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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg90620#msg90620
« Reply #48 on: June 13, 2010, 09:01:31 pm »
Gl1tch, update my character's profile! I've asked you three times already.

Again, let me be perfectly clear. My character will NOT be killed, regardless of what happens. When he is eliminated, he will simply be teleported back to his original world and never come back again.

Also, please elaborate. How do we start the game? What are the "beasts"? Or do we just write whatever we want?
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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg90631#msg90631
« Reply #49 on: June 13, 2010, 09:12:33 pm »
Write whatever you want.

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg90635#msg90635
« Reply #50 on: June 13, 2010, 09:14:24 pm »
 Nanuuk quivers in the darkness, his slender form all but obscured by the shadows around him. He grips his Glacius tightly, but finds no reassurance in its perfection. He refuses to move; he has no idea what the darkness could be hiding. He is completely unfamiliar with the dark environment around him, having lived most of his life in the glaring light of the Arctic North.

Wow. How did I get here? What do I do now? Why is there someone speaking?

Why is there someone speaking? And why is he saying "Every time one of you dies, the rest of you can move on"?

Oh, so I have to fight someone, Nanuuk thinks. Well, I can't do it alone. His lips twitching silently, Nanuuk tapped into the astral plane, a higher dimension parallel to this one. In it, he selects a Spirit and pulls it back to the physical dimension.

Stop that! called the Spirit.
No. I need you. With a shove, Nanuuk propelled the Spirit into the physical dimension. He was a pudgy sphere with one sharp spike on its head.
Send me back RIGHT NOW! the Spirit beamed into Nanuuk's brain.
Nanuuk smacks the Spirit with an outstretched palm, then picks it up and throws it into the darkness. Come back to me when you've found something useful!

He waited.

The Spirit did not return.

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg90642#msg90642
« Reply #51 on: June 13, 2010, 09:19:49 pm »
All around him, Jonathan could see nothing but darkness. Complete, pitch darkness, the antithesis of his elemental essence. It reminded him of... Eclipsis. His psychotic inner demon. And his head was hurting, badly.

Hmm...? Was someone speaking just now? Jonathan thought he had heard a faint voice. "...dies, the rest of you can move on. Make sure he can see. Good luck!"

What? What was that? Jonathan mused. Who were the "rest of us"?

No, this is no good if I couldn't see anything. Gathering the powers of Light to his right palm, Jonathan sent a piercing shaft of blinding white light into the dark abyss before him. And...

Jonathan involuntarily cringed, taking a few steps back. In the same instant, that thing in front of him let out a blood-curdling, ear-piercing scream. A dozen black tentacles, scaly and oozing with dark slime, slithered out of the illuminated shadows toward Jonathan. He felt a shiver run down his spine, but Jonathan had faced far more terrible beasts in his life than this monstrosity before him. He quickly drew his sword, the Excalibur, and let his will and energy flow into the silvery-white blade. The sword glowed brightly, a beacon of light in the pitch darkness. Jonathan swung his sword, sending a crescent-shaped wave of white Light into the slimy tentacles. The beast shrieked in agony as its limbs were sliced apart.

Jonathan could see the thing's face now. It was eerily human-like, but grotesquely deformed and covered by patches of dark scales; its skin was black. A writhing mass of black tentacles sprouted from its scalp, where its hairs were supposed to be. It had two pairs of eyes stacked on top of each other, glowing with a crazed, blood-red glint; its jaws were abnormally wide, with seemingly more razor-sharp fangs than the amount that can fit into that mouth. Where the monster's tongue was supposed to be, there was another tentacle, thicker than the others; it ended in the shape of a cobra's head, except it had no eyes and too many teeth. The monster had no body, only a head with thousands of tentacle-hairs; it was about five times larger than Jonathan himself.

In the name of Sol Invictus, what is that thing?! Jonathan thought.

Suddenly, something seemed to slam into the monster's writhing mass of tentacles. It resembled a pudgy blue sphere, about the size of Jonathan's own head, made of a strange, jelly-like substance; a single, metallic-looking spike protruded from the sphere. Jonathan watched in horrified fascination as the black tentacles twined around the sphere's bulbous body. With a sickening sound, the monster plunged the tip of one of its tentacles into the sphere. It quickly shriveled, until it was nothing but a spike attached to an empty blue husk.

