Looks like it would work but maybe not.
=It looks good but it looks bad so to summarize, it could win but it could lose, or in other words, it's amazing or not, I'm not sure.
I think it's quite a nice idea- the Blood Sucker working with the Demon, and all, while you've got a damage build up going on.
The lack of antimatter makes sense what with you trying to instakill all the creatures.
Have you considered Eagle's Eye?
That'll one shot all of Herme's creatures if yo get it out, and if not, it'll still work well in the same way as the BloodSucker.
Other than that, I'm going to give it a shot.
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