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Re: WW III RP topic https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32908.msg420902#msg420902
« Reply #24 on: November 05, 2011, 02:15:27 pm »
OOC: I’m gonna move the plot along; sorry I left you guys hanging.
(Time break)
(Grenexus’s POV)
   Grenexus ducked as shrapnel exploded around him. The battle had been going on for nearly twenty minutes, and neither side was giving quarter. Grenexus un-holstered his fire eel, an eel genetically modified to breathe fire as well as survive long periods outside of water. Point… Shoot! The fire eel discharged straight into the turbine of an Industrial Powers Hover-disc a large, metallic frisbee shaped machine that was propelled by a combination of superheated air jets and turbines, and was inspired by pre-apocalypse legends of extra-terrestrial beings. “Take that turds!” Grenexus muttered under his breath.
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   Temen was thrown to the ground by a nearby explosion. He stood up and dusted himself off. Nothing, not explosions, not death, not even rabid weasels were going to stop him from getting revenge on the soldier Muse… Benjamin?
OOC: I added some foreshadowing in this post. Guess where it is :)
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Re: WW III RP topic https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32908.msg421614#msg421614
« Reply #25 on: November 06, 2011, 08:07:29 pm »
   Temen was thrown to the ground by a nearby explosion. He stood up and dusted himself off. Nothing, not explosions, not death, not even rabid weasels were going to stop him from getting revenge on the soldier Muse… Benjamin?
OOC: I added some foreshadowing in this post. Guess where it is :)
OOC: Temen's gonna get attacked by a pack of rabid weasels ?  :))
Glenford Raleigh's point of view:
I sat in the Lightning transport with satisfaction, watching the two different sides tear each other apart.
   "War is so fun..." I sighed. Nobody even knows why they're tearing each other apart, they may even be related or be acquainted but that doesn't stop the blood shed and fury...

Akikaze Shiro's point of view:
I grit my teeth and readied myself for the pain... this was my only opportunity, the man known as Temen wasn't paying attention and was busy evading bullets.
   POP.
   I did my best not to scream in agony as the ball of my shoulder slide out of it's joint, effectively dislocating my arm. From there sliding out of the knots were easy. Then using my good hand to get it in position, I used the talons on my feet to saw through the rope about my legs. I got up swiftly and walked to the aircraft, gritting my teeth yet again I smashed my shoulder against the wall of the air craft which poped it cleanly back in place.
   Now lets see about taking out the gent inside the craft... I glanced over at Temen to see if I was noticed; he was thrown on to the ground by the explosion. Good timing... flexing my arms I slowly shifted them into wings, but the pain on my arm was far to much to endure, looks like I'm gonna have to do this the good old fashion way. I slipped out the light-weight pistol that I kept strapped on my back under my shirt and crept slowly up to the entrance of the vehicle.

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Re: WW III RP topic https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32908.msg421963#msg421963
« Reply #26 on: November 07, 2011, 03:12:13 pm »
"Give me some Venus seeds" Muse demanded from Sharron, crouching under the tumbled table.
From all directions they were under attack of soldiers from Industrial Power. Muse and Sharron were heavily outnumbered.
She fired another barrage of violets seed on the floor, which in grew up in seconds and blossomed, exuding highly toxical gas. Sharron was just assistant in Genetic laboratory, but her knowledges and genetically-altered seeds were very useful in battle, furthermore she had precise shot.
Muse's Papillon was currently dealing with enraged Temen, who was steadily getting closer to Muse.
"Here don't waste it," Sharron gave Muse gun with Venus seed bullets ", just defend the laboratory from these all-destroying maniacs."
Bullet whizzed near Muse's ear.
"whoo. That was close" Muse instantly shot five bullet at the enemies. The seeds sprouted out piercing hit soldiers with their amazingly strong roots
"But this isn't Venus' seeds." complained Muse
"Sorry, here" she threw different magazine. 

