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Re: Angry Hornet | Furious Hornet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12307.msg155581#msg155581
« Reply #12 on: September 10, 2010, 04:12:51 am »
I updated it with a swarm ability.  Any more suggestions before submitting to crucible?

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Re: Angry Hornet | Furious Hornet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12307.msg156722#msg156722
« Reply #13 on: September 11, 2010, 09:46:33 pm »
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-Fix the ATK|HP values in your table; your picture states that the creatures are 3|N+2, and not 3|4.
-Fix the discrepancies between the upped card text and table text (shouldn't it be 'Furious' Hornet?)


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While using Fractal on this will allow you to exploit Swarm, I get the impression that having another 'insect' creature for Air is a bit redundant, but the synergy between Air and Fire here is pretty obvious and useful. You may have to change the name of your skill, 'Rage', because there's already a mechanic in game that uses that ability name (see Red Nymph | Fire Nymph (http://elementswiki.co.cc/cards-fire/red-nymph-fire-nymph/)).

Can you heal the damage that a Hornet does to itself via its ability? (i.e. - using Guardian Angels to repair the damage done by rage)

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Re: Angry Hornet | Furious Hornet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12307.msg157877#msg157877
« Reply #14 on: September 13, 2010, 05:19:50 pm »
Fixed the table to match the card.  Also, fixed the upped card to say furious hornet in the text and changed the text in the swarm ability on both cards to just say Hornet to avoid any confusion as to whether upped and unupped would stack with each other.  I also changed the ability name to fury.

I would say the damage should be able to be healed since rage potion damage can be healed.  Air does already have a few insect creatures but I think the card overall works well with the theme of air.

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Re: Angry Hornet | Furious Hornet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12307.msg158928#msg158928
« Reply #15 on: September 15, 2010, 06:22:01 am »
I would say the damage should be able to be healed since rage potion damage can be healed.  Air does already have a few insect creatures but I think the card overall works well with the theme of air.
Very well then.

(Sidenote - even though the art isn't "OMG IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL I WANT TO MARRY IT", the fact that you still took your own time to draw something gives you brownie points from me. :) Thanks for saving me from having a headache if you used licensed material and whatnot.)

 

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