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Re: Elements RPG 2.0 Take 2 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7380.msg82281#msg82281
« Reply #72 on: June 04, 2010, 10:36:26 pm »
OOC:

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I was wondering if I could pick your brain a bit and have you make a new one with the information I posted incorporated? It'd be a huge favour.
Erm... yes. But 2 points.
    I don't know what this new information is ;) I'm pretty busy this weekend so I can't undertake a project like this. Maybe in a week or two.

Wardead, I don't want to be that Forger because you already left him. :P


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Clang.

Clang.

CLANG.
Alvitor sent the hammer soaring downwards in a wide arc. Sparks flew as it met the shield, flattening out another half an inch. Alvitor then stopped and lifted it up to the morning sun, inspecting it from every angle. Its surface was smooth and reflective, and Alvitor knew that it would last a while. He set down the plain shield and smiled. He loved the feeling after another creation.

Alvitor's mechanical eye swiveled and readjusted then. Alvitor saw a form walking towards him. Hoffen. That young scoundrel; I'll show him. Hoffen was a Forger who claimed to be better than Alvitor. But I'll show him.

In a few minutes, Hoffen reached him, brandishing a shield adorned with various designs. "How do you like that?" Hoffen said in his garrulous Grawis dialect. He held his shield out proudly.

"Nice shield. Or is it a painting?" Alvitor laughed. "The beauty of an item is defined by its purpose, not by how pretty it looks."
Hoffen was not amused. "What do you have, then?"
Alvitor lifted his circular plain shield. "This. It's about half as heavy as your shield, and twice as strong, I'd wager."
Hoffen smiled crookedly. "Then let us have a test. We each take hammer swings at the other's shield. Whoever's shield breaks with the most swings is the better Forger."

Alvitor was waiting for this. Without a word, he picked up his shield and put it on. Hoffen hefted a large hammer and sent it smashing laterally at Alvitor's waiting shield. The hammer glanced off, denting the shield. Hoffen groaned in pain as he jarred his wrist. But he remained unfazed. Lifting the hammer high over his head, he sent it flying at the shield again...
and again...
and again. Every stroke he made, Alvitor's shield simply made a dent. The hammer made no lasting impact; it merely glanced off, its impact absorbed and redirected by Alvitor's softmetal alloy. Finally, at the eleventh stroke, the hammer split into two.

"Eleven," panted Hoffen. "Pathetic." He then lifted his shield. "Now do your worst."

Alvitor smiled and lifted his trusty old hammer. Then, he concentrated and muttered a few syllables in the strange Terran tongue. He himself only knew 4 Terran words - the words necessary to cast the Enchant Artifact spell. He watched as whirling energies entered his hammer. He twirled it once for momentum, then brought it down on Hoffen's shield with all his might.

They watched as the hammer stopped on the surface of the shield. They then watched the shield's brittle metal slowly fall apart, cut across with a jagged broken line from the force of one hammer's blow. The two pieces of shield fell onto the ground with a clatter and Hoffen left without a word. Alvitor smiled. I've grown stronger. Even I did not expect that.

Then, Alvitor's mechanized eye twitched again. Far in the distance was a tall, humanoid figure. He was hunched over and traveling slowly, supporting himself on a strange staff. Does he need help? Alvitor waited until he was within earshot. From this distance, Alvitor could see that he was an Anubis, one of the ancient denizens of the Desert of Time. Then, he called out in the Common Language, "Stranger! Do you need any help!"

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Re: Elements RPG 2.0 Take 2 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7380.msg82306#msg82306
« Reply #73 on: June 04, 2010, 11:06:45 pm »
Character Name: Jake (Jacob)

Race: Halfings of Life

Element:  :life

Appearance:  4 Feet 10 Inches he stood. He was athletic and fit despite his small stature. Jake had large feet and hands for his body, and small legs. His hair was long, silky, straight and white. It drenched over his neck, and sometimes would hang over his deep blue eyes and white eyebrows. His nose was simple, as was his mouth. He had a very long, white beard, where often food would catch. Jake would wear light leather armor, allowing him to be mobile. The armor would consist of a brown vest. A very beautiful White button-up-shirt. The sleeves would be tipped green. His pants would be also green. He wore brown hiking boots, a plate of metal between the leather.

Age: 21

Background: Along the great river, Jake would leave a peaceful life with nature. His colony away from the loud voices and fights from cities.He had been born into a somewhat royal life, being heir to the colony leader. The sun's ray would be perfect, as thriving was never a challenge.

One day, it all had changed, the peace, the serenity, everything. The day had been almost perfect, everything was going well. Not a care in the world, you might say. About mid-day, a elder had called a town meeting. Without certainty of what the meeting would be about, we had gathered quickly to the Elder-campfire. The fire burnt green, as the Elder rose. The elder held a face of disgust, and fright. He had told that he feels a unrighteous presence. Just then, bursting from the trees, came the Graviton army, bringing torches, swords, and all kinds of weapons.