Then, the monster turned its attention to Jonathan. He gathered his powers, and materialized several longswords in the air, made of condensed Light. Jonathan Solaris, reincarnation of Sol Invictus, prepared for battle.
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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg90645#msg90645
« Reply #52 on: June 13, 2010, 09:24:35 pm »
Ok, just so I know, we are all together at the moment right? I'm asking this before Bloodshadow makes his post.

Also, I updated my profile with just a little bit more information. Not much really, mostly just a little information on Rupert.

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg90648#msg90648
« Reply #53 on: June 13, 2010, 09:29:06 pm »
BTW, Gl1tch, does "no writing" count as "bad writing"?

And if you answer "yes", is some writing bad enough to be worse than no writing? :P

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg90665#msg90665
« Reply #54 on: June 13, 2010, 09:49:17 pm »
Ok, just so I know, we are all together at the moment right? I'm asking this before Bloodshadow makes his post.
I'm not sure, but I think we can decide for ourselves if we want to be together or not.

I'm finished my part. That giant tentacle-haired face monster thing just killed Nanuuk's summoned spirit. Presumably, Jonathan and Nanuuk are fairly close to each other right now. We don't have to fight each other right now, right?
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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg90667#msg90667
« Reply #55 on: June 13, 2010, 09:52:05 pm »
=o

Forgot to mention I guess...

If it's not story related, put it in flavor text.  Also, please write in third person, makes it easier for everyone to know who you are.

Lastly, I really couldn't give a damn what you do, as long as it's good writing.

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg90670#msg90670
« Reply #56 on: June 13, 2010, 09:54:41 pm »
Third person?! Why didn't you mention that sooner?

All right, I'll fix it... *grumbles*
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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg90682#msg90682
« Reply #57 on: June 13, 2010, 10:11:21 pm »
Wow, we're using different tenses AND different narrative persons. I'll switch to past, then ;)




Not good! No, no, not good at all! Nanuuk stood silently, profusely sweating as he gripped his Glacius with all his might. Now what?

Then, he heard a noise. Nanuuk had heard something similar to it before when he had seen an Arctic Octopus feeding. It was a sickening, bubbling, groaning sound, like someone had stuck a plunger into your chest and was sucking in your blood.

Wow. That's a good one. I'll have to remember that, Nanuuk said, looking for a distraction - any way to escape the darkness.

He made up his mind. He began inching backwards, as far away from the strange noise as he dared. Slowly... this place can't be infinite...

Then, his back hit something furry. Furry? That's not good, is it?

"Please tell me you're a baby panda or something," Nanuuk said, turning around with dread.

The creature responded by roaring. Nanuuk responded by screaming and instinctively casting an Ice Bolt spell. A whirling cluster of freezing crystals were propelled through the air, hitting the beast straight in the chest. It stepped backwards an inch or two. Nanuuk took the opportunity to cast a minor spell.

Let's see if I still know how to do this... "Phospho!" Nanuuk called. The orb on his Glacius emitted a pathetic, dim light. Nanuuk only had time to see a huge, hairy paw before he was knocked sprawling to the floor. He scrambled upwards and quickly swung his Glacius haphazardly all around him. It met against something firm and another roar emanated throughout the darkness. Ow. My wrist. Note to self: You do not know how to use a club. Before the beast had a chance to recover, Nanuuk concentrated and let out a Freeze spell, this time, aimed low.

A freezing wind blew across the shadows, searching for a solid. It soon found one - the legs of the beast, which promptly were encased in lumps of ice. With a startled cry, the beast fell forwards. Nanuuk stepped aside, narrowly avoiding the gigantic, falling frame of the strange creature. It landed with a crunch. Ouch. That's bad, I think. And it was. The creature had broken its skull when it fell.

Well, now that that's done with... Without even a cursory glance at the creature, Nanuuk turned tail and continued running.

