Fractal just seems like your trying to combo too much, I like the idea but I don't think you will pull it off soon enough. I would personaly take out all the aether stuff, and that will reduce your deck down to 34 cards so you draw your poison and squids faster.
Then replace some bone pillers with Pendulums of death, and have a water mark.
Turn 1 get death quanta atleast unless you draw no pendulums, and 1 water. Now there only 4 cards in your whole deck you can't play on turn 2. By turn 3 depending on the pendulum draw, ect... you should have everything you need ot on the field or close to it.
Also because you will have more water like this add ice shield.
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Then fine tune your deck as needed.