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Terrible Writing Brain Dump https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=67555.msg1295075#msg1295075
« on: December 28, 2019, 04:53:11 am »
Might add to this later. Just going to throw some random brain dumps in here to preserve them together. Might make something worth a damn eventually
Expect darkness to be dumped



What does it mean
When a flowergirl is made by her tombstone
When the girl can’t be saved -
Too severe a simple complication
A boy saved from severe complex complications
What does it mean
Why are we here
Why wasn’t she saved
Why

We're nothing to no body
She was everything to everybody
We strive so far, try so hard
We never reach those heights

She wasn’t reachin’ for the stars
She was the star
She was reaching his heart
She, queen of her world
He, an ant at the bottom
She thudded below him
Her, the loneliest legacy of what could be
What does it mean
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Re: Terrible Writing Brain Dump https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=67555.msg1295076#msg1295076
« Reply #1 on: December 28, 2019, 05:16:27 am »
Do I love who you are
Or do I love your mirage
What’s the difference between the art and the artist
The person and the process
The life and our love
The world and our fantasy

Is this hatred embodied in pink tassels?
Is this morbid fear from the monster inside a princess?
What if I’m the monster
What if no one is anything but a monster
What if we're wearing masks for faces


I broke down crying inside
My brain pain so high
Should I even go on
I’m so fucking judged here
Why am I scared
Why am I afraid
Why
Help
AHH WHT THE FUCK IS THIS PAIN
My brain hurts

My soul hurts
My chest scarred
All I know is the pain of loss
And yet I live
What an abomination
I always knew you’d come around

Felt your presence when I was down
Heard your breath echo in my mind
as it said…
‘Welcome to the Lion’s Den’

Feelin outcast
Born outclassed,
Body-worn, Mind-torn
Soul thinner than her acorn
I always knew you’d come around
Felt your presence when I was down
Heard your breath echo in my mind
as it said…
‘Welcome to the Lion’s Den’
« Last Edit: December 28, 2019, 05:26:10 am by TribalTrouble »

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Re: Terrible Writing Brain Dump https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=67555.msg1295123#msg1295123
« Reply #2 on: January 02, 2020, 03:37:05 am »
Is this hatred embodied in pink tassels?
Is this morbid fear from the monster inside a princess?
What if I’m the monster
What if no one is anything but a monster
What if we're wearing masks for faces


I broke down crying inside
My brain pain so high
Should I even go on
I’m so fucking judged here
Why am I scared
Why am I afraid
Why
Help
AHH WHT THE FUCK IS THIS PAIN
My brain hurts

These stanzas got me. Nice poem.
My idealized elements cycle:
Water -> Fire -> Air -> Earth -> Lightning -> Metal -> Light -> Darkness -> Wood -> Water

 

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