The colony had been defenseless, and unarmed. They rampaged and raided the camp, the Elder being their first victim. They killed the women, and even children, showing no mercy as they extinguished the Elder-fire, which had been the greatest-prize of the colony. Jake had ran across the forest, seeking shelter. Then, as soon as it came, it went. The trees were burning, the colony was in siege, nothing was heard. As Jake looked around the aftermath, he was speechless, it was almost as if it was a dream. But he knew it wasn't. The only thing that was left of the Colony was a small, black tabby. The tabby had been his, so Jake would take the tabby, and place it into his pack. The entire Life Halflings had not been gone, but the Colony, the colony that Jake had come to love, and come to cherish, had been gone. The women, the children, the elders, everything. The young Halfling knew, he would have to take revenge, take revenge for his colony, and the pain it has caused.

Belongings:
-Boo: Boo is Jacob's cat, he isn't really fit for being a battle pet, as he is a Domesticated tabby.
-Life Staff: A staff Jake would use to either call upon creatures of the wild, or to heal, and even harm others.
-Halfling Bow: A royal weapon, used by only the most pure Halflings.
-Elder-fire ashes: A box of ashes, that would oddly self-regenerate, using the ashes, it would make any campfire grow an odd green, the fire would give others a sense of calm, and peace.
-Light armor: (Said above.)

Abilities:
Greater Heal: Jake would be able to greatly restore any allies health, even his own. He channels his power from his body, and exerts it into a healing energy for others. This tactic is what saved him from when he had been injured during his colony raid.

Empathetic Bond: Channeling Jake's energy, he would exert a binding spell, healing all his allies, including himself over time.

Call Of The Wild: Jacob would let out a beautiful, loud whistle, summoning nearby animals to his and his ally's aid. (If there are any. I assume whatever creature is called would be up to purity.)

Life Shot: Channeling his power into the tip of his bow, Jake would unleash a deadly shot, able of killing even the mightiest of foes.

Momentum: Jake would control his body, as he would begin to move faster, blurs forming behind him, as he would be able to go extremely fast.

(Phew, I think I did great! I liked my storyline :D.)





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Re: Elements RPG 2.0 Take 2 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7380.msg82309#msg82309
« Reply #74 on: June 04, 2010, 11:15:35 pm »
OOC: It wouldn't have been the Gravity Army, maybe a small faction of rebels, but the people of Gravity are generally peaceful, they defend, not attack.

that, and some grammar concerns (I'm just going to assume that english isn't your first language, and push my grammar nazi nature to the side), but aside from that I say welcome aboard.

Zigabogado

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Re: Elements RPG 2.0 Take 2 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7380.msg82312#msg82312
« Reply #75 on: June 04, 2010, 11:17:15 pm »
Occ. ._. When roleplaying I tend to talk in past tense.

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Re: Elements RPG 2.0 Take 2 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7380.msg82314#msg82314
« Reply #76 on: June 04, 2010, 11:18:48 pm »
OOC: as you should, but your past tense is still grammatically incorrect, and your sentence structure is off.

Zigabogado

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Re: Elements RPG 2.0 Take 2 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7380.msg82316#msg82316
« Reply #77 on: June 04, 2010, 11:19:36 pm »
Occ.

Pffftt! W/e. I still think my storyline is awesome.

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Re: Elements RPG 2.0 Take 2 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7380.msg82320#msg82320
« Reply #78 on: June 04, 2010, 11:21:35 pm »
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That it was, so long as you don't leave it as the Graviton Army.

Also, Icy, thanks for the map. Miniwally has gone ahead and made the edits for me, but he still gave you credit on the map.

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Re: Elements RPG 2.0 Take 2 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7380.msg82321#msg82321
« Reply #79 on: June 04, 2010, 11:22:06 pm »


OOC: Yeh the new maps here after a long chat with purity over the edits.

Zigabogado

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Re: Elements RPG 2.0 Take 2 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7380.msg82326#msg82326
« Reply #80 on: June 04, 2010, 11:26:57 pm »
OCC.
Alright, It'll be Gravity Rebels, then. Whatever the matter. Jake still requires revenge for his fallen friends.

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Re: Elements RPG 2.0 Take 2 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7380.msg82327#msg82327
« Reply #81 on: June 04, 2010, 11:29:39 pm »
InC: As Remar sits in front of his campfire, he softly began to hum. this attracted the attention of a few rabbits, he ses them scamper across the grass, he looks over and smiles, then remembers how hungrey he is, he pulls out his long sword and softly approaches, then at the right time swings into the grass, after a small squeak he picks up the rabbit and puts it over the fire and softly takes a nap

An hour or so later he awakes to find his rabbit almost perfectly cooked, he quickly takes it off and starts to eat only to find that his bag of general supplies was taken, he sighed, lucky for him he still had a lot of water in his tank. He takes off from camp a few minutes later in search of a town, with an inn.

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Re: Elements RPG 2.0 Take 2 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7380.msg82329#msg82329
« Reply #82 on: June 04, 2010, 11:32:39 pm »


OOC: Yeh the new maps here after a long chat with purity over the edits.
OOC: i dont like the edits :C entropy needs the entropic shore and darkness was increased to much, at least put it in the death marshes :P

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Re: Elements RPG 2.0 Take 2 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7380.msg82336#msg82336
« Reply #83 on: June 04, 2010, 11:37:51 pm »
OOC:

Entropy isn't connected to the land, as i said, it floats around

and I wanted darkness larger.

 

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