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Re: Elements RPG! Part 3 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=6743.msg82417#msg82417
« Reply #240 on: June 05, 2010, 01:10:25 am »
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Regarding the historical details, the signing of the Treaty of Utarius occurred before the appointment of the Masters and at the beginning of the First Golden Age of Heaven. It was one of three particularly special (but alas, relatively brief) periods of time when Heaven experienced a true era of splendour and prosperity. Simultaneously, there was well-governed peace on the Middle Plane while Heaven ruled over it, resolved any disputes, and also used its vast overarching power to protect the Middle Plane from any external threat. Unfortunately, it occurred in such a distant past that its memory is beginning to dull even in the minds of the Angels, and it is virtually altogether forgotten by the inhabitants of the Middle Plane, whom are uncertain as to whether that historical period may have been legend.
Hmm... Is Emparael old enough to have attended this treaty? If yes, then Bloodshadow should have been the leader of Hell at that time.

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As for Hell's current supreme figure, I had originally envisioned Belphegor; Lucifer and Satan being previous holders of that position.
Belphegor? Isn't he the representation of Sloth?

Let me think... How about Asmodeus? Generally he represents Lust, but I've always thought that Lust should be represented by Lilith. And Asmodeus is the ruler of Baator (Hell) in Dungeons and Dragons.

As for the uberdemons, maybe we should just name them after the Seven Deadly Sins? Suberbia (pride), Luxuria (lust), Avaritia (greed), Acedia (sloth), Ira (wrath), Invidia (envy), Gula (gluttony)... Or after the demons that represent those sins? Lucifer (pride), Lilith (lust), Mammon (greed), Belphegor (sloth), Satan (wrath), Leviathan (envy), Beelzebub (gluttony)...

Also, at this point I feel that there is a need to establish several different races of Demons, as the Demons living in the Middle Plane are obviously different from the Demons currently living in Hell, and from the ancient race of Demons whose names cannot be translated (Bloodshadow's race), and from the uberdemons that wanted to destroy the world. I would suggest the following:

Lesser Demons live in the Middle Plane. They all have a human form and a true form; their true forms are usually humanoid and roughly human-sized. They constantly war among each other, but the leader of their most powerful faction was Phaeus Shade, the Black Dragoon.

True Demons live in the Abyss of Hell. They can take human form if they wish, but they generally appear in their true forms, which are not always humanoid and usually much larger than humans. They are ruled by the Archdemon Council, led by [blank] (Asmodeus? Belphegor?).

Ancient Ones are a race of extremely powerful Demons that had once ruled the Abyss millennia ago  but are now extinct. They all have many different forms, all of them monstrous, and their true forms are gargantuan and terrifying. They speak a language that cannot be pronounced by humans, so their names cannot be translated phonetically; their names are only translated via literal meanings. Their leader, the "魔皇" (Devilord), was 血影 (Bloodshadow).

The Obyriths (name taken from D&D) are several Demons so powerful and abhorrent that they have been forever sealed away by the combined effort of the Angels of Heaven and the Ancient Ones. They only seek to lay waste and devastation to the world.
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Re: Elements RPG! Part 3 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=6743.msg83351#msg83351
« Reply #241 on: June 05, 2010, 11:27:47 pm »
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Regarding the historical details, the signing of the Treaty of Utarius occurred before the appointment of the Masters and at the beginning of the First Golden Age of Heaven. It was one of three particularly special (but alas, relatively brief) periods of time when Heaven experienced a true era of splendour and prosperity. Simultaneously, there was well-governed peace on the Middle Plane while Heaven ruled over it, resolved any disputes, and also used its vast overarching power to protect the Middle Plane from any external threat. Unfortunately, it occurred in such a distant past that its memory is beginning to dull even in the minds of the Angels, and it is virtually altogether forgotten by the inhabitants of the Middle Plane, whom are uncertain as to whether that historical period may have been legend.
Hmm... Is Emparael old enough to have attended this treaty? If yes, then Bloodshadow should have been the leader of Hell at that time.

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As for Hell's current supreme figure, I had originally envisioned Belphegor; Lucifer and Satan being previous holders of that position.
Belphegor? Isn't he the representation of Sloth?

