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Re: My emotional poetry https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=51143.msg1112913#msg1112913
« Reply #12 on: December 01, 2013, 09:56:27 pm »
You're very good! Especially for not being a native speaker (at least so says your profile) :) Keep it up, your style is inspiring.
Who likes poems? :) Here are mine.

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Re: My emotional poetry https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=51143.msg1115840#msg1115840
« Reply #13 on: December 17, 2013, 09:34:38 am »
@Gandora: Thanks! And yes, German is actually my mother tongue. One could go as far as saying English is one of my obsessions. :)

This one won an official contest run by deviantART:

"Autumn's maiden unfurls when golden leaves sprawl,
And concrete streets drown in leaf's glorious fall."
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Re: My emotional poetry https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=51143.msg1119117#msg1119117
« Reply #14 on: January 04, 2014, 10:20:03 am »
LIVE LIFE, LIVE LOVE

"Live life, live love.
Don't you ever feel sorry for yourself.
When the world seems to drag you down,
Don't let it or you will drown.

Give your best every single day.
Breath in, exhale, blow the clouds away,
So that at night you must not wake;
Stand strong and remember what's at stake.

I took 6 years to finally see
That from yourself you cannot flee.
I pray for you that it won't be like for me
That you become free of your agony.

Free your mind to escape the maze
Which traps your heart in endless daze.
Shed your skin to finally see
The You that you're meant to be."
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Re: My emotional poetry https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=51143.msg1127186#msg1127186
« Reply #15 on: February 23, 2014, 12:13:49 pm »
It has been some time since I last checked in, and I have some interesting material to share with you lovely people!

-- Lightwalker --

There is a little bug inside my head.
It does not speak; it does not explain
Why it's there, why in me -- inside my mind.
But it's always there, binding me in chains.

There is a little fire blazing inside my chest.
It burns all the skin that I have shed,
Burning so hot that every breath I take congests.
My heart is burnt from all the sins it has been fed.

I follow the paths of what must be an elaborate dream,
Light pours from me, my soul shines agleam.
An experience so pure that I feel nothing but bliss
I imagine an angel appeared and blew me a kiss.

Until I opened my eyes I believed I was heartless.
Released from the darkness I found my catharsis.





-- Satellite --

You are the sun which lights my darkest night,
But did I reach for you my hand would ignite.

So I chose to be your satellite --
Watch you from afar, bathe in your light.

You are my sun, my only one,
Yet my heart is coming undone.

For if we ever kissed
I would walk the Nether's mists.





-- The God of My Dreams --

You cannot kill the God who reigns inside my head.
In my mind he's strong and tall,
Your filth can't touch so long he stands.
But he is but part of my world.
It is not real -- the image fades.

Everything is back where it belongs,
And your words still drench my ears.

So what am I supposed to do?
Everything is back where it belongs.
It's no matter who's right, only who's left
With the God who never was.

« Last Edit: February 23, 2014, 01:03:58 pm by ArtCrusade »
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