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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg100611#msg100611
« Reply #264 on: June 25, 2010, 05:52:43 am »
All right, I can accept what you've told me in the PM. Here's what I plan to do, and I hope you have no objections.

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After using that uber attack, Jonathan becomes extremely tired and collapses; he falls victim to the illusion magic and gets trapped into the inescapable nightmare.

In the nightmare, Jonathan immediately realizes that he cannot sense Jennifer's presence; that is only possible when one of them falls unconscious. Jonathan goes into a panic, because he thought that Jennifer is abducted; but in fact, Jonathan himself is the unconscious one.
In the Emperor's lair, Jennifer tries to contact Jonathan but is unable to, because Jonathan is unconscious. The Imps then proceed to take her DNA sample or whatever they're planning to do.

This stage is on the Moon, right? So Jonathan finds himself in the destroyed remnants of the Lunar Palace. With horror, he realizes that this is exactly what happened when he was Sol Invictus, when Eclipsis destroyed the Lunar Palace and abducted Luna.

After exploring, Jonathan finds Luna (not Jennifer, but Luna) unconscious and bound inside a magic circle of Darkness, with Eclipsis brainwashing and corrupting her; Jonathan sees Luna turning into Erebia.

Overcome with rage, Jonathan attacks Eclipsis, but Eclipsis pushes him back with a single blow. The two fight, and Eclipsis proceeds to beat the crap out of Jonathan. Jonathan is beaten nearly to death, but he refuses to give up; Eclipsis then shatters Jonathan's Excalibur Execution. Calling up the last bits of his strength, Jonathan awakens into Divine form for the first time; Eclipsis does the same. The two fight again, and Jonathan eventually emerges victorious.

After that, Jonathan wakes up. As you promised, Gl1tch, he now knows where the Emperor is through his connection with Jennifer. And Jonathan is going to be really, really angry...
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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg100804#msg100804
« Reply #265 on: June 25, 2010, 03:26:58 pm »
Go for it.

It sounds like a pretty good story.

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg100937#msg100937
« Reply #266 on: June 25, 2010, 07:23:10 pm »
All right, now I'll just wait for another person to post before I write something...

To those who think Jonathan appears to be invincible, you're all wrong. Originally what I intended was that after using that uber attack, Jonathan will revert back to human form; he'll be so exhausted that he can barely move. But all of that is irrelevant now, since he got dragged into that nightmare world.

But then, in the nightmare he'll show another form of weakness. Normally Jonathan appears to be calm and collected, because he isn't really scared of anything; but if he thinks something bad happened to Jennifer/Luna, he'll lose his cool completely, and start panicking and acting like a lunatic. If, in the future, he somehow thinks that Luna is dead... Yeah, that'd be fun to write. >:D But Gl1tch, you said that you won't be killing off NPCs, so I hope you don't really kill Luna.
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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg101038#msg101038
« Reply #267 on: June 25, 2010, 09:05:38 pm »
Big Bob's dog didn't die...

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg101062#msg101062
« Reply #268 on: June 25, 2010, 09:47:38 pm »
The darts came straight out of the air, directly above Angus' head.  They
bonuced harmlessly off of Angus' armored helmet, and for a moment he wondered what was
happening.  What the hell was this giant hand grabbing Abbadon?  Where did the darts come
from, and who would be stupid enough to through DARTS at body armor that was meant to
withstand mortar fire?

One by one, Jonathan, Acrtrael, Nanukk, and the others dropped into sound sleep, probably because of the darts.  Rapidly, Angus was the only one left conscious in a pile of rubble and shattered darts.  Everything around him stopped.

Even the Powers that seemed to so blithely interfere with self-proclaimed gods like Abbadon had left.  Angus was alone. 

...

Even the voice in his head had abandoned him.  Somehow, Angus knew without trying that any effort put into waking anyone up would be wasted.  Glancing through his HUD, Angus caught sight of the slowly-cooling body of Big Bob.  His promised ally.  Something struggled to gain Angus' attention, but he was unprepared for the shock of realizing that he missed the oversized human. 

...

Angus sat down on a particularly large chunk of rubble and popped the faceplate of his helmet off -- his gloves, too.  Reaching into his reconstructed pack, his hands hit the wrapped ducks.  ...  Too numb to show the emotion that wracked him, he violently threw the ducks into the air and casually blasted them apart with his autocannons.

