Dissolution | Thaw

[dylanthebest]

NAME: Dissolution ELEMENT: Water COST: TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: TEXT: Destroy a frozen creature. Generate 10  quanta and one quanta for each other element.	NAME: Thaw ELEMENT: Water COST: TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: TEXT: Destroy a frozen creature. Generate 12  quanta and one quanta for each other element.

ART: dylanthebest IDEA: dylanthebest NOTES: It can be used only on your creatures SERIES:

[OldTrees]

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2) :Water is the quanta. Water is the element. Please fix this
3) Cost is not nd. Cost may be 0 but be very careful. 0 cost cards unupped deserve almost no effect.
4) leave Atk|HP blank. Do not put nd.
4a) Do not put nd anywhere. It is improper syntax. Leave those parts blank.
5) If this can target the opponents frozen creatures then it is more powerful than Shockwave for a much lower cost.
6) Why would thawing a frozen creature kill the creature?
7) There already is a card suggested that would remove the frozen condition and generate water quanta. You might want to look at it. http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,13702.0.html

The first card is always the hardest.

I will post comments on your other first cards as soon as I have time tonight.

[dylanthebest]

1)To get a correctly sized picture

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No Thumbnail?

2) :Water is the quanta. Water is the element. Please fix this
3) Cost is not nd. Cost may be 0 but be very careful. 0 cost cards unupped deserve almost no effect.
4) leave Atk|HP blank. Do not put nd.
4a) Do not put nd anywhere. It is improper syntax. Leave those parts blank.
5) If this can target the opponents frozen creatures then it is more powerful than Shockwave for a much lower cost.
6) Why would thawing a frozen creature kill the creature?
7) There already is a card suggested that would remove the frozen condition and generate water quanta. You might want to look at it. http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,13702.0.html

The first card is always the hardest.

I will post comments on your other first cards as soon as I have time tonight.

Thanks for your suggestions...I fought to kill the frozer creature because if it doesn't, it will be overpowered I think

[Ajit]

yeah it would make it less overpowered if used against yourself, but if you start freezing the opponent left and right and firing those off the opponent won't have any creatures.

unless I'm missing something.

[AnonymousRevival]

The card is so small it can't see its effect just by looking at it. Anyways, it is definitely OP. Lightning costs 2 but only deals 5 damage, this card kills no matter the HP and gains 10 quanta and one other quanta for each element.

[QuantumT]

If I had to guess, I would say that it's the water equivalent to immolation, so it's a sacrifice effect as opposed to a destroy one.

[dylanthebest]

The card is so small it can't see its effect just by looking at it. Anyways, it is definitely OP. Lightning costs 2 but only deals 5 damage, this card kills no matter the HP and gains 10 quanta and one other quanta for each element.

it 's not so much overpowered i think...because, to use it many times you must have 6 freeze and 6 thaw in your deck that deal space for some other cards...i don t know...

P.S. : sorry my english i am italian

[OldTrees]

The card is so small it can't see its effect just by looking at it. Anyways, it is definitely OP. Lightning costs 2 but only deals 5 damage, this card kills no matter the HP and gains 10 quanta and one other quanta for each element.

it 's not so much overpowered i think...because, to use it many times you must have 6 freeze and 6 thaw in your deck that deal space for some other cards...i don t know...

P.S. : sorry my english i am italian

This card instantly kills a frozen creature and gain 10
Shockwave instantly kills a frozen creature but is Air and drains 2|1

This card is superior to shockwave and has no right to be.

It is not about using this many times being OP (it would be) rather it is about using this once is OP.
Either this card needs to have a higher cost (either in quanta,cards,life, ...) or it needs to not instantly kill the opponents frozen creature (only be able to target your creatures,only removes frozen status, ...)

Don't forget to read this thread: http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,13702.0.html

[Thalas]

This card instantly kills a frozen creature and gain 10
Shockwave instantly kills a frozen creature but is Air and drains 2|1

This card is superior to shockwave and has no right to be.

It is not about using this many times being OP (it would be) rather it is about using this once is OP.
Either this card needs to have a higher cost (either in quanta,cards,life, ...) or it needs to not instantly kill the opponents frozen creature (only be able to target your creatures,only removes frozen status, ...)

Don't forget to read this thread: http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,13702.0.html

NOTES:
it can be used only on your creatures

Everyone should read the notes

Edit : Text should be something like this
Sacrifice a frozen creature to generate 10 plus 1 quantum for each non-water element.

[OldTrees]

Sorry I didn't notice the note changed.

I am still confused on how defrosting a creature would kill it.

[dylanthebest]

Sorry I didn't notice the note changed.

I am still confused on how defrosting a creature would kill it.

I added the note trying to nerf the card...I think now is less overpowered...

[AnonymousRevival]

I guess it is a little better now.