Would This Deck Be Any Good ? 5l8 5l8 5l8 5l8 5l8 5l8 5lf 5lf 5lf 5lf 5lf 5lf 5oc 5oc 5oc 5oc 5oc 5oc 5oc 5oc 5oc 5oc 5od 5od 5od 5od 5od 5od 5oe 5oe 5oe 5oe 5oe 5oe 5oj 5oj 5oj 5oj 5oj 5oj
I Think There All Aloud.
If you want to use more than 30 cards in a PvP deck, you need some kind of 'Stalling' (Shields, Healing) something to stop the enemy from attacking you. It looks like you tried to combine two deck ideas into one deck. Anything can work.
Here is a somewhat normal FFQ + Hope deck:
5c6 5c6 5lk 5lk 5lk 5oc 5oc 5oc 5oc 5oc 5oj 5oj 5oj 5oj 5oj 5oj 5ok 5ok 5ok 5ok 5ok 5ok 5pu 5pu 5pu 5pu 5pu 5pu 5pu 5pu 5pu 5pu
And here is a somewhat normal Dive deck:
5lb 5lb 5lb 5lb 5lb 5lb 5lf 5lf 5lf 5lf 5lf 5lf 5mq 5mq 5mq 5mq 5mq 5mq 5mq 5mq 5mq 5mq 5mq 5mq 5og 5og 5ol 5ol 5op 5op
You can use Short Bow(s) instead of Owl's Eye(s) also.
*Note: These are untested, they are just to give you an idea.