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Predator's Bite | Predator's Bite https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57382.msg1175929#msg1175929
« on: January 15, 2015, 03:31:08 am »
NAME:
Predator's Bite
ELEMENT:
Life
COST:
4 :life
TYPE:
Spell
TEXT:
Deal 1.5 damage, rounded up, to target for each creature you control. Gain 3 HP if target dies
NAME:
Predator's Bite
ELEMENT:
Life
COST:
3 :life
TYPE:
Spell
TEXT:
Deal 1.5 damage, rounded up, to target for each creature you control. Gain 5 HP if target dies

ART:
by Treldon, based on

IDEA:
Treldon - name idea from Zblader
NOTES:

Update 1: card image added, damage lowered (2->1.5)
Update 2: card art added
Update 3: Title changed; damage calculation changed; cost corrected.
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NAME:
Predator's Pounce
ELEMENT:
Life
COST:
3 :life
TYPE:
Spell
TEXT:
Deal 1.5 damage, rounded down, to target for each creature you control
NAME:
Predator's Bite
ELEMENT:
Life
COST:
3 :life
TYPE:
Spell
TEXT:
Deal 1.5 damage, rounded down, to target for each creature you control. Gain 5 HP if target dies
« Last Edit: October 12, 2015, 01:26:14 pm by Treldon »
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Re: Predator's Pounce | Predator's Bite https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57382.msg1175934#msg1175934
« Reply #1 on: January 15, 2015, 03:53:30 am »
Is there a reason to upgrade it other than its name?
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Re: Predator's Pounce | Predator's Bite https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57382.msg1175936#msg1175936
« Reply #2 on: January 15, 2015, 03:57:10 am »
Is there a reason to upgrade it other than its name?

There is now. Text has been fixed - was just a pasting mistake
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Re: Predator's Pounce | Predator's Bite https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57382.msg1175957#msg1175957
« Reply #3 on: January 15, 2015, 06:27:07 am »
Too strong. Getting more creatures on board is easier than accumulating quanta. This spell easily becomes extremely powerful, and downright OP with swarm tactics. Change to 1 damage per creature.
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Re: Predator's Pounce | Predator's Bite https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57382.msg1175962#msg1175962
« Reply #4 on: January 15, 2015, 08:36:33 am »
1 damage per 5 creatures would be less op. You wouldnt be able to do like 20+ damage to a creature then.

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Re: Predator's Pounce | Predator's Bite https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57382.msg1175963#msg1175963
« Reply #5 on: January 15, 2015, 08:43:48 am »
And you evade my scathing "too aggressive for life" rant by making it pretty useless in life stalls.
"Yay"?

Seriously, though, I feel 1 per creature is a little too weak.
But 2 per creature is a little too strong, given adrenafrog's probably not getting 5 creatures out.

1.5 per creature, rounded down, should do the trick.
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Re: Predator's Pounce | Predator's Bite https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57382.msg1175964#msg1175964
« Reply #6 on: January 15, 2015, 08:56:02 am »
1 damage per 5 creatures would be less op. You wouldnt be able to do like 20+ damage to a creature then.

With maximum 25 creatures on the field it would be a rather...situational form of Lightning

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1.5 per creature, rounded down, should do the trick.

My thoughts exactly. Now to find a way to properly phrase it
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Re: Predator's Pounce | Predator's Bite https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57382.msg1175965#msg1175965
« Reply #7 on: January 15, 2015, 09:04:06 am »

Done

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Re: Predator's Pounce | Predator's Bite https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57382.msg1175975#msg1175975
« Reply #8 on: January 15, 2015, 05:19:02 pm »
Close, but no cigar - it can target the opponent as well  ;)

But otherwise your phrasing is neater than mine. Updating
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Re: Predator's Pounce | Predator's Bite https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57382.msg1175980#msg1175980
« Reply #9 on: January 15, 2015, 06:54:56 pm »
Not bad.

Strong enough and doesn't give more power to stalls. Looks like something you'd run in a more domin oriented deck.
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Re: Predator's Pounce | Predator's Bite https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57382.msg1175994#msg1175994
« Reply #10 on: January 16, 2015, 02:02:17 am »
I reaaally like the idea and I think the mechanic is balanced. However, I'm still iffy on Life gaining CC, even such thematically appropriate CC. It would certainly make Life more powerful and probably more balanced, but... its lack of control is one of its defining features. I like the card, but I'm not sure if I support the idea.
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Re: Predator's Pounce | Predator's Bite https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57382.msg1176005#msg1176005
« Reply #11 on: January 16, 2015, 03:07:37 am »
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