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12 elements... write something about them! https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=52070.msg1106649#msg1106649
« on: October 30, 2013, 10:33:40 pm »
Hello dear Elementalists :)

What about short written form (it can be anything, story, poem, dialogue, monologue, etc.) which uses all 12 elements (in their visual forms).

I will give you an example of my short form (which is not magnificent  ::)).

 :light is in my heart, therefore I detest  :darkness.

Here on :earth
where you must respect the force of :gravity,
beware of burning :fire and flooding :water.
In order to save your :life,
take a deep breath of fresh :air
and pray to  :entropy for good luck.
Yet bare in mind, you can't stop :time,
eventually all face :death
and become the part of :aether.

Can it be called poem? I don't know. It does not really make sense :D I hope you are more creative and come up with something more interesting :) Looking forward for your works.
« Last Edit: October 30, 2013, 10:35:32 pm by Krzysiekxd »
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Re: 12 elements... write something about them! https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=52070.msg1106650#msg1106650
« Reply #1 on: October 30, 2013, 10:34:56 pm »
I don't think you understand the :gravity of your request
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Re: 12 elements... write something about them! https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=52070.msg1106651#msg1106651
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Yeah I heared there are 12 of them
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Re: 12 elements... write something about them! https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=52070.msg1106668#msg1106668
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Yeah I heared there are 12 of them

Seriously?
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Re: 12 elements... write something about them! https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=52070.msg1106670#msg1106670
« Reply #4 on: October 31, 2013, 01:39:55 am »

What about short written form (it can be anything, story, poem, dialogue, monologue, etc.) which uses all 12 elements (in their visual forms).

hmm a story... (might not be the best but I'll give it a shot)


       So there I was traveling through the grassy plains of the fields, enjoying the sweet smell of nectare in the :air, and basking in the warmth of the birght :light from the sun. I took a look at my watch, and when I realized what :time it was i knew I was going to be late. So I jumped to my feet and started to run in the direction of granny's house, hoping that she wouldn't be too displeased with my tardiness. I decided to take a shortcut through the forest, but realized I had made a mistake shortly afterwards. The  :darkness was strong due to the thick foilage in the treetops, and I was unsure of anything that might be lurking in the shadows. As I ran though the woods I prayed for my  :life that  :death would not soon be upon me in the form of teeth around my scrawny throat.
       Luckly I made it to granny's house with no injuries and quickly rushed inside, "Granny, Granny" I called, "that darned  :gravity tripped me and made me fall to the  :earth getting my pants all dirty." But there was no answer, so I went around back to see if she was doing the farm chores. As I stepped around the corner I saw why granny wasn't inside, she was battling a giant  :fire in the pig barn. " :water, we need more water", she started yelling before I even had a chance to ask what happened. So I ran frantically to the pump while thinking about my science lesson from earlier that week, "a physicist, a chemist and a mathematitian are sleeping in seperate rooms when a fire appears in each room: the chemist looks at his fire and calculates the exact amount of water needed and douses the fire and puts it out, the physicist looks at his fire and exclaims that the randomness of :entropy can elimate the fire with only a few drops of water and somehow manages to douse the fire, the mathematitian looks at his fire and then calulates the amount of water he needs to douse the fire"I can theoritically put it out" he exclaims and goes back to bed forgetting the fire."
        So after a long winded thought I manage to help out granny with her barn fire, and am ready for some cookies, when granny says, "stay there for one second, I'll be right back". And in response I chuckle to my self; relativly speaking the world is rotating over 32,000 mph and she wants me to stay still, if I tried that the  :aether winds would surely knock me over and everything else on our planet.


....So this may not be the best, and I may have lost my train of thought halfway through, but at least some can get a laugh or two out of this.

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Re: 12 elements... write something about them! https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=52070.msg1106672#msg1106672
« Reply #5 on: October 31, 2013, 02:10:14 am »
Thank you for your contribution :) Well done :)


...relativly speaking the world is rotating over 32,000 mph and she wants me to stay still, .

My favourite part of your story.

....So this may not be the best, and I may have lost my train of thought halfway through, but at least some can get a laugh or two out of this.


