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Random Pieces of writin' https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26328.msg334858#msg334858
« on: May 16, 2011, 07:36:41 pm »
Well, i'll just leave those here for readin'.

With a single word, you can throw someone down.
A single touch, and bring them to the ground,
A single look, and make them feel beat
A single thought, and take them from the pit.

My mouth is closed,
Yet i must scream. I do,
And it tears my brain,
My heart. Replaced by an
Abyss, not to explore,
But to be.

Ne partez donc point, ô fièvres infidèles,
Qui nourrissez en moi la flamme d'une chandelle,
Qui font naître en mon âme, la lame d'un poête,
Et tout en ce faisant me dévorez la tête.

Nature

A tree. It is dawn. A mountain.
A dove. It wakes up. An eagle.
Shakes her wings. Preparation. Shakes his wings.
Starts flying. Morning exercise. Starts diving.
Starts to look at the ground. Hunting time. Starts to look at the ground.
Notices something in the ground. Target spotted. Notices something on the ground.
Starts pecking. Dinner time. Starts plumetting.
Clutches the worm. Clutches the dove.
Eats the whole.
Goes back home.

A forest. It is dawn. A city.
The Devil :


A little boy. He is playing war with others. They laugh, making sure they don't hit each other.
He is the soldier.
A little girl. She's playing with her mirror. She compares her face to other girls she knows.
She thinks they are prettier.
A woman. She is working. She has two children to feed, so she must work very late.
She wishes she had more  money.
A man. He is playing around. He has children, two, which have everything they can want.
He is happy.

He appears.

He talks to the little boy. He can make him general. He says no thanks. I'm playing happily as a soldier.
He talks to the little girl. He can make her the prettiest. She says no thanks. It would make my friends jealous.
He talks to the woman. He can give her as much money as she wants. She says no thanks. I have enough to live well.
He talks to the man. He promises anything to the man. The man says yes. He smiles.

He is gone.

The little boy is playing with his friends. He became caporal.
The little girl is looking in the mirror. She is as pretty as her friends.
The woman counts her money. She has been promoted, and can go on sunday with her children.
The man is unhappy. His children are not there anymore. And he now knows he has made a serious blunder.


War =

And suddenly, it happened.

A dog looks out. It sees something.
He starts to bark. His eyes dart as he does it.
Then he stops. He looks around.
Then at himself.
He collapses.

A boy looks out. He sees nothing.
He starts to laugh. His head jerks as he does it.
Then he stops. He looks around.
Then at himself.
He collapses.

A girl looks out. She sees everything.
She starts to weep. Her body jerks as she does it.
Then she stops. She looks around.
Then at herself.
She collapses.

A man looks out. He sees them.
He starts a sigh. He shudders as he does it.
Then he stops. He looks around.
Then at himself.
He sighs again. Packs his weapons.
And goes to the next town.

Power =


He stepped. Again. and again. and again.
Each of his step glided along the white marble
No one heard him, but everyone looked at him.
He stopped. He sat on the white throne. Uttered a sigh of boredom.

He stepped. Fast, and sure. Deliberately.
His feets made no sound against the grey marble.
Everyone, around him, bustled in the action of life.
He extended a hand. No one saw it. No one saw his grin of satisfacion

He stepped. His step were slow, filled with energy.
His feets thumped against the black marble.
No one was around. That was thanks to him.
He pushed a pile of ash out of his way. He blowed it away with madness.



Science

It came as a fruit. Men looked at it, took it, brought it back home.
It was round, and shiny. They stood in circle, it being in the center.
Then one of them, which was the strongest, walked to it.

He stared at it for a moment. It shone in his eyes.
Then he took it in both hands, and reaped it in half.
Then he started eating it; slowly, in little golden bites.

And as he ate, he sensed something coming;
He took a sheep, and made wool. He took a stick
and a stone, and made an axe. Everyone followed him,
Ate fruit, and things were produced with frightening celerity.

The weapons started getting bigger and bigger.
The houses, the buildings, everything became big.
Then one day, someone found out about fission.
Two days later, everything had ended. And in the middle, stood a golden fruit.


