would this beat FG
No. Absolutely not.
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Decent deck, but I see some obvious flaws. It's gonna need heals, or the extra damage you're giving your enemy will add up fast. I recommend duoing with death for this deck, taking aflatoxin isn't a bad call, giving you both heals, damage, and locking down their field. Poison is also a good damage source. Like was said earlier, you've got more shields than you need. If you're going to go mono-life, drop three shields and three pillars, take 6 heals. Maybe take pendulums to protect versus earthquake. If mono-life isn't a requirement, duoing with death is a great call.