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Virus Inhalation | Virus Inhalation https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=18689.msg238197#msg238197
« on: January 01, 2011, 09:42:28 pm »
NAME:
Virus Inhalation
ELEMENT:
Death
COST:
5 :death
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
Poisons both players for 5 and causes 1 creature to be diseased.
NAME:
Virus Inhalation
ELEMENT:
Death
COST:
4 :death
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
Poisons both players for 5 and causes 2 creatures to be diseased.
ART:
bored_ninja777
IDEA:
bored_ninja777 - Old idea: http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,12323.0.html
NOTES:
The poison part has been changed to be more reasonable and simple. An infected creature is just like any other infection except when the creature dies it infects all adjacent creatures allowing the virus to continue. if no creatures are there then it just diminishes.
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Re: Virus Inhalation | Virus Inhalation https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=18689.msg238222#msg238222
« Reply #1 on: January 01, 2011, 10:09:16 pm »
This card could be simplified to just the disease part.
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Re: Virus Inhalation | Virus Inhalation https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=18689.msg238231#msg238231
« Reply #2 on: January 01, 2011, 10:17:20 pm »
I agree with Trees, the poisoning of both players seems like kind of a random addition to the infecting of one(/two) creature(s).

Maybe "Target creature(s) is infected. Infected creatures are contagious upon death." Or something. Details are up to you.

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Re: Virus Inhalation | Virus Inhalation https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=18689.msg238241#msg238241
« Reply #3 on: January 01, 2011, 10:25:16 pm »
i am keeping it as is for now. IT is a redo of my first version for the competition. It is meant to go with infectious mass that eats poison counters to get bigger, hence the poison the players.. Since the Elemental playing is contagious 1 to 2 creatures becomes infected and the virus spreads via that route.
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Re: Virus Inhalation | Virus Inhalation https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=18689.msg238287#msg238287
« Reply #4 on: January 01, 2011, 11:48:19 pm »
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-Capitalize the word 'Spell' in the TYPE section of the non-upgraded table
-*Try to make the grammar a little more fluid - add the highlighted changes like so: "Poisons both players for 5 and causes 1 creature to be diseased."

* = suggestion

Other than that, simple changes - it's much more sensible to include a specific number with the revised card concept, since the 'X' on the other card may not have been so clear, even though people would also have to look at your Infectious Mass card as well...

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Re: Virus Inhalation | Virus Inhalation https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=18689.msg238410#msg238410
« Reply #5 on: January 02, 2011, 03:22:13 am »
CURATOR COMMENT
-Capitalize the word 'Spell' in the TYPE section of the non-upgraded table
-*Try to make the grammar a little more fluid - add the highlighted changes like so: "Poisons both players for 5 and causes 1 creature to be diseased."

* = suggestion

Other than that, simple changes - it's much more sensible to include a specific number with the revised card concept, since the 'X' on the other card may not have been so clear, even though people would also have to look at your Infectious Mass card as well...
All fixed
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Re: Virus Inhalation | Virus Inhalation https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=18689.msg238454#msg238454
« Reply #6 on: January 02, 2011, 05:34:12 am »
CURATOR COMMENT
-Capitalize the word 'Spell' in the TYPE section of the non-upgraded table
-*Try to make the grammar a little more fluid - add the highlighted changes like so: "Poisons both players for 5 and causes 1 creature to be diseased."

* = suggestion

Other than that, simple changes - it's much more sensible to include a specific number with the revised card concept, since the 'X' on the other card may not have been so clear, even though people would also have to look at your Infectious Mass card as well...
All fixed
CURATOR COMMENT
-You need to also fix the changes for your upgraded table as well! (TEXT section doesn't match with the card image) ^^;

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Re: Virus Inhalation | Virus Inhalation https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=18689.msg238462#msg238462
« Reply #7 on: January 02, 2011, 05:52:11 am »
CURATOR COMMENT
-Capitalize the word 'Spell' in the TYPE section of the non-upgraded table
-*Try to make the grammar a little more fluid - add the highlighted changes like so: "Poisons both players for 5 and causes 1 creature to be diseased."

* = suggestion

Other than that, simple changes - it's much more sensible to include a specific number with the revised card concept, since the 'X' on the other card may not have been so clear, even though people would also have to look at your Infectious Mass card as well...
All fixed
CURATOR COMMENT
-You need to also fix the changes for your upgraded table as well! (TEXT section doesn't match with the card image) ^^;

fixed :| again lol
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