[...]Notes:The effect occurs instantly. Think of Sundial's effect. Because of this, I feel that the last sentence on the card is unneeded, but I added it so that people voting in the contest would better understand it.[...]
It looks like an activated ability, though. How about you replace "Renew:" with "When this card comes into play [...]" ?
How does it determine the last creature destroyed if someone uses RoF or something to murder a bunch of creatures at once?
GREAT card and GREAT art, the art realy looks like it belongs in elements. even if the card doesnt make it in, the art should. its amazing. +1 karma for kicking @ss