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Floating Island | Flying Dream https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=10822.msg133025#msg133025
« on: August 07, 2010, 03:54:25 pm »
NAME:
Floating Island
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
9 :air
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
N/A
ABILITY:
For each Airborne creature on your side of the field, heal 1 HP and gain 1 :air per turn.

:earth Roost: Target friendly Airborne creature loses Airborne status, and becomes immaterial for 1 turn, after which it regains Airborne and loses its immaterial status.

Upkeep: 1 :life, 1 :earth and 1 :water per turn.
NAME:
Flying Dream
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
12 :air
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
N/A
ABILITY:
For each Airborne creature on your side of the field, heal 1 HP and gain 1 :air per turn.

:aether Roost: Target friendly Airborne creature loses Airborne status, and becomes immaterial for 2 turns, after which it regains Airborne and loses its immaterial status.

Upkeep: 3 :air per turn.
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NOTES:
If upkeep cannot be maintained, the card is destroyed.

Floating Island | Flying Dream cannot be stacked.
SERIES:
TRIAL OF AIR: Gale Storm Series (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,10831.0.html)

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Re: Floating Island | Flying Dream https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=10822.msg133050#msg133050
« Reply #1 on: August 07, 2010, 05:09:34 pm »
CURATOR COMMENT

To Be Crucible Ready
- leave the Atk|Hp blank if it has none
- provide a link to the source image
- provide a link to the Series Toopic (trial Requirement)

Questions / Comments / Suggestions
That is a hideous amount of text for a card. There is no way that could be implemented in the game.

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Re: Floating Island | Flying Dream https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=10822.msg133221#msg133221
« Reply #2 on: August 07, 2010, 09:13:39 pm »
While I acknowledge it is a hideous amount of text, I will currently focus on being approved and then worrying about text limitations.
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Re: Floating Island | Flying Dream https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=10822.msg135440#msg135440
« Reply #3 on: August 10, 2010, 11:14:56 pm »
Promise to Kuroaitou:

Will change the description text to :

Gain 1 HP & 1 :air per turn for each airborne creature on your field
:earth Roost: Target friendly airborne creature and give it immortality for 1 turn.


Semi-complete, will work on upgraded version next. :)

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Re: Floating Island | Flying Dream https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=10822.msg135443#msg135443
« Reply #4 on: August 10, 2010, 11:18:53 pm »
Here's my suggestion on how to simplify this card. (Good god :P)

1. Remove the upkeep cost. It seems VASTLY underpowered to require 3 different quanta costs as an upkeep for an Air card. Fireflies can't even generate the quanta you need for that, so it'd be forced into a rainbow (which is not a good idea).

2. Why does an Airbourne creature have to loose its 'airbourne' passive when it gets near its roost (i.e. - become 'immaterial/invulnerable')? It can still be theoretically airbourne, as 'Roosting' is done in high altitudes (thus, making it above ground/airbourne).

3. Simplify the text from this:

"For each Airborne creature on your side of the field, heal 1 HP and gain 1 :air per turn.

:earth Roost: Target friendly Airborne creature loses Airborne status, and becomes immaterial for 1 turn, after which it regains Airborne and loses its immaterial status.

Upkeep: 1 :life, 1 :earth and 1 :water per turn."

...to this, and compare the results. ;)

"Gain 1 :air & 1 HP per turn for each
airbourne creature on your field
 :earth Roost:
Target friendly airbourne creature
and give it immortality for 1 turn."

EDIT: ninjaed ;)

 

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