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Re: WW III RP topic https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32908.msg422136#msg422136
« Reply #27 on: November 07, 2011, 10:37:41 pm »
"Give me some Venus seeds" Muse demanded from Sharron, crouching under the tumbled table.
From all directions they were under attack of soldiers from Industrial Power. Muse and Sharron were heavily outnumbered.
She fired another barrage of violets seed on the floor, which in grew up in seconds and blossomed, exuding highly toxical gas. Sharron was just assistant in Genetic laboratory, but her knowledges and genetically-altered seeds were very useful in battle, furthermore she had precise shot.
Muse's Papillon was currently dealing with enraged Grenexus, who was steadily getting closer to Muse.
"Here don't waste it," Sharron gave Muse gun with Venus seed bullets ", just defend the laboratory from these all-destroying maniacs."
Bullet whizzed near Muse's ear.
"whoo. That was close" Muse instantly shot five bullet at the enemies. The seeds sprouted out piercing hit soldiers with their amazingly strong roots
"But this isn't Venus' seeds." complained Muse
"Sorry, here" she threw different magazine.
OOC: Remember, Grenexus is with muse, pappilion is fighting against Temen.
   Temen was thrown to the ground by a nearby explosion. He stood up and dusted himself off. Nothing, not explosions, not death, not even rabid weasels were going to stop him from getting revenge on the soldier Muse… Benjamin?
OOC: I added some foreshadowing in this post. Guess where it is :)
OOC: Temen's gonna get attacked by a pack of rabid weasels ?  :))
OOC:  ::) Not even close. No more guesses for you!
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Re: WW III RP topic https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32908.msg422298#msg422298
« Reply #28 on: November 08, 2011, 06:13:30 am »
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OOC: Remember, Grenexus is with muse, pappilion is fighting against Temen.
Ah sorry, I confused your characters. Grenexus should be replaced with Temen. Original Post EDITED

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Re: WW III RP topic https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32908.msg424398#msg424398
« Reply #29 on: November 12, 2011, 06:58:47 pm »
OOC: I've been working on curating some of the stuff into a more story-like form, here is the timeline, more later.
edit: just finished formatting chapter one, the zzz at the beginning of the file name is just so it's easier to find in my documents.
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Re: WW III RP topic https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32908.msg424459#msg424459
« Reply #30 on: November 12, 2011, 09:09:57 pm »
OOC: I've been working on curating some of the stuff into a more story-like form, here is the timeline, more later.
edit: just finished formatting chapter one, the zzz at the beginning of the file name is just so it's easier to find in my documents.
Do you have doc version, please? I have Microsoft office 2003.

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Re: WW III RP topic https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32908.msg424510#msg424510
« Reply #31 on: November 12, 2011, 10:34:34 pm »
OOC: I've been working on curating some of the stuff into a more story-like form, here is the timeline, more later.
edit: just finished formatting chapter one, the zzz at the beginning of the file name is just so it's easier to find in my documents.
Cool.  ;D If you want an editor to clean it up a bit I would be happy to help. I'm pretty good at spotting errors/cleaning things up/making it flow better, as I have to reread my own stories ten billion times to make sure it's all correct.  ;)

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Re: WW III RP topic https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32908.msg424549#msg424549
« Reply #32 on: November 13, 2011, 12:44:18 am »
OOC: I've been working on curating some of the stuff into a more story-like form, here is the timeline, more later.
edit: just finished formatting chapter one, the zzz at the beginning of the file name is just so it's easier to find in my documents.
Cool.  ;D If you want an editor to clean it up a bit I would be happy to help. I'm pretty good at spotting errors/cleaning things up/making it flow better, as I have to reread my own stories ten billion times to make sure it's all correct.  ;)
OOC: sweet, any help is welcome, also, once I have all of what's hapened so far curated, I will post it on this (http://www.fictionpress.com/) website.
OOC: I've been working on curating some of the stuff into a more story-like form, here is the timeline, more later.
edit: just finished formatting chapter one, the zzz at the beginning of the file name is just so it's easier to find in my documents.
Do you have doc version, please? I have Microsoft office 2003.
I have no idea what you mean, but hopefully, this will work:
timeline (story form)
~After the Apocalypse~ a history.
2026 C.E.: Advances in modern technology allow scientists to modify human genes exactly as they want, with exactly the results they intended
2026 C.E.: English is established as a worldwide language. All countries now speak English except for Brasil
2027 C.E.: The company GeneStuff .inc begins marketing a series of products that change a customer’s gene structure permanently, to cause changes in appearance.
2027 C.E.: Scientists from around the world begin a project to permanently modify all human genes so humans could become stronger, prettier, faster, and more intelligent.
2028 C.E.: Scientists settle apon the idea of transmitting the genes through a virus.
2029 C.E.: During the last stages of testing, a scientist knocks over a vial of virus that had been decommissioned.
2029 C.E.: All efforts to contain the virus fail. The virus infects the populace.
2029 C.E.: Riots due to the spread of the virus topple world governments. Most people die when infected with the virus, although a few are improved.
2030 C.E.: The last of the world’s governments are dissolved, leaving the world in complete anarchy.
2031 C.E.: Death toll: 6.93 billion people are dead. 70 million people remain in the entire world.
0 A.t.A. (After the Apocalypse): The survivors of humanity struggle to stay alive.
47 A.t.A.: The first of the Apocalypse Nations begin to form.
127 A.t.A.: The countries following are formed:

