***TRIALS RESPONSE***This is a nice use of the Shard of Patience, for sure. I agree with most of the above suggestions, such as dropping the Shards of Sacrifice and adding in three more Shards of Patience. Once you get the SoPs going, the SoSas will be useless because you'll be healing your opponent with your buffed Physalias. Also, this allows you to buff them all at once after you use Fractal. Dropping the Inundations to three is nice, as well, because you don't want them filling up slots in your hand when you play Fractal. The biggest problem I saw when testing this in the trainer is a lack of Aether quanta. You are generating quite an excess of Death and Water quanta, which is good for Fractal decks, but you want to be sure to be able to play that key card as soon as possible. The best solution to this is probably switching a few of your Water Towers for Water Pendulums.
Starting with your Version 2 deck, I would make the following changes:
* Drop four Shards of Sacrifice
* Drop one Inundation
* Drop two Water Towers
* Add three Shards of Patience
* Add three Water Pendulums
* Add one Death Pendulum
This will leave you with the following deck:
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I hope that helps!