Silence

As he came, noiseless sounds made themselves heard.
Everything stood still. Nothing breathed, nothing moved.
Everyone stared at him. Everything looked at him.
Only eyes moved. And those eyes stared soundlessly.

Finally he got through the town. Noisy sounds
came back, and as they did, did everyone move.
Suddenly, it was so noisy, that everyone ran out.
They could not stand it. Some of them collapsed.

He came back. He had forgotten his suitcase.
But when he came back, nothing was there.
Nothing could move, nothing could breathe.

He knew that nothing would come back.
He took his suitcase, found a suitable hotel
And installed himself. He was at peace there.


Haikus : Seasons :
Those were meant to be separate poems, so it is normal if it gets a bit repetitive between two of them.

Finally, the sunlight broke through
The white clouds full of snow faded
And those promising rain came
But for the moment they had nothing
Nothing that had not been eaten before.


Then, suddenly, the rain came.
A heavy downpour, which relieved the famine
that had afflicted the land.
With the rain, the crops finally grew
And with them, the hunger was gone.

Today, the rain was gone.
The crops were ripe, ready for harvest
Everything was for the best
Then the blast of heat suddenly came,
Burning through the cottages and land, Scorching.

The sun scorched, but ripened
Crops finally were ready for their harvest
And they finally produced food.
With their famine ended, people enjoyed themselves
And started to think about reparing homes.

They started rebuilding their homes.
While they were working, the heat faded,
Replace with a humind wind
With the wind, sudden and new diseases
Made themselves known. The hardest part began.

Now, people fell like flies.
Flies fell like flies too. Seeing that
People thought about philosophy and art.
Gradually, the disease disapeared, leaving behind only
A few people, called artists, and wind.

The wind fell once more.
All was silent behind. Food, lodging, water,
everything was there. People too.
People who did not go out. Cold.
He who bit people. Bit them dead.

Everything was white by now.
The cold made itself king. Of nothingness
Outside, for them, was nothing.
Then the elder got up, very slowly.
Yet another cycle completed. Next one now.

Deception

People. People. People. People. People. You. People. People. People. People.
The madness is in each of us. Close your eyes, sing, and open your webbed wings to the silent winds.
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Re: Random Pieces of writin' https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26328.msg335519#msg335519
« Reply #1 on: May 17, 2011, 04:25:04 pm »
The Devil one was really nice. I'm not a very good writer, but i appreciate the writings of others. Well written!
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Re: Random Pieces of writin' https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26328.msg381290#msg381290
« Reply #2 on: August 17, 2011, 04:33:06 pm »
Since this board isn't even one page long, I figured this necro would be okay. This is from a while ago as well, so it's not terribly good.
I suppose I own the copyrights to this. © Coffin enterprises, 2009-2011


The Tree woke up with a near silent rustling of metal leaves and a shifting and settling of plates and rivets, followed by the buzzes of hundreds of cameras awakening and showing their red-dot eyes to the Masses gathered below. Today was different, the Masses seemed to be at unrest. In fact, the cameras registered movement past the yellow line, the warning threshold. Then, high in the Tree, so high that barely a hint of motion could be detected, so notice was taken only of the tremendous clanking it produced, eighteen steel alloy plates slid back, revealing seventy-two launchers. However, the Masses noticed that only nine of the launchers were tipped with red, and let out a roar, rising up and charging, more filling the huge court even as space opened. Red line cleared, then black, then contact registered. Then, the impossible: The Tree started to creak at the base. The Masses let out another giant cry at this, it's echoing off the court's buildings near loud enough to deafen. Another creak, then another, then a crack, and the popping of rivets as the Tree slowly felled.


Strike that, reverse it.

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Re: Random Pieces of writin' https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26328.msg389110#msg389110
« Reply #3 on: September 04, 2011, 10:58:02 pm »
the science is very good!
I speak Google Traductor!!

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Re: Random Pieces of writin' https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26328.msg412511#msg412511
« Reply #4 on: October 19, 2011, 01:49:44 pm »
New one, fresh fish.

