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Re: Linegard RPG by Thalas. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23431.msg299870#msg299870
« Reply #48 on: March 28, 2011, 05:08:41 am »
Can I introduce a villain? This is what I had in mind:

Name: Maulon
Race: Voidian
Element: Void
Background: Unknown. Was born from Void soon after it took over the Frozen North.
Belongings: None.
Abilities: Uses Void Magic.
Void Ray: damages the opponent and may freeze them.
Void Drain: damages the opponent and restores a little health to Maulon.

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Re: Linegard RPG by Thalas. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23431.msg300011#msg300011
« Reply #49 on: March 28, 2011, 11:49:40 am »
It wasn't the abilities I was worried about. It was the fact that he's calling himself the strongest Armagio. That's just plain narcissistic.
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Re: Linegard RPG by Thalas. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23431.msg300021#msg300021
« Reply #50 on: March 28, 2011, 12:14:05 pm »
                                                                                        Chapter I

Sarcastic magician
"How many, Khal?" Asked Vene walking through the street.
"Nine thieves today My Lord, after reducing daily food ration it's worse day by day." Said Khal the Entropic island alderman.
"At least magicians said that Portal will be ready in 10 days" mentioned Vene with small hope in voice
"Yes, Yes. Did I said that Town Council agreed on leaders of the divisions.
1st Division leader Vene vice-leader Ornad
2nd Division leader John vice-leader Saukla
3rd Division leader Horn vice-leader Asmalda
4th Division leader Argon vice-leader Xander
5th Division leader Maria vice-leader Pu-ching
6th Division leader Moras vice-leader Hunter
7th Division leader Ushika vice-leader Vhale"
Unfortunately for Khal, Vene wasn't even listening. He was observing gigantic Zeppelins sailing in a wind. 500 years ago Entropic Island were just rocks with small population, but now in the present thanks to the Aetheric and Graviton Scientist you could see levitating houses, flying ships, dimensional rampart or quantum power stations. However it was overpopulated and famers just couldn't cultivate so much grain
Vene and Khal reached Vanadium square. Nine people were staring with hatred in their eyes at Vene, their executioner. They were tied to the bonfires one by one. These thieves stole food, even stealing slice of bread meant death 
Vene uttered "By the name of the King, God and People I now declare you banished from this word, tiedan sinun kohtalosi, paitsi etta ne ovat netua oman kuoleman. Killing wasn't Vene favorite work. When he first executed people he had terrible nightmares full of hatred and blood, but he get used to it.
"Fuego" bonfires exploded in the pillars of fire, fear swarmed in the minds of the condemned.
"Go to hell Dirus Vene" Shouted burning woman.

Rest of  the day was peaceful. Vene returned to his chamber
10 days later

Sky was full of a black clouds, predicting bad luck. Every man, woman and child was divided into one of the seven division. Each division count about 3 000 thousand people arranged in a long lines walking towards the dimensional gate.
They were carrying their most important things for example money, cards, rare plates, gems, instruments. Vene even heard that one guy was carrying window. Most of were poor.
Dimensional gate was transported to the crossroads of a bridges connecting Entropic Islands and was tall 50 meters wide 20 meters. The door-way of the gate was made from iron and decorated with infinite number of edges, geometric shapes, lines and crystals. The most fascinating thing of the Dimesnional Gate was the portal. It was a big spiral of full of colors and shifting images. Images of people, mountains, snowing, demons, exotic animals, foreign lands, normal man would be insane even after hour of watching the portal.
Vene was dressed in his usual azure shirt and brown jacket. He will be the first one to enter.
"Are you ready Vene" Asked Nepycros, his friend and companion
"I am. I always wanted to go to a another world" replied smiling Vene
Vene slowly aproached the portal. He felt small tension coming from the gate.
Everyone was watching him. Then Vene quickly jumped into the Portal. Only some spark appeared behind him.

It was very strange feeling he felt, almost like diving into mana. Time doesn't mattered. Like hypnosis. Like floating in a mid air.
Colors were swirling around him and infinte voices sounded in his ears. Moment later Vene glanced at dissappearing Elements world.
All of sudden the swirling light shifting images and voices faded away, only darkness remained. Death Silence
White lightning flashed through. And Another there and there. Another one. After short while the darkness was replaced with lightning. One almost hit Vene . Another one. Vene was avoiding the lightnings in directions.
Suddenly white lightning hit him in the chest. Pain was pounding into his head, lightnings were flashing around
Vene fainted.