North American Alliance
Panaman Trade States
El Domínio Brasilero
European Union
Australia
The Democratic Kingdom of Japan
Philippine Republic
Mexan Empire
S.A. Hispanic Alliance
A.A. (African alliance)
Russian Empire
Chinese Empire

130 A.t.A.: Fearing the powers of the other nations, Each alliance is consolidated into one country.
131 A.t.A.: Tensions rise. Consolidated alliances ally with other Alliances with similar views to help protect themselves.

(Industrial Powers:)

Mexan Empire
S.A. Hispanic Alliance
A.A. (African alliance)
Russian Empire
Chinese Empire

(Genetic Alliance:)

North American Alliance
Panaman Trade States:
El Domínio Brasilero
European Union
Australia
The Democratic Kingdom of Japan
Philippine Republic

133 A.t.A. (Now): Tensions reach a breaking point. The two main factions, the Industrial Powers, countries that had been poor before the apocalypse that had emulated the original “first world countries” by building large fleets of machines, and the Genetic Alliance, “first world” countries that had experienced first-hand the failure of their beloved technology, and had decided that they could only rely on their own abilities, declare war on each other.

chapter one of the RP (I just took some of the posts, formatted them slightly different, and re-arranged them.)
(Akikaze Shiro’s POV)
How strange life has been for me of late... I thought as I sat awaiting my next commands. Form my home land, DKoJapan, to this place. My mind was still in a haze, I kept thinking about what happened after that never ending flight from Japan to California; I had collapsed, scrawny as death and tired to my bones.
My wings still ache to this day and I have no doubt I would have died if it weren't for that child that found me. I never learned her name, or her families' and I stayed at their house for less than a day before I moved on, but it will forever stick with me that the cruelty of humans far out weighs their kindness, because as I was leaving that place I saw a man come into their house and demand for food with his rifle. I know that if it was truly food he was after he would have gotten it, because they were kind people, but it wasn't food, but slaughter he had an appetite for. The sound of gun shots echoed across the still sea as they went off.
   Before I even knew what I was doing I found myself running back to the house, my gun in hand.
 As soon as I saw the blood on the walls and the bodies on the floor I emptied the whole clip into the murderer rifling through the things they had once owned.
    As usual, my morality surfaced in weird ways and I had thought to myself that such shameful things shouldn't be allowed to happen... So I joined the army.
    "Stupidest thing I've ever done..."
 "Huh? Asked a man walking by.
    Nothing," I said with a smile, "just thinking about the past."
(Grenexus POV)
   Grenexus cursed. The darned Industrial Powers had finally made their move. He took off his headset, yelling at the rest of his squad. While he was by far the youngest commander in the army, the Genetic Alliance army people had seen his innate skills as a tactician, and put his in command of his own three person squad, consisting of an Asian, probably Democratic Kingdom of Japan in origin, who looked to be about 27 but claimed he was much older, although he didn't act like it, as well as an 11 year old who called himself "Muse," although he seemed to be much older than 11, he claimed he was that age, and Grenexus chose to believe him; distrust bred fear, fear bred hatred, and hatred caused death. What a strange squad I have mused Grenexus. He and his squad were based in the southern N.A.A., in the Missouri Tip, the only part of the entire Midwest Federation, and even the entire N.A.A. that was southward of the top of a component state of the Mexan Empire called New Mexico.
   They had been based here to ward of Mexan advances into the N.A.A., and they were doing their job to their utmost, and had fought off nearly an entire platoon of Mexan soldiers so far from their fortified base, but their ammo was running out, and food supplies were almost non-existent. If it weren't for his naturally cool attitude, Grenexus would have panicked.
(Temen's POV)
   Temen ground his teeth in frustration. The only thing stopping the advance of the Industrial Powers into less civilized lands was one squad, consisting of merely three people! Slowly he was beginning to realize the strategy of the Genetic Alliance. Where the Industrial Powers preferred to barrel through with sheer might apparently, the Genetic Alliance preferred to use small, compact, teams of highly trained soldiers specializing in specific areas, each to do a particular job. Admittedly, their strategy appears to be working, but that doesn't mean that we haven't elite soldiers of our own! He thought.
   He ran up to his commanding officer and saluted him. "Sir, permission to make a quick attack using my hopper?" while, for the most part, the army had issued him new equipment, they had let him keep his hopper, seeing the wisdom of letting him use a machine he was already used to. The officer scratched his bearded chin, before saying "You may... but be careful, the men like you, and having you die to would impact morale even more." Temen nodded, slightly overwhelmed with the knowledge. He moved away from the officer and to the Hopper, turning the key in the ignition. He saluted the officer again. "I'll see you again when they're all dead," Temen said. The hopper rumbled, and Temen lightly pressed the acceleration pedal, throwing it into the air.
(Muse’s POV /flashback)
    "What's your name?"
    "My name is Benj.."
    "That's a lie!" interrupted him Emma
    "Yes, yes" nodded Remi
    "Don't yell Emma, our name is Benjamin as well." argued Noah
    "Who are you to decide."Emma snapped at him
    "Who, who?" Remi repeated
    "Disappear, disappear" Muse screamed "Disappear, disappear" Now everyone was looking at Muse with a lackadaisical expressions.
    "New person" mumbled Remi not very keenly. That concluded our conversation
     
