Alright, haven't had time to read page 56-57, I'm just going to say I'm against a gay character, but Optimalist, you can do what you will I guess.
I'm going on vacation tomorrow, so I'm going to attempt to finish up (and start
) Dorfl's fight now.
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Dorfl strode into the arena and saw Jonathan fighting Kain, they had both changed, Jonathan into a black demon form, Kaim into an inverted red one. As the Vampyre flew up and assailed His superior with bats, A large, hulking demon sidled up to him, waling like an ape on all fours.
"Der master sez I wuz ta
eat yoo" It said, gnashing and glaring at Dorfl, sizing him up.
"Really? I'd imagine rocks don't taste too good."
The demon's forehead creased as he attempted to understand what Dorfl had just said. For some reason, this rock was saying it wouldn't taste good. But it didn't matter, Incarnate had promised him a flock of cows should he win, and he liked cows.
"Yur a smart wun, I dun like dat. Smart wuns is always tryin' ta make fun of me," And his muscles bunched as he poised to leap. "I took care of
dem, do, just like ima take car' of yoo! Get in mah belleh!" Roared the demon, whose name was Tostus, although this is irrelevant.
Out of the corner of his eye, Dorfl say Jonathan and Kain become covered with a red mist, and realized that it probably wouldn't be a good idea to get near it.
He conentrated for a moment, and time seemed to slow. He opened his eyes, and raised a palm, bringing up the earth around him in an impenetrable dome. Tostus smashed into it headfirst, his jaws gaping open.
To his credit, it actually cracked. But Dorfl thrust out with his still outstretched hand, and the wall exploded into fragments, blasting the demon against the far wall, knocking the wind out of him.
Dorfl swung up his arm again, and the expanding mist stopped approaching them, but still followed along in a long curve, every paritcle that tried to enter was burned up in less than a second by the massive heat he was exerting. After all, the crowd was here for a show. Dorfl planned to give them one, regardless of the fact that they couldn't see him.
He rushed at Tostus, and was about to drive his fist into the demon's chest when his massive fist suddenly closed over his, and he looked up at him, showing his teeth. There were a lot of them.
"Nice trik...yoove got there...rocky," He wheezed, tightening his grip and standing up, Dorfl was forced to the ground as he used him to get up. Tostus was heavy, and he was stupid, but he was incredibly strong.
The brute stood, towering over Dorfl. He shot out his other arm, holding Dorfl's sizeable fist like an acorn, and
squeezed.
Then things got a bit complicated. In order of events, it happened like this:
Dorfl's right arm exploded, molten shrapnel pierced Tostus's hand, he screamed, the heat barrier broke, Dorfl recoiled, his hand spurting magma, Tostus jumped back as well, still screaming, Dorfl took hold of the lava, Tostus saw a figure leap towards him at head height (About 13 feet), and Dorfl stabbed him in the chest.
Doesn't look like I'll get a chance to finish this, just drag Dorfl around for the rest of the week and I'll try to catch up when I get back.