Light sisters
"Come" Yelled Lyra.
Hunter's wing attacked Lyra but she missed hitting only ground, with a second wing she guarded herself
Lyra slashed in mid air, bursting of turqoise mana.
"That must be the famous Fusion Jack, you can't win without using aether magic" scoffed Hunter
Hunter shoot forth her wing clashing with Aesir. Lyras sword Aesir passed through the wing. Hunter didn't predict this thing, damn aether magic. Hunter fortunately swung her wing and fly up dodging Lyra's attack.
"Interesting I thought these wings are only weapon" Shouted Lyra
From Aesir started blowing light breeze. Lyra slashed with her sword creating strong wind. Hunter was knocked off by the strong wind falling headlong to the ground. Lyra was exhausted swaping her between elements, but Hunter too. Lyra took run towards to falling Hunter with intent slashing her. Hunter quickly swung with her wings creating dust cloud. however she crashed on the ground.
"I think it's enough training for today." said Lyra, continuation of this fight could lead to severe injuries.

Lyra and Hunter decided to train in the mountains for 4 days, but now was time to leave. They started walking to the town. The road was dusty and rough, despite of that Lyra and Hunter walked speedily. Hunter and Lyra where good friends from the moment the met in the entropic islands, although they were like Ying and Yang.
"I heard that you became vice-leader is that true?" Asked Lyra, she hoped that she will be the vice-leader.
"Yes, but that doesn't matter. Look, I can see town."

4 days later
The day of Gate

Moras was muscular and sturdy guy, wearing black vest, brown troussers and mysterious purple boots. He wasn't great leader, but at least he wasn't pesimistic and gloomy like Leader Maria. Vene and his division already passed (Nepycros too) . Last people of the 2nd Division entered the portal. Everyone waits for 3rd Division to enter. 
Ancient one and Boxer
"Barkeeper, give me another beer" clamoured Thalos in a musty tavern
"Thalos if you buy another beer you won't have money to buy food." disputed Argon.
"Don't spoil the fun." Bawled Thalos like Devil possesed him
 Okay, but don't blame me for wasting all your money: said Argon.

After hour....
"never come back without money." Shouted Barkeeper throwing out Thalos.
"yesh shir, I du." said drunken Thalos and scuttled away

Next Morning....
"Please, give me some money" begged Thalos. Thalos as most beggar put linen cloth on the ground and started begging.
It was a sunny and warm day, the one that is rare. Lot of carts with different goods passed around. There was just one problem. People just ignored him. Even one penny was in this world important.
However One strange looking man came to him and said "Here you go, 5 Siluans."
"Sir, but that's !?! Are you sane ?! I can't take it !!?" muttered shocked Thalos
"Just take it, I have lot of money." Said stranger
Thalos quickly took 5 Siluans and went to the Market.