The book fell on the floor. I bent down to pick it up, the librarian, Mrs. Visser looked at me sternly.  She didn't trust and why should she, I was one of the dangerous people that were able to read your thoughts, stab your back without touching the knife or warp your mind.
She firmly held a gun in her right hand, which granted her with feeling that she can hector anyone who enters library, including me. I returned her look with a smile, irritating her more than calming. I put book into my bag and tried to leave as quickly as possible. I walked few metres when someone shouted at me.
"Master Remi, I brought the notes from Thijs you wanted." I turned around and saw Sophie, she clutched some paper in her ridiculously small hands. She was 8 years old girl with blond hair and shabby clothes.
On librarian's face appeared unhidden disgust.
"Anything else you want Master Remi?" Said Sophie before I could stop her. Mrs. Vries had hate in her eyes and felt it, she hated me so much that she would kill me without hesitation, however she didn't kill me.
"Get out of here Noah, or else." I took Sophie for cloth and dragged her out of the library. Rest of the way back to my room I didn't spoke a word, but I knew that I can't keep on like this forever, even though normal people learned to co-exist with small genetic abnormalities, they still feared those with murderous powers. I need to escape; even the turmoil of war is better.
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Re: WW III RP topic https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32908.msg424552#msg424552
« Reply #33 on: November 13, 2011, 01:00:56 am »
chapter two:
(Temen’s POV)
Temen lay on the ground in shock. He had just been VIOLATED by an ELEVEN year old! He would never live this down! As reason began to sink in, he began to check his memories. While it was impossible to block Muse’s though probe, hearing about the creepy mind reader in the Genetic Army had been enough to get his to try to make failsafes. He had managed to bury bits of each memory he had into his subconscious, so he would be able to look at each fragment and see if it had a corresponding memory. If it didn’t, then he would know that that memory had been removed, and he would be able to re-create most of it using deduction. Finding all of his memories in order, Temen smiled. Apparently the kid had only had a look-see, and he had missed one crucial memory. Reaching inside a secret pocket, Temen pulled out a secret transmitter. He placed it onto a counter. That should send those turds  on a run for their money. The transmitter was built to overload scanning systems with fake distress cries, as well as turn off all alarms and prevent the real cries of distress. Temen chuckled. Looks like it wasn’t the only thing he forgot. Seeing that no guards were around, Temen strode through the door that Muse… Benjamin? Had left open in a gesture of absentmindedness.
(Akikaze Shiro’s POV)
I sat once again on the little grassy bump in our camp the other soldiers referred to as 'Shiro's think place' and rubbed by sore foot. Stupid Industrial Powers... their heads are harder than rocks.
I watched with interest as my Captain and a few others dragged the limp soldier into what I cheerfully referred to as 'the guest room', not long after Muse followed. I began to be very curious what was going on down there.
Eoooweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeoeeeeeeeoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
WHAT IN THE-? I jumped to my feet. My ears were being blasted from every angle. "Gnyaaaaaaaaaaahh!" A hand tapped me from behind and I let of a less than masculine scream.
A soldier was behind me, "All of our alarms are going off, where the heck is the captain?" He shouted over the noise.
"In the base, I think, you stay here and try and keep order. I'll try and find him." I left the soldier and ran to the base of the door, running recklessly through the halls to find Grenexus.
(Temen's POV)
I snuck slowly across a wall. I had recently found an armory room and had decided to “borrow” some of their weapons. From what I had seen, they were perfectly functional, albeit a bit on the weird side. Suddenly, I saw one of the people who had captured me rush past me. I smiled. Rushing forward, I brained him on the head with my gun, knocking him out. Dragging his body into a secure location, I though “let’s see how this turd likes being captured.” In the distance, I could hear the noise of a Lightning Transport 45-H7. While they took lots of fuel and couldn’t carry a large enough arsenal of weapons to make them useful as war machines, they were the fastest air mechs we had, and could easily penetrate Genetic Alliance air space. “Looks like I’m gonna be out of her sooner than they thought,” I thought with a smile.
(Muse’s POV)
"Silent laughter
Heard by a deaf man
The mime was being tortured
The audience applauded." recited Muse.
Emma, Noah and Benjamin waited motionless, sitting on the beach, just Remi was building his malformed sandcastle.
"The die is cast"