Let me think... How about Asmodeus? Generally he represents Lust, but I've always thought that Lust should be represented by Lilith. And Asmodeus is the ruler of Baator (Hell) in Dungeons and Dragons.

As for the uberdemons, maybe we should just name them after the Seven Deadly Sins? Suberbia (pride), Luxuria (lust), Avaritia (greed), Acedia (sloth), Ira (wrath), Invidia (envy), Gula (gluttony)... Or after the demons that represent those sins? Lucifer (pride), Lilith (lust), Mammon (greed), Belphegor (sloth), Satan (wrath), Leviathan (envy), Beelzebub (gluttony)...

Also, at this point I feel that there is a need to establish several different races of Demons, as the Demons living in the Middle Plane are obviously different from the Demons currently living in Hell, and from the ancient race of Demons whose names cannot be translated (Bloodshadow's race), and from the uberdemons that wanted to destroy the world. I would suggest the following:

Lesser Demons live in the Middle Plane. They all have a human form and a true form; their true forms are usually humanoid and roughly human-sized. They constantly war among each other, but the leader of their most powerful faction was Phaeus Shade, the Black Dragoon.

True Demons live in the Abyss of Hell. They can take human form if they wish, but they generally appear in their true forms, which are not always humanoid and usually much larger than humans. They are ruled by the Archdemon Council, led by [blank] (Asmodeus? Belphegor?).

Ancient Ones are a race of extremely powerful Demons that had once ruled the Abyss millennia ago  but are now extinct. They all have many different forms, all of them monstrous, and their true forms are gargantuan and terrifying. They speak a language that cannot be pronounced by humans, so their names cannot be translated phonetically; their names are only translated via literal meanings. Their leader, the "魔皇" (Devilord), was 血影 (Bloodshadow).

The Obyriths (name taken from D&D) are several Demons so powerful and abhorrent that they have been forever sealed away by the combined effort of the Angels of Heaven and the Ancient Ones. They only seek to lay waste and devastation to the world.
Even the incumbent Council members would have been young, like the world itself, during the First Golden Age. However, Emparael (and consequently Bloodshadow) would have attended the signing of the treaty.

Further, I do not particularly mind selecting either Belphegor or Asmodeus; if we intend Lilith to represent lust, thus making it more convenient for Asmodeus to hold the supreme position, it is fine with me.

I like your demon classifications and their respective histories.

Note: I shall be posting InC soon.

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Re: Elements RPG! Part 3 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=6743.msg83453#msg83453
« Reply #242 on: June 06, 2010, 01:37:27 am »
InC: Though from a professional and objective standpoint, Catyrael disapproved of the display of excessive emotion while fulfilling a mission, he understood the importance Lucius' daughter must hold for his friend, especially due to his own personal experiences.

"We cannot divert our attention from our primary objectives too often for our personal desires, but I shall assist you now, Xanriel. I am interested in becoming acquainted with Lucius' daughter. In the meantime, Falindael, proceed onwards and destroy the hostile right flank," ordered the Archangel of Justice, "Is it alright if you do it alone?"

Falindael laughed amusedly.

"What is that expression the mortals use? Ah, yes: piece of cake!"

Then he departed to his side of the field, while the Archangel followed his friend, descending to Earth, and into the raging combat.

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Re: Elements RPG! Part 3 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=6743.msg83493#msg83493
« Reply #243 on: June 06, 2010, 02:04:24 am »
Catyrael went with Xanriel to help Sirenes, right? Just asking, because I do not want the Mavros fight interrupted.
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Re: Elements RPG! Part 3 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=6743.msg83495#msg83495
« Reply #244 on: June 06, 2010, 02:06:14 am »
Catyrael went with Xanriel to help Sirenes, right?
That is correct.

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Re: Elements RPG! Part 3 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=6743.msg83500#msg83500
« Reply #245 on: June 06, 2010, 02:10:19 am »
"I know it's hard to understand, but I'm not just a Sword now, i'm also a Guardian Angel, and if she needs me, I must be there. Thank you friend."

As the two landed, Xanriel's wings bashed into a group of Mummy's, knocking three of them down as his brilliant sword swung up through a fourth, it's bandages catching flame as the sword passed. Rays of Light sprouted into existence, bashing into the fallen Mummy's and making sure they stayed down, some flying into severed, animated limbs, stopping them from crawling back to their owners.