9 days later
The day of Gate

Thalos was in the 2nd Division. Was slowly walking to the Portal.
"Who made this gate, must have been gods or demigods." Thalos tought.
Bridge which he was walking on was made from stone and cobblestones. The gate was slowly getting near when Thalos noticed someone. It was the stranger wearing golden-blue robe and some weird book, he looked like a missionary.
"Hey, it's me." Thalos shouted.
Stranger turned backand glanced at Thalos " You're the beggar I gave my money, it seems that we are in the same division what coincidence, good luck to you"
They were close to Gate just about 50 meters. It was incredible view at the portal from near.
Now just 20 Meters
10 Meters
"What's your name stranger?" shouted Thalos
"Xerxes" Answered stranger.
Thalos and Xerxes entered Portal at same time.
Side by side they were traveling to another world. They were floating in a mid air and surrounding light was so bright that they even couldn't see. Thousand images appeared, Their speed increased. Images started melting and speed increased again. Now they were traveling at unbelievable speed through floating images.
Finally they arrived, they arrived in meadow. But they were alone where was 1st and 2nd Division?
New Team
Argon and Xander were watching each other. Observing every movement every blink of eye
Argon with a fake heroism in voice said " Good day, I'm Argon. Town council appointed me as the leader of the 4th Division"
"Hello, I'm Xander your highest, highest Majesty" Said arrogantly Xander sitting in wooden chair Rude answer indeed
"Hahahahaaaha. I think you and I will get well along." Argon replied "Oh I almost forgot, the reason why called you here is because Town Council Appointed you as my vice."
"Oh, what an honor sir." mumbled surprised Xander
"Come after two days here, to my appartment we will discuss the strategy"  interposed Argon
"Yes, sir. " Responded Xander closing doors of Argon's office.
Argon's appartment was small, but it was decorated with lot Graviton murals and Entropic furniture. Xander stopped at the colored carpet. It was magnificent carpet, representing great battle between Sky Island and Shore of the Air. Wyrms were flying through the air, fireflies were attacking wymrs shamefully from back, while down on the ground were battling Sky Islanders against Firefolks.
"Can I help you?" asked maid.
No, I'm leaving. Good bye." replied Xander and leaved the house.

"Did you get the vice-leader position." whispered Sagittarius from the alley
"Yeah, he was gave me the job without hesitation. This will be a easy task to accomplish." said Xander full of pleasure
"Didn't I said you, that pulling strings is best."  Sagittarius joined Xander

8 days later
The day of Gate

Xander, Sagittarius and Argon were fascinated by the Dimensional Gate. It was so big and the images and gigantic spiral.
Vene already entered the gate now it was their turn to enter.
"Men and Women don't be scared." Argon assured 4th Division. He was a great orator.
standing before the gate what will Argon Sagittarius and Xander do?
What's their plan?
Lone Shadow
"Hello, it's me Gremio. I need as many musician I can get and 2 mana bombs, I am preparing fireworks It's gonna be grandiose." The Lexuar said holding telephone in his hand
"Searching for musicians. 2 musicians found........... What's your plan Lex? Don't do anything ridiculous, this job is already completed, this isn't game for satisfying your boredom."Gremio said and followed by curses.
"Don't worry Gremio, I have everything precisely planned out"
"Didn't you told me the exact thing in Linegard"
"That was something different"
"Besides that, expect delivery in 20 days"
"Bye " Lexuar finished the call.

Lexuar was sitting on surprisingly conformtable easychair. He quickly glanced at the big pendulum clock showing quarter past four.
"26 days until the day of Gate, What I'm going to do before that, maybe some more killing." talking himself Lexuar licked his lip.
Lexuar was examing room. Bookshelves made from ebon were everywhere he looked, packed with enormous quantity of books.
In the center of room was beautiful shining table facing black door. Only unusual thing in this room was only blood soaked carpet and dead man. The man was old about 50, wearing traditional red dress and from closer look at his malformed face you could recognise that he had a Death Marshes (asiatic) origins.

"Honey, I'm home." called his wife from a front door
Lexuar licked his lips again
BONUS : musician is codename

Re: Linegard RPG by Thalas. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23431.msg300308#msg300308
« Reply #51 on: March 28, 2011, 09:09:18 pm »
It wasn't the abilities I was worried about. It was the fact that he's calling himself the strongest Armagio. That's just plain narcissistic.
I didn't call him the strongest Armagio. I just said he was feared for his strength.

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Re: Linegard RPG by Thalas. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23431.msg300315#msg300315
« Reply #52 on: March 28, 2011, 09:14:31 pm »
D'oh, I wanted to be a late arrival. -_- 'Twould've been fun.
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Re: Linegard RPG by Thalas. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23431.msg300685#msg300685
« Reply #53 on: March 29, 2011, 12:39:46 pm »
You can now write, I want to see your writing skills and your actions, to be honest I don't even know Xander's Sagittaurius plan. It's all up to you. Lone Shadow will be about Lexuar and I write it in the evening.

Re: Linegard RPG by Thalas. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23431.msg300973#msg300973
« Reply #54 on: March 29, 2011, 09:30:14 pm »
PS: I'm controlling two characters, if possible. Argon and Maulon.