Muse was in an engineering laboratory re-creating "Hopper", when he heard voices of soldiers, who were anxiously running around the base and were searching for the escapee. But it seemed that Muse is not concerned at all. Right now he was also looking for something; though it wasn't Temen (Muse exactly knew where he is). He was looking for crystal electricity accumulator. Stupid Grenexus, why he had to destroy the robot. With it my work would be done much sooner, machine materials in Genetic Alliance are common as salt in a fresh water.
At any rate Muse was enjoying himself, everything fell into place. At the same time it will be fun and the Industrial Powers will suffer heavy loss.
Didn't I say that I will play with him?
chapter three:
(Akikaze Shiro's POV)
Where in the world is the captain? I thought as I bolted down the halls.
      "Captain!" I shouted, "where the-"
      I was cut short as a rifle appeared out of nowhere and bashed me over the head. Oh, snap.

      My vision was swimming and my head pounded with pain. "Wha ha...ed..." I slurred ineligibly.
      "I just gave you a little return gift for the one you gave me this morning." My eyes tried to focus on where the voice was coming from, it looked to be the man I knocked off the hopper.
      I tried to touch my head with my hands but found them tied, "... I don't think I like this gift. Can I return it for a non-lethal pair of tube socks?"
      My joke seemed to annoy him but he didn't reply to it.
(Temen’s POV)
   I had to hand it to the guy. I had bound his hands and feet, gagged him, and stuck my pistol to his head and he was still being infuriating. “shut the frick up before I splatter your brains across the floor,” I whispered at him, in my most deadly cold voice. I dragged him towards the Lightning Transport 45-H7,being piloted by my captain, Glenford Raleigh. He chuckled at me, fiddling with his mustache “I see you got a prisoner. Looks like a handful.” I merely grunted, shunting his body into the transport.
(Muse’s POV)
"A feint within a feint within a feint.....Seemingly without end." sighed Noah.
"What? Some proverb?" Emma took interest, she restlessly sat on the sand.
"No, it's from some book I read, when I was still human. I don't know it's name anymore." Noah sat down next to Emma. The sky was monotonously gray today, no clouds appeared, nor tide brought something interesting or useful.
Remi came to Noah. "Will play, you and I?"
Noah declined his offer to join him in creating even more malformed sandcastle than before, which made Remi cry.

