If 2 quanta are not available to be lost, 1 point of HP is lost that turn for every 1 quanta unavailable to be payed. COMPETITION: Card Design Competition: Shard Madness! (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,11099.0/topicseen.html) SERIES:

[the Sage]

Bit too complex mechanic. The idea of a loan mechanic is ok, but it's a bit... stretched

[Kuroaitou]

CURATOR COMMENT
To get this card approved for the competition:
-Remove the '@' symbol in your Card Cost section of the table ("@" is -not- an appropriate symbol for the Other element!)
-Fix the discrepancies between your card text and Ability description in your table: (Non-upped -"may" should be replaced with "might")


Good lord, that's an absurd amount of words on your upgraded card image. O_o I know you want the shard to be flexible, but going well over the description limit of four lines is just... awkward.

[Hyroen]

Done. I wanted to point out that SG refers to Other "element" quanta as @. I figured it could be standardized.

Maybe not... xD

[Kael Hate]

Done. I wanted to point out that SG refers to Other "element" quanta as @. I figured it could be standardized.

Maybe not... xD

There is a difference in what is used as discussion and what appears in the game. means life quanta, not the element life, but in discussion, people might use that icon to reference cards that cost that type.

[Kuroaitou]

Done. I wanted to point out that SG refers to Other "element" quanta as @. I figured it could be standardized.

Maybe not... xD

It's okay. ^^; I know that the '@' symbol is referred to Other in that one post, but it really is just a 'filler' icon so that people won't get confused on what that element is left out in the Crucible leveling system. Also, see what Kael said.

That said:

CURATOR COMMENT
-Missed another discrepancy: your upgraded Ability description has the word 'card' after the word 'played', which doesn't match the card image (the second 'card' in your description needs to be removed)

[Kuroaitou]

CURATOR COMMENT
This Card is Crucible Approved for the Shard Madness! Competition.
Edits of this card after this post may Void Approval.