Dead To The World:

Maulon trudged through the sandy desert. Unlike most others, he could withstand the Void. He was born from it, after all. In fact, he was sure it only made him stronger. He had to reach the Pyramid to find the Jewel Of Time. He had to find the Jewel Of Time to unleash the more important Eternal Gem. He had to use the Eternal Gem to stop the Void from ever vanishing. And that was just what he was going to do. With every minute the Void existed, the Solar Light would fade the tiniest bit. It was almost gone entirely. Light would almost be vanquished.
"Soon," Maulon thought. "It will be dead to the world.

Reasonably short chapter.

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Re: Linegard RPG by Thalas. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23431.msg300980#msg300980
« Reply #55 on: March 29, 2011, 09:34:14 pm »
It's not fun, losing your home to a race of beings that seem to exist to exterminate the signature power of the universe's own energy. Aside from that, losing your friends and family isn't the best thing ever, either. I'd figured I would get by. My plan was to simply find a Void member, merge into his shadow, and wait. Easy! I got through it for about 2 months... before they found me. I was sure I'd be screwed, but someone named Vene showed up. He managed to get them off my back. When I'd heard that they were evacuating the planet, I was skeptical, but even a loose hope beats hiding in a world of vast emptiness...
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Re: Linegard RPG by Thalas. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23431.msg301056#msg301056
« Reply #56 on: March 29, 2011, 11:19:14 pm »
Um...what is the 1st and 2nd division?

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« Reply #57 on: March 29, 2011, 11:35:29 pm »
Those demigods have to work on their targeting skills, i thought, as i saw we where alone, but i quickly decided that was to be considered later, and i said:

''As we are all by ourselves, i might as well tell you my name. Im Thalos, i was in the gravity army before the void started spreading. But i will tell you about that later''.

''Right now we need food, water and a place to sleep''.
''I will set camp and get a fire to cook'', i say, while taking off the wings of my armor and placing them as the start of a tent, ''you explore around and get some food''.

''Avoid contacts with any locals you find, we dont know what could live in this place''.

OOC:im looking for materials for a fire and shelter. The wings are like the ones in the art of the armagio, so they could make a tent, at least for a human or something of similar size. Add more pieces of wood, and they could work for me as well.
To wardead: the people was divided into divisions to organize the travel through the gate.

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Re: Linegard RPG by Thalas. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23431.msg301089#msg301089
« Reply #58 on: March 30, 2011, 12:08:26 am »
It's good to know that Hunter has become the vice-leader. "Dying" against the Void makes for some considerable expierence right there.

It's late, and I'm just sitting outside the small cafe that I've been to many times. This could be my last time, and if I die fighting the Void at least Shaden and I will remember this memory of sitting at the cafe, just sipping a bit of one of Luminark's homemade brands.

"Well," Shaden remarks, "So we get a much better chance at trying to stop the Void I guess."

"And you're just being nervous and trying to stir up conversation" I retort. "We've went over this the 100th time already."

"True." He smirks. "Think I'll ever get a body back?"

"Over my dead body, I bet." We both resumse just staring out at the city's expanse. I picked a brand at random from Luminark today - seems he noticed me being nervous and slipped me a good one.

We leave tommorow. What to expect that has changed? Not much... I hope.

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Re: Linegard RPG by Thalas. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23431.msg301138#msg301138
« Reply #59 on: March 30, 2011, 01:10:32 am »
Sagittarius walks outside and watches the sunset and sighs.

He whispered to himself "I wonder how my mother and father are doing in heaven. I wonder how my village is doing...
What am I doing...Why am I thinking of the past...But revenge is sweet..."

He sees the red and orange horizon which reminds of his old village. The blood that was splattered across that villages dirt and houses. The fire that spread throughout his domain. He hungers for revenge in fact Sagittarius needs it.

He then whispers to himself "Volo ulciscar. Pugnabo omnibus Dryadales. Primum domo indiget cibo sententia.
Volo quam mane." translation: I will have my revenge. I will fight for all the elves. First I need a home and food though.
How I want morning.

He looks at the orange and red sunset once again. A picture of the village fire is put over the horizon and Sagittarius puts his head down. He goes to the nearest pub and sits down at a stool.

 

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