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Goddesses - Cry No More https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=30551.msg388350#msg388350
« on: September 03, 2011, 03:34:02 am »
This is my first series-esque thing that I have made.  (Well, that I have completed.   :darkness Intentions didn't go as... intended...).  Basically, card one (Cry No More) is the only way to obtain cards two through thirteen (the Goddesses), which are not available as rares (not like Pharaoh).
I am also very sympathetic towards the Nymphs.  I do not know why they are always crying -- maybe they got dumped by the Pharaoh, or broke a Nymphly nail.  I would like to make them happy again.

NAME:
Cry No More
ELEMENT:
Light
COST:
10   :light
TYPE:
Spell
TEXT:
The target Nymph becomes a Goddess and is no longer delayed, frozen, or poisoned.  Drain all remaining  :light quanta.
NAME:
Cry No More
ELEMENT:
Light
COST:
10  :light
TYPE:
Spell
TEXT:
The target Nymph becomes a Goddess and is no longer delayed, frozen, or poisoned.
ART:
Wikimedia Commons
IDEA:
MildlyFrightenedBoy
NOTES:
The target Nymph will become the Goddess of the same element.  Goddesses are immaterial and their stats cannot be changed in any way (that includes Eclipse and the Deceptive Goddess's skill, which do not require targeting).  Goddesses are always upgraded, regardless of whether or not he Nymph was upgraded.  Cry No More is a rare card. 

This is basically a super buff to Nymphs.  I am not sure how well I carried out the idea, but I have always wanted to make a card similar to this.  It stated out with just a buff spell that only targeted Nymphs, and then, I found the goddess image (and then proceeded to absolutely mangle the picture in every which way).  I am completely and fully open to constructive criticism about the card's skills, balancing, name, and other aspects.  I am not open to criticism of the art.  I know that it is of abysmally horrifying quality, please do not waste your breath.  I over-accentuated the word 'name' because I know that people have problems with certain words used in cards, like "Elemental", and I am not sure whether or not "Goddess" is one of those words.
SERIES:
The Goddesses; no page as of now.  Not sure how to make one.
The Goddesses:

Death - Ghostly

Light - Blinding

Gravity - Celestial

Darkness - Deceptive

Water - Drenched

Fire - Enraged

Time - Eternal

Entropy - Flux

Aether - Mirror

Life - Sanguine

Air - Winged

Stone - Statue

I have murdered this beautiful painting.  However, the Nymphs are a lot happier.


Please, please, please help me with balancing and names.
This thing seemed dead inside. It seemed like an automaton, trying to act like as if it was alive. The effect was unsettling.
Orianna made a sound that supposed to a girl's squeal of glee and hugged The Ball. While it might have been touching, it was unfortunately only horrifying.

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Re: Goddesses - Cry No More https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=30551.msg399074#msg399074
« Reply #1 on: September 25, 2011, 02:01:52 pm »
Water - Drenched
Looks nice but I don't understand this one.
I think the last mark must be fire :)

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Re: Goddesses - Cry No More https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=30551.msg399090#msg399090
« Reply #2 on: September 25, 2011, 02:43:31 pm »
Water - Drenched
Looks nice but I don't understand this one.
I think the last mark must be fire :)
It should; I will fix this soon.

EDIT: Fixed, here is the new image (I reworded some things to make it easier to understand)

EDIT 2: This is in the Card Ideas and Art page already, and I am pretty sure that I fixed it there...
This thing seemed dead inside. It seemed like an automaton, trying to act like as if it was alive. The effect was unsettling.
Orianna made a sound that supposed to a girl's squeal of glee and hugged The Ball. While it might have been touching, it was unfortunately only horrifying.

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Re: Goddesses - Cry No More https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=30551.msg399147#msg399147
« Reply #3 on: September 25, 2011, 05:14:17 pm »
Water - Drenched
Looks nice but I don't understand this one.
I think the last mark must be fire :)
It should; I will fix this soon.

EDIT: Fixed, here is the new image (I reworded some things to make it easier to understand)

EDIT 2: This is in the Card Ideas and Art page already, and I am pretty sure that I fixed it there...
I hope you know that Drenched goddess now has zero hp so it will die when your turn end just like spark.
You can better make it 0/1  ;)
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Re: Goddesses - Cry No More https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=30551.msg399159#msg399159
« Reply #4 on: September 25, 2011, 05:32:38 pm »
Water - Drenched
Looks nice but I don't understand this one.
I think the last mark must be fire :)
It should; I will fix this soon.

EDIT: Fixed, here is the new image (I reworded some things to make it easier to understand)

EDIT 2: This is in the Card Ideas and Art page already, and I am pretty sure that I fixed it there...
I hope you know that Drenched goddess now has zero hp so it will die when your turn end just like spark.
You can better make it 0/1  ;)
Oh, I effed that up.  It was supposed to stay 1 | 1.  I'll fix it again...
This thing seemed dead inside. It seemed like an automaton, trying to act like as if it was alive. The effect was unsettling.
Orianna made a sound that supposed to a girl's squeal of glee and hugged The Ball. While it might have been touching, it was unfortunately only horrifying.

 

anything
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