Xanriel scanned the group being attacked,
THERE! Sirenes's spell broke through the cacophony of the battle. Xanriel took wing, landing next to Sirenes and cutting the legs off a Mummy as it shambled toward her.
"Sirenes!" He lifted her up into his arms and kissed her deeply, setting her down to defend against the next attack.

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Re: Elements RPG! Part 3 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=6743.msg83551#msg83551
« Reply #246 on: June 06, 2010, 02:53:18 am »
She squeals in surprise at being lifted off the ground so suddenly and kissed, but quickly recovers, laughing as he sets her down and immediately returning to the battle. "Sorry about the interruption. Who would have thought that mummies would be in the Lands of Death" She chuckles at her own joke as he freezes a mummies's skull and shoves it against the stone wall, effectively shattering it. The body continues to advance, headless as it was.

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Re: Elements RPG! Part 3 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=6743.msg83585#msg83585
« Reply #247 on: June 06, 2010, 03:26:40 am »
"How do we kill these things!" Xanriel called upon the Holy Light to heal a wound from a glancing slash on his arm. As the shining light shone down on him, the surrounding mummies howled in pain, stumbling back from the light.
"That's it! Catyrael, use the Holy Light, the dead can't stand it's touch!" He summoned it up again, calling it directly onto his shield and reflecting it as a power ray of light, shooting through the body of one of the Mummies. The mummy screamed in agony as it's flesh burnt up, crumbling to a pile of ashes.

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Re: Elements RPG! Part 3 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=6743.msg83609#msg83609
« Reply #248 on: June 06, 2010, 04:03:24 am »
Unable to manipulate light, Sirenes steps back and lets the angels do their work, watching as the enemy turned to dust in front of her eyes. Their numbers began to dissipate. The vampire squinted and shielded their eyes, unused to such light. She thinks, trying to find a way to help and an idea suddenly pops into her head. Concentrating, she summons ice, carefully forming it into a specific shape she wanted. Layer upon layer formed until she held a large, perfectly clear prism. Just as she finished, Xanriel summoned light into his shield. She tosses the prism into the beam and in an instant, it catches the light creating a blinding flash as it enhances and splits it into multiple directions. The concentrated light vaporizes the ice into steam, but manages to set the surrounding mummies aflame.

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Re: Elements RPG! Part 3 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=6743.msg83618#msg83618
« Reply #249 on: June 06, 2010, 04:22:19 am »
Editing in progress.


The False Vampires smiled maliciously, showing their venomous fangs and rotting gum, as they stepped out of their hiding place. There were more than two dozens of them. Jonathan's trio was severely outnumbered. Jonathan would not worry so much if those were the regular undead, because they were usually mindless puppets who only knew how to destroy; but those False Vampires are Death's elite, each of them having deadly arsenals of Death magic under their control. Suddenly, Jonathan saw something that made him gape in astonishment, utterly dumbfounded.

"Mavros?!"

Indeed, the leader of the False Vampires before Jonathan resembled his traitorous uncle, Mavros. But this Mavros was completely different at the same time, no longer a True Vampire of Darkness but a False Vampire of Death. He was clad in a macabre purple cloak and gray bone armor, the poisonous blade Arsenic in his hand, dripping venom; his hair was still jet black and slicked down, and his eyes were still as black, deep and bottomless as the abyss. "Surprised, Nephew?" Mavros said with his signature mocking sneer.

"B-But I killed you!" Jonathan stuttered. "How can you still be alive?!"

"As I have said before, Nephew, the answer to eternal life is unlife," Mavros said. "With help from Lord Morte, I have now found life in Death!"

"What is the meaning of this?!" Kain suddenly exploded beside Jonathan, his red eyes blazing with rage. "That pathetic imitation of a Vampire is your uncle, Jonathan?! Explain yourself!"

After the initial moment of shock, the reality began to sink into Jonathan's mind. He realized that Mavros had become a False Vampire, completely forsaking his original race. Strangely, Jonathan felt no anger, no hatred. He only felt apathy and contempt. "No, Kain, he is not my uncle," Jonathan said emotionlessly. "He is nothing but a corrupted soul of undead."

