CURATOR COMMENT-Replace the
icon in the ELEMENT section with the word, 'Time'.
means Time quanta, and not the element Time; the two are not interchangeable
-Capitalize the word, 'Permanent' in the TYPE section of the table
-Leave the ATK|HP section of the table blank if the card is not a creature (Do not use the phrase 'N/A' to fill in spots of the table)
-*Shorten the TEXT if you can:
Example:
"Every 2 turns, the most recent
killed creature is placed on your
side. Chronologic Revival (Ressurection) is
lost if no creature dies within 4 turns."
* = optional
That said, the cost is a very heavy deterrent for someone to really play this card (most PC cards can ruin this instantly). The idea of continuous resurrection is nice, but also forces a Time user to splash into another element (like Fire) in order to reap the full benefits of getting the opponent's creatures. I would reduce the cost by at least 2-3
quanta for both versions, as they seem very risky to place in the current game (unless you know your opponent isn't going to play permanent control cards, but still...).
Lovely art though.
How long did it take you to make that picture?