Definitely better than my work  ;D

Edit:
note: no building, animals, or granny's were harmed in the making of this story

Actually that was the best part   ;)
« Last Edit: October 31, 2013, 02:13:34 am by Krzysiekxd »
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Re: 12 elements... write something about them! https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=52070.msg1106696#msg1106696
« Reply #6 on: October 31, 2013, 10:33:24 am »
I am lonely in the :darkness
while :fire burns my heart.
My world is in :entropy,
and there is no :light of hope left in my :life
The :gravity pulls me down
and I'm drawning in the :water.
:time is moving too fast
And the :air makes my suffocating
But instead of wanting to meet :death and disapear into :aether
... or hiding under :earth
I am running across the :rainbow. Im jumping and laughing and crying out loud, for the world to remember my name.



You removed the :darkness of my soul
now my heart shines in it's brightest :light
I will enjoy my :life, standing on the solid :earth
The :fire of my life burns strong
and fresh :air fills now my lungs.
I won't fear :entropy because
my heart will reach you through :aether and :time
I can still remember the :water -fall of tears that you cried
as you transcended to the world above.
But :death won't be able to seperate us
because :gravity can't tie my heart to the ground
It will fly and fly on and on, till I can reach you again in the heavens.
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Re: 12 elements... write something about them! https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=52070.msg1110415#msg1110415
« Reply #7 on: November 19, 2013, 04:55:20 pm »
Spoiler for Opening:
So, the OP asked if I felt to give this a try, and I did :) Here's my result:
I walk through the night,
And it's completely dark.
I seek for a warming :light;
There's no hope to create a spark.

I needed some fresh :air,
To walk away from my despair.
But even though I got a deep breath,
It's sure that with :time comes :death.

My :life has become a mess,
The manifestation of :entropy.
I screwed up real bad, I confess.
Nothing awaits me but eternal agony.

I will set myself on :fire,
To become one with the :earth,
That is my last and only desire
So to a purpose my body can serve.

As I'm standing and burning in flames,
God whispers he likes to play games.
I suddenly feel :water, it's rain.
I wanted to die, I scream in pain.

All my strength is leaving,
:gravity brings me to fall,
:darkness around, silence I call.
And my heart keeps bleeding.

....

I feel a :rainbow inside,
The sun is shining bright,
A smile is on my face,
I feel the world's embrace.

It's a new beginning,
Many challenges await me,
But I realize, I am free.
With this gift, I'm winning.


Spoiler for Hidden:
I guess I could continue this for a while but I got other stuff to do (that's why it feels a bit cut off in the end, I'm sorry for that). It was fun to write it and I hope you people enjoy it. Maybe someday I change it to improve it a little, I'm still not completely satisfied with it. I wish my vocabulary was better (english is not my native language, so there might also be some mistakes). Oh, and initially, I lost my train of thought and the poem went into a different direction. You can see the 'alternative continuation' in the second spoiler. Have a nice day everyone :)
Edit: P.S. I wanted to build some card names in it too (some are there) but it really isn't easy and makes the poem ... 'artificial', if you know what I mean.

Spoiler for Alternative Continuation:
This comes after the part where it started raining and screams in pain.


And as my mind is slowly breaking,
And my body won't stop shaking,
I remember my only love, my world.
It hunts me, this sight to behold.

You attracted me like :gravity,
Turned me upside down completely.
Into :aether my heart was sent.
I didn't know what all this meant.

We were each others treasure,
We were each others pleasure,
We shared smiles while kissing,
But soon all this went missing.

....

« Last Edit: November 19, 2013, 04:57:12 pm by Gandora »
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Re: 12 elements... write something about them! https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=52070.msg1110552#msg1110552
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Very well, Gandora :) I like this poem. Thank you and + Rep :)
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Re: 12 elements... write something about them! https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=52070.msg1110687#msg1110687
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Does my sig count towards this?

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Re: 12 elements... write something about them! https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=52070.msg1110809#msg1110809
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Does my sig count towards this?

Nope. You are supposed to write something about ALL 12 elements ^^
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