"Ha ha ha ha ha ha!" Mavros laughed maniacally. "Deny it all you want, Nephew, but I am still the uncle you once admired!" Twisting his deathly pale face into a grotesque sneer, Mavros raised his bone saber. "But too bad, Nephew. Lord Morte has ordered me to terminate you, and thus I will have to rescind the offer I had given you to join me in unlife."

If it was before, Mavros would have sent Jonathan into a berserk rage with those few lines, but not today. The Mavros standing before Jonathan had no more ties with Darkness, and no more affiliations with Jonathan. He was no longer Jonathan's uncle. He was the enemy, nothing more. "Silence, imitator," Jonathan looked at Mavros coldly. "By the name of Incarnate, and the Vampiric race, I shall banish your soul to the Abyss for eternity."

Mavros's right eyebrow twitched. "You can try, Nephew!" He shouted. "Destroy them!"

The two dozens or so False Vampires immediately cast bolts of poison and death, but they were already too late. The third eye on Jonathan's forehead had opened, and the obsidian demonic mask materialized in an instant and was already morphing into the black war helm. The shadows beneath Jonathan's feet twisted and contorted, then turned pitch black; they formed a solid circle of darkness, protecting Nyxia and Kain. All bolts of Death energy intruding into the zone of darkness instantly turned black, dissipated and was assimilated into the shadows.

"Learned a few new tricks, eh Nephew?" Mavros cackled. Jonathan said nothing, and simply looked at him with cold, blood-red eyes. For an instant Mavros shuddered, but he immediately regained his demented appearance. He plunged his sword into the ground, and the other False Vampires did the same. Then, there came a cacophony of tortured moans, as the restless undead were pulled out of the depths of the marsh. Numerous skeletons, of humans and beasts alike, burst out of the muddy, toxic ground, and walked toward Jonathan.

Jonathan simply stood there, proceeding with his transformation. Nyxia and Kain raised their weapons, ready to defend themselves, but that proved to be unnecessary. As soon as the first skeleton stepped into the zone of darkness beneath its feet, it collapsed back into a pile of lifeless bone, as the Death elemental energy animating it was transformed into Darkness and absorbed.

In the center of the black shadows, Jonathan changed. He now resembled a humanoid black dragon, over two meters tall, limbs ripping with powerful muscles and protected by obsidian scales. The black war helm was now transformed into the head of a vicious black dragon with three blood-red eyes, and sanguine fire leaked from his razor-sharp fangs. He was no longer holding the Vampire Gladius, but the Soul Eater. "I have learned more than just a few tricks, Mavros," Jonathan/Bloodshadow spoke. His voice echoed in every corner of darkness.

Beside him, Kain's eyes widened while Nyxia smiled in triumph. Nyxia had seen Jonathan's humanoid dragon form from his memories, but Kain only witnessed that demonic beast for the first time. "Quit gaping like a fool," Nyxia gently slapped Kain on the shoulder. "We've got a battle to fight."

Gathering power to themselves, Nyxia and Kain began their own transformations.


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Re: Elements RPG! Part 3 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=6743.msg83626#msg83626
« Reply #250 on: June 06, 2010, 04:41:16 am »
"Good job love!" Xanriel smiles, running to Sirenes and picking her up, kissing her deeply, "I told you your powers would get stronger, subtlety, that's the key!" He laughs, holding her tightly.

"I want you to meet someone," Xanriel held Sirenes's arm and took her too Catyrael, smiling broadly, "This is Sirenes, Lucius's daughter. I'm not sure how exactly, but you can see it in her."

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Re: Elements RPG! Part 3 https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=6743.msg83644#msg83644
« Reply #251 on: June 06, 2010, 05:33:51 am »
I'm done my part, but the fight is not finished yet.

Do the Nymphs have any sort of powered-up forms? Maybe something like a Muse? I'll see if you guys have any suggestions. If not, then I'll simply let Nyxia use the demonic and vampire blood she sucked from Jonathan to transform into some sort of Nymph-Succubus demoness or something like that.

But if Nyxia was to do that... Then I'll need to turn her into something different when she's brainwashed by Malcolm. I don't really like the idea of Malcolm turning the Nymphs into other, lesser species, so maybe Malcolm could corrupt the Nymphs with Void powers and turn them all into some other species?
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