The smell of charred meat filled the air, and Angus reached into his pack again, fishing out his Turkey Ranch and Swiss.  His interest momentarily flickered as he realized that it was reconstructed not in it's flattened form, but as if it were freshly made...and then it died again before that fact connected to anything else in his empty brain. 

He polished off the first half of his sub in three large Trollish bites.  It tasted like it always did, but his usual enjoyment of the perfect sandwich failed him. 

Unexpectedly, he heard a noise: scrabbling against the rubble of the crater.  Rising and turning to face it, he slapped his faceplate back down and raised his cannons, priming the grenade launchers.  The targeting reticule focused on an animal shape. 

A familiar shape.

"RPHMURPH!" Angus cried into his helmet, mouth still stuffed with Ranchy goodness. 

Flipping his helmet up and swallowing, Angus tried again. "RUPERT!" 

The hell hound stopped to pick up a large chunk of blown-up duck before walking up to Angus.  Looking sadly in the direction of Big Bob, Rupert whined once before nudging Angus' hand with his oversized nose.

"You've gotta be desperate if you're making friends with a troll, mutt."

Rupert nudged Angus' hand again, and Angus realized that he was holding the other half of his Turkey Ranch and swiss.  Damn dog doesn't want me, he wants my fucking sandwich!

Angus blinked.  Hey, I'm back.

Angus glanced around to make sure no living thing would witness the forbidden generousity between troll and canine that was about to go down.  When he was certain the coast was clear, he knelt down and offered the half-sub to the hell hound.

"Here you go, boy. Here you go."

Rupert gobbled the sandwich down, and then, in a gesture that must have been psychologically traumatic to the alpha male puppy, laid down and hesitantly rolled over, showing Angus his belly.

He was submitting.  Showing Angus that he was willing to accept the troll as master.


Fuck a rope, Angus thought, he wants me to be the leader of his pack.  He wants be to be his Big Bob.  If he had the capacity to tear up, he wouldn't have -- he was still a troll after all -- but he would have come close enough to be mad at himself for it.

As it was, he was surprisingly happy.  He'd never had a pet that he didn't involuntarily eat before.  Somehow, he knew that Rupert wouldn't put up with much chewing, and that Rupert could stop him.  The thought made him proud.


Angus stood up and streched, and Rupert started walking toward the base of the crater, whining slightly.  Knowing enough to follow, Angus allowed Rupert to lead him down into the chasm left behind by the portal that Abbadon had sprung from.  A tiny wisp of rent space still existed.

Rupert pawed at it, and slowly, with each scratch, it grew.  Moments later, a gap large enough for Angus to crawl through had opened.  Rupert hopped through it, and Angus followed. 

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg101064#msg101064
« Reply #269 on: June 25, 2010, 09:50:56 pm »
=o

Bonus points to Essence for remembering the helmet.

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg101258#msg101258
« Reply #270 on: June 26, 2010, 02:22:51 am »
Ugh... Gl1tch, can you not make darts fall from the sky? The whole notion of that is just too... absurd. I mean, why darts? Why not just bolts of paralyzing magic energy or something? And that giant hand is weird. I don't like those parts, so I'll just make Jonathan fall unconscious without even realizing the existence of the darts and giant hand.
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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg101264#msg101264
« Reply #271 on: June 26, 2010, 02:43:36 am »
It'll all make sense, just wait.

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg101274#msg101274
« Reply #272 on: June 26, 2010, 03:04:38 am »
With the raining darts and fear-based neurotoxin and DNA samples and everything, don't tell me the Imps are sci-fi themed? ???
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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg101295#msg101295
« Reply #273 on: June 26, 2010, 03:37:07 am »
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Maybe.

The imp's characters aren't set in stone.  Things will happen as they happen.

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg101745#msg101745
« Reply #274 on: June 26, 2010, 10:09:31 pm »
...so, like, there are only three people left in this RPG? We needz moar playerz.

I'm just gonna wait for Helios. Don't feel like writing right now.
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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg101786#msg101786
« Reply #275 on: June 26, 2010, 10:43:29 pm »
Can more players be added after now though? I think that maybe some people should take over the already built characters though.

 

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