Muse opened the heavy steel door leading to headquarters. Technicians tried to re-boot scanners, unsurprisingly without result. The jammer was too strong for them.
"Sir, we still didn't overcome the jammer." said apologetically one of the technicians to Grenexus.
Grenexus swallowed, those villains dazzled and deafened this base, entirely paralyzing them, if they attack..... "Prepare our defense, Second. This is most likely a planned attack."
"Understood." replied the Second.
"uhgh, uhgh." Muse coughed to draw attention to himself.
"What is it Muse?" sullenly asked Grenexus, he didn't have time to spare.
"The soldier from Industrial Power, who we caught was actually trojan horse. I think his intention was to be imprisoned here, to jam our systems. Then he escaped in oncoming chaos and anarchy, which he caused, with help of some captain Raleigh. Currently they are escaping through one of the Mexan Alliance’s Lightning Transports.
"Why didn't you say earlier?" Grenexus rapped out at him
"I had to repair Hopper, now Pappilion, I took the original spider-esque body and modified it into a more wasp like shape while we are here at base. Don't worry commander everything is under control, I even sent "Papillon 7.0" to eliminate them."
(Temen’s POV)
Glenford stroked his beard, smiling slightly. He turned to face Temen. “Boy… this is an interesting opportunity… you did get captured, yes, and doubtlessly revealed every secret you know to the Genetic Alliance, but thankfully, you knew precious little secrets, and while escaping, you placed a jammer onto their base, giving us a perfect way to counterattack.” Glenford placed his hand on Temen’s arm. “Are you with me?” he asked.
Temen nodded, smiling impishly. “Anything to get back at those Geneticist turds”
Glenford laughed, before taking out a transmitter and saying “Hey boys, we have an opening, how would you like to squish the Genetic Alliance personnel who were blockading us down by the Missouri tip?” deafening cries of approval could be heard through the transmitter.
(Grenexus’s POV)
Grenexus ran, cursing to himself. crap! just as Muse had predicted, the Industrial Alliance had decided to counterattack while they were weak. He yelled at the soldiers manning the bullet plants at the walls. “Make sure you have the right fertilizer! You want incendiary, not normal!” Finally, he reached his spot. He pulled out a pot containing a special plant variety he had breed himself. “Time to give those turds some payback.” Placing the plant in the weapon niche, he activated the plant by dumping some blue liquid on the plant. The plant unfurled, revealing a red flower resembling a head with “wings” of white petals coming out from either side and a plumage of red petals coming out the back, making the plant resemble a large spindly red bird. Grenexus smiled. “Time to show our Industrialist friends why I called you the Phoenix plant.”
here is chapter four (so far) but I want to extend it some more before finalizing it. Also, please reveal more about the personality and backgrounds of your characters in your posts, I will have a quick description of each character, but there won't be much more than their appearances in it.
(Grenexus’s POV)
Grenexus ducked as shrapnel exploded around him. The battle had been going on for nearly twenty minutes, and neither side was giving quarter. Grenexus un-holstered his fire eel, an eel genetically modified to breathe fire as well as survive long periods outside of water. Point… Shoot! The fire eel discharged straight into the turbine of an Industrial Powers Hover-disc a large, metallic frisbee shaped machine that was propelled by a combination of superheated air jets and turbines, and was inspired by pre-apocalypse legends of extra-terrestrial beings. “Take that turds!” Grenexus muttered under his breath.
(Temen’s POV)   
Temen was thrown to the ground by a nearby explosion. He stood up and dusted himself off. Nothing, not explosions, not death, not even rabid weasels were going to stop him from getting revenge on the soldier Muse… Benjamin?
(Glenford Raleigh's POV)
I sat in the Lightning transport with satisfaction, watching the two different sides tear each other apart.
 "War is so fun..." I sighed. Nobody even knows why they're tearing each other apart, they may even be related or be acquainted but that doesn't stop the bloodshed and fury...
(Akikaze Shiro's POV)
I grit my teeth and readied myself for the pain... this was my only opportunity, the man known as Temen wasn't paying attention and was busy evading bullets.
 POP.
 I did my best not to scream in agony as the ball of my shoulder slide out of its joint, effectively dislocating my arm. From there sliding out of the knots was easy. Then using my good hand to get it in position, I used the talons on my feet to saw through the rope about my legs. I got up swiftly and walked to the aircraft; gritting my teeth yet again I smashed my shoulder against the wall of the air craft which popped it cleanly back in place.
Now let’s see about taking out the gent inside the craft... I glanced over at Temen to see if I was noticed; he was thrown on to the ground by the explosion. Good timing... flexing my arms I slowly shifted them into wings, but the pain on my arm was far too much to endure, looks like I'm gonna have to do this the good old fashion way. I slipped out the light-weight pistol that I kept strapped on my back under my shirt and crept slowly up to the entrance of the vehicle.
(Muse’s POV)
"Give me some Venus seeds" Muse demanded from Sharron, crouching under the tumbled table.
From all directions they were under attack of soldiers from Industrial Power. Muse and Sharron were heavily outnumbered.
She fired another barrage of violets seed on the floor, which in grew up in seconds and blossomed, exuding highly toxic gas. Sharron was just an assistant in a Genetic laboratory, but her knowledge and genetically-altered seeds were very useful in battle, furthermore she had a precise shot.
Muse's Papillon was currently dealing with enraged Temen, who was steadily getting closer to Muse.
"Here don't waste it," Sharron gave Muse gun with Venus seed bullets. "Just defend the laboratory from these all-destroying maniacs."
Bullet whizzed near Muse's ear.
"Whoo. That was close…" Muse instantly shot five bullets at the enemies. The seeds sprouted out piercing hit soldiers with their amazingly strong roots
"But these aren’t Venus' seeds." complained Muse.
"Sorry, here." She threw a different magazine.
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Re: WW III RP topic https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32908.msg424603#msg424603
« Reply #34 on: November 13, 2011, 03:59:18 am »
OOC: I've been working on curating some of the stuff into a more story-like form, here is the timeline, more later.
edit: just finished formatting chapter one, the zzz at the beginning of the file name is just so it's easier to find in my documents.
Cool.  ;D If you want an editor to clean it up a bit I would be happy to help. I'm pretty good at spotting errors/cleaning things up/making it flow better, as I have to reread my own stories ten billion times to make sure it's all correct.  ;)
OOC: sweet, any help is welcome, also, once I have all of what's hapened so far curated, I will post it on this (http://www.fictionpress.com/) website.
Okay, I fixed up the 1st chapter, but how do I post those link things you have? <- (Total internet noob.)
   Once you answer I will probably have to do it tomorrow cause it's late where I live XD