Depression :

Splof.
I landed in the dark sea. It was covered by a grey veil. No land, no one around. An unknown world.
I found a lifeboat near me. Climbed in and laid back, contemplating the menacing moves of the grey clouds in the sky.
Soon the storm broke. Rain poured all over me, waves threatened to sink the boat. And i sat back and enjoyed the show.
Suddenly, the storm disappeard. The old, boring grey was back in the sky. I took a nap.
When i woke up, it was night. Strange, gloomy things came out of the water and looked at me. I smiled. They smiled back. Lotsa teeth.
I went to sleep again. They were gone when i woke up.
There was a light in the disctance. A current sped my boat towards it.
I didn't like the light. There was no sea, nor clouds around it. There were people, land on the other side. They wanted to take me away from this new, calm world.
I looked at my lifeboat one last time, then dived.
The cold water embraced me.
Something dark came.
I smiled.
It smiled back.
The madness is in each of us. Close your eyes, sing, and open your webbed wings to the silent winds.
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Re: Random Pieces of writin' https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26328.msg456273#msg456273
« Reply #5 on: February 03, 2012, 01:46:28 pm »
An ode to :air

Sweet Damselfly,
The beating of your wings carries a soothing wind
And often one forgets, that in your calming breath
The Storm is just asleep.

Werether you go, behind you they come,
The mighty hordes of Power, Dragons of the sky
Wyrms diving to pillage, arrows rain from the Eyes
Of eagles, and soon the land is bared.

But often, you stay, you hide,
The Fog grows strong, and the Queens, shy,
Create Flies, produce fire. Blue girls appear,
Summon Gases, shread skies apart.

Or, more cunning, allied with everything - or none,
The Waves of sound blasting our opponents away,
The weapons Fly, my Wings grow,
And in a Blitz, we own the world.
The madness is in each of us. Close your eyes, sing, and open your webbed wings to the silent winds.
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Re: Random Pieces of writin' https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26328.msg479186#msg479186
« Reply #6 on: April 11, 2012, 09:55:53 am »
not bad! i like the devil and somehow deception. :)
deception reminds me of this picture

if you want you can read mine?
you find them here
Who likes poems? :) Here are mine.

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Re: Random Pieces of writin' https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26328.msg1007561#msg1007561
« Reply #7 on: October 14, 2012, 01:32:55 am »
I found this. Very, very, very old.


Already, another year older.
Tradition wants a present, but I've only got ideas. So they'll be my present. Hope you understand.
Where to start with? I don't remember much. Your face, what you look like, your hobbies. One of them, at least. The way you clap your hand, too. But that will pass. One day, all of these will have been forgoten. Maybe.
Most of what I remember is us talking. Not great debate, nor plans for a distant future. Just petty, informative chatter. Getting to know each other. That was useful, it helped pass time, pushing boredom away.
I'm no really sure we could call that friendhood. More like good camaraderie. But the difference is minimal.
Then, one day, just like that, the link broke. Not sure why. Maybe you know? But the answer's most probably that there is no reason. That's kind of lame.
Not sure werether I regret it, either. The time I spent with you is now spent with other people. But i wouldn't write this otherwise, would I?

Now that I read this again, I realised it looks more like a letter of complaint than like a birthday gift. But I don't want to complain. I don't want you to think about me when you read this, but about each personn whose company you enjoyed and that you know you'll never see again. Even if you saw them only once.
Nostalgia. That is my gift.
The madness is in each of us. Close your eyes, sing, and open your webbed wings to the silent winds.
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Re: Random Pieces of writin' https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26328.msg1026530#msg1026530
« Reply #8 on: December 29, 2012, 05:14:56 am »
Jenk thwump time
I gaze into fun forums of warmth
Bright and pillaging
I see something indescribable
Something I can't quite put my finger on.

Fun Forum, blazing and brilliant
Making all your happiness
And all your collaboration
Crystal clear.

Fun Forums shimmering and glimmering
Showing how they're
Sweet, sensitive, caring and kind
Funny elemental cunning and poetic

Fun forums, so animated and intense
Help me to share
Your air of word,
Your word of air.

I gaze into fun forums of warmth and
I see the sweetest forum I've ever read or ever will read
I recognize a sincere and honest thread which can never be replaced
I realize it is so special because
When I peer into jenk's poems
I witness a miracle, I find a thread.
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