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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg90707#msg90707
« Reply #58 on: June 13, 2010, 10:49:25 pm »
Sigh... Icy, I thought you'd run toward my direction. Moar character interaction plz :)

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With a wave of his hand, the six incandescent longswords made of concentrated Light soared past Jonathan, directly into the deformed face of the tentacled monster before him. The creature shrieked again; it obviously did not like light. Its tentacles snaked up into the air, trying to intercept the glowing white swordlike energy projectiles; the protective scales on the tentacles proved to be no match for the cutting power of condensed Light. Tentacles were sliced to pieces, and the six blades of light lodged themselves into the ghastly creature's face before dissipating.

The monster shrieked even louder. The deep wounds on the creature's face bubbled with a sickly greenish liquid, and began to slowly heal themselves; the severed tentacles also started to regrow. Regeneration, Jonathan thought to himself. Not good. I have to use something more powerful. Focusing his will, Jonathan materialized six more blades of light around him, and sent them flying toward the monster. Then he shouted an incantation, in a strange, archaic language:

"剑光残影!"

As soon as Jonathan uttered that phrase, the blades of light burst into a blinding shower of white sparks and motes. From the burst of light, there came more than three dozens of ethereal blades, made of pure white energy. Like a hailstorm of light, the shower of energy blades descended upon the monster, literally turning its malformed face into a pincushion. The monster howled wildly in pain and rage; the blinding flurry of attacks were too fast for it to regenerate.

Jonathan did not like to see others suffer, not even twisted abominations like the one before him. Mercifully, he decided to put the thing out of its misery. Raising the Excalibur, Jonathan pointed the holy sword directly at the point between the monster's eyebrows. The golden runes of Light on the silvery white blade began to glow. "In the name of Sol Invictus, I put thy soul to rest," Jonathan chanted. "Lux Solis."

A beam of golden light, streaked with white lightning, burst out of the tip of Jonathan's sword. Like a shooting star, the shaft of light pierced the creature's skull, liberating it from its pains and agony. Jonathan put his sword back into its sheath.

Now, I still have to figure out where I am... Jonathan looked around. Suddenly, he sensed another presence, a faint blue glow of Water. Was someone there? Curious, Jonathan walked toward the direction of the Water presence.



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Re: Gradual Massacre by Gl1tch https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7906.msg90764#msg90764
« Reply #59 on: June 13, 2010, 11:39:58 pm »
Angus loooked around in confusion.  How did it get dark in here?  Power outage?.  Somewhere nearby, a sudden flare of light -- swords? -- illuminated the surroundings.  A big room, some shadowy doorways, a couple of other people-looking things, and a few definitely not-people-looking things.  OK.  Something about we move on when someone dies?  Great.

Determined not to be that guy, Angus checked his supplies.  Autocannon.  9 yards of strip...not a lot, but it'll have to do.  Cleaver.  Four flak grenades.  Turkey Ranch and Swiss from Quiznos.  Damn, I forgot about that.  Kinda flat now.  Oh, well, whatever.  Hustler.  Another Hustler.  Another Hustler.  Damn, I need to clean out my waitin' pack.  Here we go.  Flashlight.  Lighter.  Two Cubans...running low.  And...oh, shit, only one fifth of vodka left.  Spare doorag.  Condoms.  Here we go...matte black blanket.

Tucking himself into a corner as much as possible, Angus spread the blanket out over his bulk, trying to look like rubble in the shadows.

The time'll come to kill one of these fools and keep moving on myself, but it looks like these critters have the job well in hand for now.  No use in showing my hand yet.

Slowly, Angus' trollish vision started to adapt to the darkness, and he saw the scene more clearly: An octagonal room, four doors on four of the walls, and one human-ish entitiy at each corner of the room.  Some sort of cage had just been lifted up in the middle of the room, and perhaps six massive beasts were just starting out ino the fray.

One betentacled horror had been particularly aggressive, and paid for it when one of the other people had created the light-swords and ripped it a new arsehole.  It looked as though the other five were different, each it's own shape, but all somehow looked like deformed undersea creatures: the squid just got taken down, but the eel, the crab, the anemone, the pile of kelp, and the stingray were all starting to quest outward, though more cautiously than their fallen comrade.

Angus shuddered.  I freaking HATE seafood.

Hopefully, none of them had a keen sense of smell.  Angus showered just last week, but he was pretty sure anything even vaguely doglike could smell him from a mile away, matte black blanket or no.  Shifting around so his autocannon was at the ready, he continued to wait.
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