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Yondi444

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Flamethrower | Flamethrower https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=8593.msg99592#msg99592
« on: June 23, 2010, 09:27:56 pm »
NAME: Flamethrower
ELEMENT: Fire
COST: 5 :fire
TYPE: Permanent (Weapon)
ATK|HP:
ABILITY: Weapon: Deals 3 Damage.
 :air :air :air Burn: Opposing
creatures suffer -2|-1 for 2
turns.
NAME: Flamethrower
ELEMENT: Fire
COST: 5 :fire
TYPE: Permanent (Weapon)
ATK|HP:
ABILITY: Weapon: Deals 3 Damage.
 :air :air Burn: Opposing
creatures suffer -2|-1 for 2
turns.

Fewk

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Re: Flamethrower | Flamethrower https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=8593.msg99619#msg99619
« Reply #1 on: June 23, 2010, 10:14:01 pm »
Lol i thought it only affects 1 creature when i voted... as it affects all of your opponents creatures, I would say that it shouldn't stack as this would provide you with a much too easy way of shutting most decks down.

I like the idea of it being a weapon which can sort of act as a shield

Kael Hate

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Re: Flamethrower | Flamethrower https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=8593.msg99644#msg99644
« Reply #2 on: June 23, 2010, 11:00:32 pm »
Technology is elemental and magical in the world of elements, your image doesn't suit.

Could try this image.

http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z10/innermagicclub/FireBreath.jpg
http://s193.photobucket.com/albums/z10/innermagicclub/?action=view&current=FireBreath.jpg

The text needs to be smarter.
How about?

"Weapon: Deals 3 Damage.
 :air :air :air Burn: opposing creatures suffer -2|-1 for 2 turns"

Burned Status can be a Flame Bauble that goes half size the turn it is to wear off.

Yondi444

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Re: Flamethrower | Flamethrower https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=8593.msg99660#msg99660
« Reply #3 on: June 23, 2010, 11:39:02 pm »
I fixed card art and description. Really good idea Kael Hate. That was what i expected from card curator :). Thanks for review btw.

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Re: Flamethrower | Flamethrower https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=8593.msg99684#msg99684
« Reply #4 on: June 24, 2010, 12:13:40 am »
I fixed card art and description. Really good idea Kael Hate. That was what i expected from card curator :). Thanks for review btw.
No problem.

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Re: Flamethrower | Flamethrower https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=8593.msg99693#msg99693
« Reply #5 on: June 24, 2010, 12:26:14 am »
Okay, a few things:

First off - nice image update. The art reminds me of a Fire Elemental being just spewing flames from his mouth onto your creatures, which must hurt like hell. :)

With the card itself, DON'T make it stack - considering that -2 | -1 is a 'status' effect, having it 'stack' would mean that you're either a) killing it (making it like a special version of Sniper from Eagle's Eye, and b) would cause low attack creatures to obtain -attack values (which would make it work like a form of antimatter, which doesn't make sense).

Actually, would this card drop a creature with 0 or 1 Attack to -2 or -1 attack, thus healing you if they attacked? Or not? Either way, the card is a nice idea, but I think Flamethrower feels a little bit odd to place in the Elements Game as a weapon. I keep on thinking of the artillery weapon, which doesn't quite fit still...

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Re: Flamethrower | Flamethrower https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=8593.msg99697#msg99697
« Reply #6 on: June 24, 2010, 12:30:30 am »
Actually, would this card drop a creature with 0 or 1 Attack to -2 or -1 attack, thus healing you if they attacked? Or not? Either way, the card is a nice idea, but I think Flamethrower feels a little bit odd to place in the Elements Game as a weapon. I keep on thinking of the artillery weapon, which doesn't quite fit still...
Maybe a name change? Fire Breathing? I have no objections to the name as it is, as long as the imagery matches Elements theme.

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Re: Flamethrower | Flamethrower https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=8593.msg99700#msg99700
« Reply #7 on: June 24, 2010, 12:31:37 am »
Attack value when lowered by Burn can't go under 0, and ability don't stack. After few thoughts it would be clearly stupid ;).
EDIT:
Maybe something like Fire Breather would fit into this image and elements??

 

anything
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