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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg19409#msg19409
« Reply #36 on: January 24, 2010, 03:48:43 am »
there is a 13th sign in the zodiac, it is Serpentarius, it runs from late November to mid December. It only lasts 2 weeks instead of 4, and has fallen out of favor over the years.
It is sometimes called "the lost sign"

edit, serpentarius not serpentus, aka: Ophiuchus, its 19 days, closer to 3 weeks.

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg19415#msg19415
« Reply #37 on: January 24, 2010, 05:19:53 am »
I know a 13th element is impossible. That's why I'm only going to write a STORY about it.

I know 13 is an unlucky number. That is deliberate. Void itself is antithetical to existence, and its only purpose is to erase and undo. It does not have an astrological sign; even if it did, the stars would have to be made of antihydrogen or something.

I have grouped the 12 elements into three groups; each group is an offspring of One. Void is also a part of One, programmed to reset everything back to One. However, something had gone wrong, and now Void is going to erase everything to Zero.
Essential: Time, Aether, Gravity, Entropy
Material: Fire, Water, Earth, Air
Spiritual: Life, Death, Light, Dark


OK... Here goes my story. Note that I'm writing this story at 10:50 PM at night, so I may not finish this today. The most I can write is probably the first paragraph or so. I hope I won't make it TOO long.

EDIT:
Er... Never mind. My thoughts are almost as clear as mud at almost 11:30. I obviously cannot write a story in this condition, especially when my parents may come up and yell "GO TO SLEEP". I'll write something tomorrow, or maybe Monday.
To be or not to be, I can do both at once. Go learn quantum mechanics, n00b.

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg19446#msg19446
« Reply #38 on: January 24, 2010, 01:20:52 pm »
slovenc, yours can be fourteeneth.

Because BS has better grammor and spelling, even with the spellcheck function here.
i'm slovenian. you cant blame me for not being the best writer in the world.

oh, and if you need a flash for the element battels and element descriptions i'm your guy.

Note: element descriptions will be the same as the ones that show up when you choose your element. Battels will be writen down by others. there will also be a short story (the one choosen here as the winner) and a card library (i just need the pictures).

Note for those who dont know what a "flash" is. I am reffering to a game and/or presentation (there will be buttons!).

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg19461#msg19461
« Reply #39 on: January 24, 2010, 03:07:14 pm »
could the competition be extended a bit for the slower writers? '_'
I've just noticed this topic and have been dying to put some ideas on paper since I've started this
and frankly, a week's limit isn't fair to serious writers and those who also have trouble with their connection ;D
 

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg19463#msg19463
« Reply #40 on: January 24, 2010, 03:16:07 pm »
could the competition be extended a bit for the slower writers? '_'
I've just noticed this topic and have been dying to put some ideas on paper since I've started this
and frankly, a week's limit isn't fair to serious writers and those who also have trouble with their connection ;D
Any serious writer knows there's a deadline. :)

If you can't make it to this one, don't worry, There will be another short story competition very soon. We have 3 competitions running at the same time and some of them, like this one, are recurring.

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg19467#msg19467
« Reply #41 on: January 24, 2010, 03:25:47 pm »
I wrote my "Futility" story in about an hour. Concept of it took about 5 minutes ;P

lol@Bloodshadow. Hopefully you'll think of something epic before the contest is over.

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg19470#msg19470
« Reply #42 on: January 24, 2010, 03:44:51 pm »
my method is different. i just need a little bit of an idea what am i going to write about and than it just kinda adds up.

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg19475#msg19475
« Reply #43 on: January 24, 2010, 03:53:51 pm »
my method is different. i just need a little bit of an idea what am i going to write about and than it just kinda adds up.
Better start thinking faster then, unless you want to take your time and just wait for the next one to roll around.
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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg19490#msg19490
« Reply #44 on: January 24, 2010, 04:51:32 pm »
I wrote my "Futility" story in about an hour. Concept of it took about 5 minutes ;P

lol@Bloodshadow. Hopefully you'll think of something epic before the contest is over.
Same here, took me only a few things to come up with it, and about 2 hours to write it down.
But I have to say, I really like what I've seen here, and it makes me happy to know the prize will be given to some one talanted no matter who wins.

