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A walk in the park https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=42518.msg529607#msg529607
« on: August 06, 2012, 06:57:50 am »
Hey guys,

So I have an ambition: to write a novel on Elements.

I pretty much can figure it out on my own: the plot, characters et cetera. However, I would like to respect other perspectives and make it not only idealized to myself.

So I would write down a situation and please reply what you think the aftermath of it would be thanks.

Situation 1: You were walking in the park when you saw a yeti with glowing red eyes staring at you.
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Re: A walk in the park https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=42518.msg529615#msg529615
« Reply #1 on: August 06, 2012, 07:16:20 am »
...I have no idea how the first two lines connect to the last two lines. I also have way insufficient information to give aftermath.
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Re: A walk in the park https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=42518.msg529618#msg529618
« Reply #2 on: August 06, 2012, 07:19:01 am »
What I meant by aftermath is to just explain what happens next that's all, nothing biggy.

By doing this, it gives me other perspectives to ideas and such, it feels quite egocentric to just 'do it the way you want to'.
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Re: A walk in the park https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=42518.msg529625#msg529625
« Reply #3 on: August 06, 2012, 07:26:58 am »
You see the yeti in all its fury, its blazing red eyes seemingly piercing through your body. Your eyes widen in shock and disbelief while your mind attempts, but fails, to rationalize the situation. You may have stood there for another ten minutes, were it not for the fact that the yeti suddenly let out an earsplitting howl and began furiously pursuing you, at which point all sense returns to you, and you turn around and flee for your life. You narrowly escape by stumbling into a dense thicket of trees and ducking behind a large bush, constantly waiting for a large, hairy arm to appear and grab you; however, the arm does not come, and you hear the yeti stumbling off into the distance.

In the days following this fateful occurrence, you can think of nothing else, and consequently, find solace in telling your closest family and friends what had happened. They are highly skeptical, of course, but out of love for you they do not laugh or attempt to belittle your experience as merely you "imagining things." And thus, you slowly learn to put this experience behind you, and yet, in the back of your mind, you will forever be haunted by not only the close encounter with the yeti, but more importantly, that everything you had been told in your life up until that day turned out to be a lie.



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Re: A walk in the park https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=42518.msg529629#msg529629
« Reply #4 on: August 06, 2012, 07:34:16 am »
No that's good. I'm here to accept various interpretations of what would happen. There is no right or wrong. Thanks for your reply.

Any more suggestions?
« Last Edit: August 06, 2012, 11:14:29 am by AnonymousRevival »
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