Rejuvenation Wave | Rejuvenation Surge (reworked)

[PhantomFox]

NAME: Rejuvenation Wave ELEMENT: Life COST: 7 TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: TEXT: Rejuvenation Wave starts at target creature and spreads outward.  Cures, and heals affected creatures for 5 HP. Affected empty squares heal you for 1 HP each.	NAME: Rejuvenation Surge ELEMENT: Life COST: 6 TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: TEXT: Rejuvenation Wave starts at target creature and spreads outward. Cures, and heals affected creatures for 5 HP. Affected empty squares heal you for 1 HP each.

ART: Art from Okami Screenshot from this video: IDEA: PhantomFox NOTES: Rejuvenation only affects each square once for one turn, spreading each turn like a ring.  After each turn, it spreads to all outwardly adjacent squares.  'Cure' removes all negative status effects.[/b]. SERIES:

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[bored_ninja777]

card text says spreas.. i think u meant spreads* i think i like it. maybe explain it more in notes.
missed that top note .
anyway i think just like the other guy said. less text and maybe just clarify more or give examples.

[Belthazar666]

It's a good idea, but there are just too many words in all honesty. If it could be simplified it would be great.

[PhantomFox]

Any suggestions to keep it both accurate and concise?  Or to make the ability better?

[SeddyRocky]

Would gravity pull be a negative effect?

[PhantomFox]

It is more often than not, so yes.

[AeonSiege]

Well this is my version of the text. Hope people understands it.
TEXT: Target creature spreads Rejuvenation Wave and Flowers.  Affected creatures are cured of negative status effects and gain 5 HP.
     or
TEXT: Rejuvenation Wave and Flowers spreads outward from target creature.  Affected creatures are cured of negative status effects and gain 5 HP.

I don't think it should cure gravity pull because it's not clear if it is a negative effect. But if you want to cure gravity pull then you can think of dispelling adrenaline, momentum, and/or other status effects too.

Does this effect goes back and forward from 1 creature to 1 adjacent creature? If so then how is it going to end?

[Korugar]

Well, you have a typo in them. It says "spreas" instead of "spreads".

[harry959]

Seems OP. If you fill up the first line with creatures and cast this, asuming the creatures have a least 1 attack, 23 damage. 6 of these equals 138 damage. Make it consume the rest of your Life quanta.

[AeonSiege]

I don't like that Flowers deals damage and also I think you need to improve your mechanic of spread. Maybe spread could be = (generating up to 6 generic immaterial Wave 0/1 creatures around the targeted creature. Wave creatures generate up to 3 Wave creatures in the direction they were created each turn and then disappears. Wave creatures spreads only the curative part of the Rejuvenation Wave when generating a Wave creature on an occupied space. The new affected creatures spread Wave creatures only in the direction they were affected.). I think this explains the representation of wave motion in card effect. Hope people understand this.

[PhantomFox]

Hmm.  I think I'm going to have to overhaul this card a lot.  The inspiration was from the video that I linked.  I want a wave of Life, but just healing/curing seemed a bit lackluster.  I'll go back to the drawing board, but if y'all have any ideas on how the wave could effect empty spaces, that would be great.

[Korugar]

Maybe the flowers could have some sort of natural Empathic Bond ability. 1|1 creatures that heal you one point per turn. They'd be easy to kill, but annoying until then, and fit in with the Life theme better.