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg19520#msg19520
« Reply #45 on: January 24, 2010, 05:57:07 pm »
my method is different. i just need a little bit of an idea what am i going to write about and than it just kinda adds up.
Better start thinking faster then, unless you want to take your time and just wait for the next one to roll around.
lol. I am the one who posted the first story.

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg19525#msg19525
« Reply #46 on: January 24, 2010, 06:02:08 pm »
my method is different. i just need a little bit of an idea what am i going to write about and than it just kinda adds up.
Better start thinking faster then, unless you want to take your time and just wait for the next one to roll around.
lol. I am the one who posted the first story.
Then ignore what i said >.> I got my posters screwed up.
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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg19762#msg19762
« Reply #47 on: January 25, 2010, 06:49:59 am »
OK, this story is NOT finished. You can see that, because it has no title yet. It is only half done. I will write the next half tomorrow, probably.


Aeons ago, in the vast and empty void of nothingness, there was only One. There was no time, no space, no dimensions, nothing of our known, perceivable universe. There was only One.

But of course, the world was not meant for only One. Thus, One gave birth to the Three: Primus, the First One; Secundus, the Second One; and Tertius, the Third One. These three primordial beings are the founders and creators of everything in our world.

Primus, the First One, gave birth to Time, Aether, Gravity, and Entropy. Time, with its omnipresent and immutable forward flow, marked the beginnings and ends of all phenomena. Aether, with its immaterial threads, weaved the very fabrics of space. Gravity, the force of absolute order, extended its pull on everything in the space created by Aether, trying to unite all into One again. Entropy, the force of pure chaos, made space random and unpredictable in its most fundamental levels, preventing it from ever merging back to One again. The four children of Primus defined all laws that govern the world.

The stage created by the children of Primus was set. The four children of Secundus, Fire, Water, Air, and Earth, worked to give matter and substance to the still-empty space. They defined the four states of matter: the solid Earth, the liquid Water, the gaseous Air, and the plasmid Fire. Fire and Water, hot and cold, defined the property of temperature; Earth and Air, corporeal and intangible, defined the solidity of form. Combining and mixing with each other, the children of Secundus created matter, filling space with substance.

By the time the children of Secundus finished their work, the world already faintly resembles our own. But the children of Primus and Secundus soon realized that the world was still, in a sense, empty. There were no other beings of conscious thought. That was when the children of of Tertius the Third one began their work.

The children of Tertius were Life, Death, Light, and Darkness. Tearing out a sliver of essence from itself and putting that essence into a construct of matter, Life created the first living creature. But as stated by the sacred law of Time, everything must have a beginning and an end; to preventing the creature from growing infinitely and out of bound, Death planted a seed of itself into the creature, a seed of degeneration and decay. Thus, the creature crafted by Life could grow, reproduce, and multiply, but it would eventually die and revert back to lifeless matter.

As the creatures adapted and evolved, they grew more intelligent, and more aware of themselves. To help guide them, Light created the first star to illuminate the world. The creatures were now able to see each other's pain and happiness, so they learned to understand and help each other. However, the Light emitted by the star could not reach everywhere; where there was no Light, there was Darkness. In the dark, creatures could only perceive themselves, and so they had become selfish, and not care for the others. Growth and decay, good and evil, those became the forces that controlled the creatures, their lives, and their societies.

Time, Aether, Gravity, Entropy, Fire, Water, Earth, Air, Life, Death, Light, and Darkness. The twelve forces that crafted the world. The One and its three children had long since faded away, and the twelve were all that remained. They became known as the Elements.

But soon, the Elements, too, began to fade. But because they crafted the world, they became a part of their creation instead of disappearing completely. The Elements had dissipated, and turned into an unique type of energy known as quanta.
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