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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg102998#msg102998
« Reply #324 on: June 28, 2010, 06:18:46 pm »
OOC: Blood, your post doesn't cover what happened after she woke up, so I don't know what to do next. I'm waiting for some of the other new players to post.
I'm waiting for the other new ppls to do something then ill join up with them :)

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg103227#msg103227
« Reply #325 on: June 28, 2010, 10:14:48 pm »
OOC: Blood, your post doesn't cover what happened after she woke up, so I don't know what to do next. I'm waiting for some of the other new players to post.
It does. Jennifer is going to find her weapon first. You don't exactly have to follow her; you can pretty much do anything you want.

A character isn't OP because it has strong abilities, but because it uses them improperly.

A character who controls luck is not over powered.

A character who controls luck while in Los Vegas IS over powered.
A powerful ability needs something to balance it. For example, Jonathan's Demigod form is incredibly powerful, but after using it he'll be so tired that he can barely move. For $$$man's ability, that poison seemed totally unavoidable, which is overpowered, and the resurrection didn't seem to have any kind of limit, which is overpowered.
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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg103267#msg103267
« Reply #326 on: June 28, 2010, 10:51:19 pm »
You didn't include her waking up the others, her putting on the doctors coat, and she completely ignored the comment from the large demonic looking man who's phased out of existance three times since awaking?

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg103351#msg103351
« Reply #327 on: June 29, 2010, 12:29:19 am »
So this is hell...all told, not bad.

Angus had no way of knowing that Rupert had led him to the red-tape-layered bureaucratic side of Hell, where the suffering is quiet and desperate.  Angus merely shambled along, nodding at the armor-clad demons, realizing that Abbadon really wasn't that creative -- he had given Angus a battlesuit that was apparently standard issue here in the Underworld. 

Well, at least it's getting me through here.

They trudged for what seemed like days, until Rupert finally chose a door marked "SHAME" and led Angus through.  Unsure of what to say or do, Angus merely followed.  Inside there was a swirling pool of some sort that was constantly displaying flickering visions of people doing things that made them ashamed of themselves.  As Angus watched, he began to feel a kind of energy radiating from the pool, and he slowly began to realize that he had some sort of grip on what the pool showed him.

Woah...college girls!  His attention immediately fixed that image in the pool, and he watched as a self-composed but ovbiously self-loathing young lady gave herself, ass up, to someone who looked like a drug dealer to Angus.  For the first time in his life, he saw something that wasn't prepackaged pornography designed to please.  He was able -- forced, even -- to watch the emotions warring on the face of the young lady as the man rather carelessly took her, first one way, and then the other.  The physical pain didn't come close to the deep, abiding shame that clearly wrote itself on her features with every new variation her...rapist? john?  dealer?...whatever he was...came up with. 

For the first time in his life, Angus was uncomfortable, in a deep, squirmy kind of way.  He always thought he'd be kind of turned on by this sort of thing, but...it wasn't what he'd thought it might be.  Suddenly, he wanted to stop it -- and the pool opened up before him.

The girl screamed and fainted, and the man bolted for the door and knocked himself out on the door frame.  Angus reached through the pool and started to grab the girl.  He didn't know what he was doing, but he knew he had to do something...and then, the futility of his situation dawned on him.

What am I gonna do, drag her into Hell and be like 'Just follow me, I'm following this dog here.'  She'd rather wake up in bed with that sonofabitch still bleeding on the floor.

Angus blinked, and suddenly the pool was no longer a portal, but just a window.


Rupert nudged Angus and whined at the pool.  There's something important here...

Angus suddenly understood, and started going through everyone he knew was alive.  Rupert must know something...I hope.


Minutes later, Angus was still staring, gape-jawed, at the naked Jennfier, desperately hiding her softest bits behind her gorgeous feathers, when the door behind him opened. 

More as events between Jonathan, Arctrael, and Jennifer develop.
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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg103376#msg103376
« Reply #328 on: June 29, 2010, 12:54:20 am »
Wait, what? Where is Angus now? Did he somehow get into the Emperor's lair?

Or is he just spying on Jennifer through that portal? If that's the case, then you've probably got it wrong. Jennifer wasn't really feeling any shame; what she's feeling is more like anger. She's going to shoot more than a few arrows into whoever abducted her. If your portal is only designed to see those who're feeling shame, then it wouldn't really let Angus see Jennifer.
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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg103377#msg103377
« Reply #329 on: June 29, 2010, 12:56:25 am »
I think what he did was go through the portal that abbadon left behind, traveling into the hell/void thing.

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg103384#msg103384
« Reply #330 on: June 29, 2010, 01:05:10 am »
I think what he did was go through the portal that abbadon left behind, traveling into the hell/void thing.
I know that. He went into Hell and found that Shame portal thing. Then he suddenly mentioned Jennifer, who is in the Emperor's lair right now. If that portal is specifically designed to see people in shame, then it shouldn't really see Jennifer, since my last entry did not show her feeling shameful.
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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg103385#msg103385
« Reply #331 on: June 29, 2010, 01:06:55 am »
You misunderstand how this game works.  This would be the first "attack" written.

Instead of editing his post, you must now write the next portion of Jennifer's plot so she experiences shame.  If you succeed, you will be rewarded.

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg103387#msg103387
« Reply #332 on: June 29, 2010, 01:12:04 am »
What "attack"? I don't think you wrote about that in the rules. I assume that means if someone writes something I didn't expect, I'll have to find a way to work around it?

Also, I think you misunderstand. Jennifer isn't even my character; she's an NPC controlled by me. The difference is that she isn't exactly bound by the rules of this game, and she won't be killed in the end; knowing that, I should not play her too much, or it will overshadow my real character.

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg103389#msg103389
« Reply #333 on: June 29, 2010, 01:13:24 am »
as I've said to you a million times Blood, an NPC controlled by a character is not a Non-player Character

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg103397#msg103397
« Reply #334 on: June 29, 2010, 01:19:08 am »
In this RPG we are each allowed to control one character, who will eventually be eliminated. Jennifer is not my character, and she will not be subject to elimination. What does that make her? Certainly not a player character. And don't say anything about her having her own color, because Gl1tch specifically said that we are allowed to have other colors.
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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg103399#msg103399
« Reply #335 on: June 29, 2010, 01:21:12 am »
I'm not going to say anything about her having her own colour, that would be pointless.

However, she is still a character controlled by a player, therefore a player character.

Also, she may not be targeted by GM elimination, but that doesn't stop a player from killing her off.

 

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