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Re: Your Elemental Life [The Tutorial of Tutorials] https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=53443.msg1122609#msg1122609
« Reply #12 on: January 22, 2014, 08:27:03 pm »
I would recommend putting a newline in between paragraphs. You may even consider breaking up some paragraphs, unsure. At the moment, the wall of text might come off as a bit intimidating, especially the deck building section.
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Re: Your Elemental Life [The Tutorial of Tutorials] https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=53443.msg1122685#msg1122685
« Reply #13 on: January 23, 2014, 12:33:01 pm »
I would recommend putting a newline in between paragraphs. You may even consider breaking up some paragraphs, unsure. At the moment, the wall of text might come off as a bit intimidating, especially the deck building section.
I was actually considering spoilers, while I was writing the second part, but I was already after the first half, so I decided that if someone actually felt it needed I would have put the whole guide under many spoilers.
That'll be it after I get the third part on.

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Re: Your Elemental Life [The Tutorial of Tutorials] https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=53443.msg1123872#msg1123872
« Reply #14 on: January 29, 2014, 09:20:21 pm »
Part Three is up and took way too long to be done compared to the amount of work it needed. I put everything under spoilers. If it's liked, I may do it to the other parts.

 

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