EDIT#2: Since we have less than a day left, I made a vault within the spoiler below. If no vault is made before the deadline, please use this as our official vault...
That looks like a good arrangement for our vault, the only things I would like to question is the life pillars/pends? as I see none, are we planning on converting them all during the round 1 deckbuilding phase?
Also I will be back on in about 6-7 hours (after a quick sleep) and can input this into the g-docs if it still needs to be done. I'll try my best to stay on from then until the deadline for finalizing vault, either on laptop or mobile.