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Re: WW III RP topic https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32908.msg424920#msg424920
« Reply #35 on: November 13, 2011, 09:35:11 pm »
Akikaze Shiro's Point of View:
The talons on the ends of my feet made a gentle clacking noise that I hoped would be unheard by the pilot of the vehicle. I jumped forward and swung myself into the passenger seat, immediately pointing my gun at his head.
   "Don't move," I warned him as I slipped a pistol attached to his waist out of it's holster. Grey pointed ears atop the man's head twitched at the noise. Dear heavens.... That looks like my work. I quickly bound his hands behind his back with the rope that previously held me.
   "That voice... " The pilot said in a voice so quiet I hardly heard it. He sounded... English? What would a genetically enhanced man born to the Alliance be doing fighting on the Industrial side of the war?

Glenford Raleigh's Point of View:
Click.
   "Don't move."
   That doesn't sound good. Suddenly the words filed back through my head. Don't move.
   "That voice... "
   A lab... and scientists. Prodding me, judging me.... killing me. Akikaze, is that you beside me? After all you have done you think you can threaten me? I remember the horrible things you did to me... I remember you buying me from the prison for use as a human guinea pig. I remember the sarcastic smile you would give me as you said 'don't move' to me, who was half dead, bound in chains, and imprisoned in my little cell. Shiro, I remember the swears of vengeance.
   "That voice," I said again, "is nighmarishly familiar to me, as it haunts my dreams every night."

 

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