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Dark Elf Sniper | Dark Elf Assassin https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=58929.msg1197439#msg1197439
« on: July 18, 2015, 08:02:12 pm »
NAME:
Dark Elf Sniper
ELEMENT:
Darkness
COST:
3 :darkness
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
2 | 2
TEXT:
:darkness : Cloak for 3 turns.
:air :air : If cloaked, deal 2 damage to a target and remove Cloak.
NAME:
Dark Elf Assassin
ELEMENT:
Darkness
COST:
4 :darkness
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
4 | 4
TEXT:
:darkness : Cloak for 3 turns.
:air :air : If cloaked, deal 4 damage to a target and remove Cloak.

ART:
Razvanjp
IDEA:
ZephyrPhantom
NOTES:
You cannot trigger the second skill unless Dark Elf Sniper is cloaked. If Dark Elf Sniper is cloaked by an external source (E.g. Cloak), Dark Elf Sniper's ability will stay as the second ability until that source of cloaking ends.
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NAME:
Dark Elf Sniper
ELEMENT:
Darkness
COST:
3 :darkness
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
2 | 2
TEXT:
:darkness :darkness : Cloak for 3 turns.
:air :air : If cloaked, deal 2 damage to a target and remove Cloak.
NAME:
Dark Elf Assassin
ELEMENT:
Darkness
COST:
4 :darkness
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
4 | 4
TEXT:
:darkness :darkness : Cloak for 3 turns.
:air :air  : If cloaked, deal 4 damage to a target and remove Cloak.

ART:
Razvanjp
IDEA:
Zblader
NOTES:
You cannot trigger the second skill unless Dark Elf Sniper is cloaked. If Dark Elf Sniper is cloaked by an external source (E.g. Cloak), Dark Elf Sniper's ability will stay as the second ability until that source of cloaking ends.
SERIES:

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Re: Dark Elf Sniper | Dark Elf Assassin https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=58929.msg1198142#msg1198142
« Reply #1 on: July 23, 2015, 03:12:02 am »
Dark Elf Sniper's skills quanta costs kinda invalidates the power of itself.

It might be balanced but requiring so much quanta to make itself useful
would probably gives your opponent quick player kill before you can gather so much quanta.

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Re: Dark Elf Sniper | Dark Elf Assassin https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=58929.msg1198152#msg1198152
« Reply #2 on: July 23, 2015, 04:00:52 am »
Dark Elf Sniper's skills quanta costs kinda invalidates the power of itself.

It might be balanced but requiring so much quanta to make itself useful
would probably gives your opponent quick player kill before you can gather so much quanta.

That's not true. Are you trying to say that you've never seen somebody play Pulverizer because it had too much quanta cost? I'd say this card is perfectly fine, albeit maybe a bit UP due to the existence of cards like EE which don't require a duo and deals more damage unupped.

I'd say that the cloaking ability could be reduced to :darkness and be fine.
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Re: Dark Elf Sniper | Dark Elf Assassin https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=58929.msg1201017#msg1201017
« Reply #3 on: August 14, 2015, 08:34:06 pm »
Card Updated:
- Ability cost lowered to :darkness .

Apologies for letting this idea fall to the wayside. Any other thoughts on it before I submit it to Crucible?

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Re: Dark Elf Sniper | Dark Elf Assassin https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=58929.msg1201053#msg1201053
« Reply #4 on: August 15, 2015, 03:12:34 am »
Better update the description card text (in the table below it, not the card itself)

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:darkness : Cloak for 3 turns.
:darkness :darkness : If cloaked, deal 2 damage to a target and remove Cloak.
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Re: Dark Elf Sniper | Dark Elf Assassin https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=58929.msg1201426#msg1201426
« Reply #5 on: August 18, 2015, 06:00:09 am »
Fixed, thanks for the heads up. :)

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